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I'm really positively surprised. :D I like how you give the characters depth and don't immediately drift completely into pornography. This in itself makes the entire plot more meaningful and you get more involved with the characters. I liked how you let Marisa and Mr. Barlowe show different sides of ...

I'm also curious how Riley wants to get revenge on Marisa. Will he torture Marisa and not just beat her ass? I'm personally a fan of orgasm denial ;) , but that's your story.

I'm not sure it's revenge that Riley has in mind. Something more surprising and mature, I suspect.
Another fan of orgasm ...

Oh my! what a way to end a chapter! At the hands of someone she insulted, and the imminent arrival of another who hates her, all the while naked and tied! ;) :twisted:

This is really taking shape.

As usual, your writing is wonderful and evocative. With much anticipation I await your next chapter ...

Good story can’t wait for more

“Did you hear me, Becca? If you would turn over for me, please, I can see the mole better from that angle.” Dr. Pulaski asked her again.

Becca was nervous; she couldn’t turn over and get on her hands and knees like he was asking. In that position, she would feel more vulnerable than she already ...

Camp Valiance

Synopsis
Three teenage siblings are invited to attend Camp Valiance for two weeks, where male chauvinism reigns supreme. How will 15-year-old Danielle, and 14-year-old Bethany navigate their way through this difficult camp, while having to attend in the nude along with 6 other ...

Chapter 1

“Dr. Richardson, it's an honor.”

“Please, the pleasure is all mine. You have a lovely home.” Dr. Richardson said, removing his overcoat, before taking the seat offered by the young couple.

“Would you like something to drink? Or how about a snack?”

“That's quite alright, thank you ...

Chapter 2

“Hey Alex…”

“Hey Beth.” After Dr. Richardson had told the boys to find their cabin mates, Alex had headed straight for Bethany. He was in the position of already being best friends with two of his bunk mates, Bethany and Erin, so that part was easy. The part he was finding difficult ...

Summary :

There is no overarching theme here, really, just a series of short stories from my imagination, and that of two of my closest friends. I hope you enjoy them, and I welcome any feedback.


Contents :

1. Miss Lovelace Takes Charge
2. A Stacked Deck
3. Vignette - Why Was It A Great ...

1. Miss Lovelace Takes Charge

There was a buzz going up and down the hallways. By now, all of the students had heard.

Gideon Wells, the school's resident would-be Casanova, had gotten caught in the girls' locker room, peeping at Jasmine Scott, who was widely regarded as the most gorgeous girl in ...