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This post was late in coming but I just HAD to thank you for inserting the images of the cards drawn into the story. I personally think it is not only visually attractive, it increases the tension in the story as well. Nice concept.

Looking forward to more!!

Hooked6

I think your approach of keeping physical characteristics to a minimum is a good idea. In thirty years of writing erotica I can tell you that the moment I include a detailed description of a character (characters) I immediately turn off half or usually more of my readers. I used to get flooded with...

Crossroads wrote: ↑Thu Jan 13, 2022 8:27 am Do we need to organise a search party for Julie? She was last seen nearly 3 months ago and is desperately missed. If you know her whereabouts, please bring her home.

ROFL Nice comment. I'll volunteer for the search party.

Magnificent dog collar scene. The humiliation is palpable! In fact the entire story is full of interesting scenes. Can't wait for more.

Hooked6

Well done. Debbifan. I very much enjoyed the creative poses and the double exposure (for the calendar AND the more secretive exposure for George and his friends, which I thought added a lot to the story.)

Great stuff here.

Hooked6

Just re-read the entire story, up to chapter 4 arc 2, and a thought occurred to me after finishing this for the second time so I thought I'd share this by way of feedback. Your story combines both female and male antagonists - each pursuing a different track yet their actions are certainly within th...

Wonderful story! Your writing style is superb and kept me riveted throughout the entire post. I am eagerly looking forward to see what happens next.

Hooked6

AWESOME!! Another story from one if my favorite authors!! Are you posting anywhere else CaughtOfLore? Just curious as to where you've been hiding. I do hope there is more to this marvelous story! You clearly write ENF stories just as well as your ENM stories. The tension and excitement which are tra...

Also the fear of getting naked as hostage can be a better idea for your next story. I would really have to think about the hostage angle for a bit. I won’t write a rape story, so I’ll need to figure out a reason that the hostages would be forced to get naked. I am not advocating for or against Guru...

I loved the story and I didn't think it abusive at all. It was the perfect combination of humiliation, pet play fetish and recovery. I found the entire plot most enjoyable. Not every story will please all readers as everyone has his/her own tastes. Don't stress over the criticism of the story being ...