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- Sun May 12, 2024 8:24 pm
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Re: Young Lady
I have to honestly say that this is completely my taste. The protagonist is totally mine, as is the story itself and the many teased opportunities for humiliation. I'm really looking forward to a sequel.
- Thu May 16, 2024 1:15 am
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Girls's don't need modesty: The Doctor Visit Part 3
Becca was in shock as her mom dragged her out into the hallway. The exam room was also near the lobby; lucky for Becca, the door was closed, but she could still hear people talking in the busy lobby. “I don’t know what's gotten into you today, but you are grounded!” “Mom! Please! I’m naked! I can’t ...
- Sat May 18, 2024 3:11 pm
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Re: Young Lady
Oh this is lovely!
For some reason, it's reminding me of Ghibli's 'Whisper of the Heart.'
I wish I could do character interactions like yours. You're making me feel like I'm retarded as a writer. Aka intensely envious.
For some reason, it's reminding me of Ghibli's 'Whisper of the Heart.'
I wish I could do character interactions like yours. You're making me feel like I'm retarded as a writer. Aka intensely envious.
- Sat May 18, 2024 4:02 pm
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Re: Young Lady
I'm really positively surprised. :D I like how you give the characters depth and don't immediately drift completely into pornography. This in itself makes the entire plot more meaningful and you get more involved with the characters. I liked how you let Marisa and Mr. Barlowe show different sides of...
- Sun May 19, 2024 7:36 am
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Re: Young Lady
I'm also curious how Riley wants to get revenge on Marisa. Will he torture Marisa and not just beat her ass? I'm personally a fan of orgasm denial ;) , but that's your story. I'm not sure it's revenge that Riley has in mind. Something more surprising and mature, I suspect. Another fan of orgasm den...
- Sun May 19, 2024 4:54 pm
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Re: Young Lady
Oh my! what a way to end a chapter! At the hands of someone she insulted, and the imminent arrival of another who hates her, all the while naked and tied! ;) :twisted: This is really taking shape. As usual, your writing is wonderful and evocative. With much anticipation I await your next chapter. :)
- Sun May 19, 2024 8:45 pm
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Re: Young Lady
Good story can’t wait for more
- Wed Jun 26, 2024 5:38 am
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Girls's don't need modesty: The Doctor Visit part 4
“Did you hear me, Becca? If you would turn over for me, please, I can see the mole better from that angle.” Dr. Pulaski asked her again. Becca was nervous; she couldn’t turn over and get on her hands and knees like he was asking. In that position, she would feel more vulnerable than she already was,...
- Fri Jul 12, 2024 5:06 am
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Camp Valiance (Chapter 2 - July 29)
Camp Valiance Synopsis Three teenage siblings are invited to attend Camp Valiance for two weeks, where male chauvinism reigns supreme. How will 15-year-old Danielle, and 14-year-old Bethany navigate their way through this difficult camp, while having to attend in the nude along with 6 other teenage...
- Fri Jul 12, 2024 5:07 am
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Camp Valiance - Chapter 1
Chapter 1 “Dr. Richardson, it's an honor.” “Please, the pleasure is all mine. You have a lovely home.” Dr. Richardson said, removing his overcoat, before taking the seat offered by the young couple. “Would you like something to drink? Or how about a snack?” “That's quite alright, thank you.” The do...