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CityWolf wrote: Tue Oct 04, 2022 11:07 pm Change the "curtain" to a hard door. She could use the curtain for covering.

Just a suggestion.

Agreed. That would take away the potential for coverage and increase the tension in the story, which btw, is marvelous so far.

Hooked6

I have always been a lover of the classic arts! Loved the embedded rhyming in the story. Fun read to be sure!

Hooked6

I can't tell you how pleased I am to see another chapter of this most excellent story. My sincere hope is that you don't feel pressure to rush this epic tale to a premature conclusion just to get it off your desk. It would be better to put the story on hiatus until inspiration strikes again rather ...

I appreciate the effort put into the story but personally I find it in rather poor taste as there are real people dying, being raped and starved to death in a real war in that very country at the time of your post. It is hard to see the eroticism of your story whose aim is to provide jack-off ...

Chess Club was never like this when I was in school. :lol:

Great set-up and the way you set up the characters Alex and Julia was priceless as I can almost hear Alex's frustration as she repeatedly cried out "JULIA!!" as her friend continued to make blunders throughout the game. Nicely written ...

Thanks, MelodyYuri, for another marvelous rendition of my story Cowboys and Indians. I never get tired of reading ENF versions of this story and yours was well-written.

It is true that another author, SDS, has started an ENF version of this story (see link above) but I believe in the next chapter ...

Incredibly well-written and erotic chapter! I love your writing style allowing the personalities of each character to slowly be revealed as the action develops. The little details about clothing, restaurants, facial expressions described with perfect detail that you sprinkle throughout the various ...

CaughtOfLore wrote: Mon May 22, 2023 9:44 am

All this enthusiasm is very much appreciated though, and definitely drives me when I do get to sit down to write.

Best news I have heard in a long time!!! Here's some more inspiration.

Hooked6

Any chance of continuing this marvelous story? The over all story arc is very creative and I'd love to see Ella experience more humiliation and "babying" at the hands of the girls, her sister and the doddering aunt. You have a gift for writing stories like this and as evidenced by your fans here you ...

Fascinating story! Not only have you managed to write a book containing very vivid scenes of erotica, containing ENF, EMB, humiliation and the like, but there is a certain element of mystery here drawing the reader in to want to know more about Annie (Sophie) and what more may be going on with her ...