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by perseus
Thu Apr 25, 2024 10:45 pm
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Re: Girls's don't need modesty: The Doctor Visit part 1

I swear it's like some of you are reading my mind :lol:. I'll just say that some of you will be pretty happy with the next few chapters :D
by mikewozere
Sun May 05, 2024 8:29 am
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Re: Young Lady

Great story and well written.
I like your use of italicised sections.
by TeenFan
Sun May 05, 2024 10:33 am
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Re: Susan's Shadow

An author (Sue DeNym) writing about a writer (Susan), who comes up with a character (Christine), who is scared of the Shadowman and hears a girl (Jennifer) tell a terrifying tale about being snatched off the street. Very complex and superbly written. Reminds me of Stephen King novels where his main ...
by Skylar21
Sun May 05, 2024 4:39 pm
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Re: Young Lady

So great to see a new post from you. :!: :) Your stories are so well written and engaging. I like where this story may be going; a battle between the young girl and the old man. Lots of potential for her to be humiliated by other people, and she having to relate to them. I look forward to future ins...
by Skylar21
Sun May 05, 2024 4:53 pm
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Re: Susan's Shadow

I like the tone of this story. Rather like two narratives going on at once. Always a pleasure to read your stories, some of the best writing around. :)

Thanks.
by perseus
Wed May 08, 2024 12:50 am
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Re: Susan's Shadow

So glad to see that you're back at writing! I can't wait to dive into your stories again!
by perseus
Thu May 09, 2024 9:24 pm
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Girls's don't need modesty: The Doctor Visit Part 2

Dr. Wayne Pulaski had not expected the sight he saw when he entered the exam room; in fact, it was the last thing he expected to see. When he was informed by his nurse that there was only one gown left for the two young patients he was seeing that day, he had expected a number of possibilities. The ...
by Skylar21
Fri May 10, 2024 4:38 pm
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Re: Girls's don't need modesty: The Doctor Visit (Part 2 5/9)

Poor Becca, her situation goes from bad to very bad! :lol: So far she hasn't seen anything of Pete, but he's already seen it all of Becca, and the exams have only begun. ;) Its great that the doctor has sort of an old score to even out relative to his own childhood embarrassment, making life miserab...
by superevil7
Sat May 11, 2024 6:52 am
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Re: Young Lady

Awesome start to your new story Sue DeNym! I hope you are foreshadowing Marisa ending up naked in front of many, many boys she knows, and her brother too! Maybe she'll even face another spanking from Mr Barlow, this time with the boys watching as it happens :mrgreen:
by Luca
Sat May 11, 2024 8:00 am
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Re: Young Lady

Great start, with many expectative.