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DrWhoFanJ wrote: ↑Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:15 am If I may make a prediction about the future journey of this story...

Oh. Jeez...

I almost want to ask you to delete that comment....

Congratulations, that is more or less exactly how the finale of this story was going to eventuate!

Uhh....

Wow. I'm at a loss for words...

In my experience in ENF writing, usually when somebody made a prediction/suggestion about one of my stories it wound up being WILDLY incorrect. I don't know why, but often I get guesses that dramatically break from the characters in the story (Like turning kind characters mean). There's only been a ...

So something about me that probably nobody here knows is that I am half-deaf and my hearing sucks. It's a genetic issue that runs through my family, so my level of hearing is "normal" to me and I've been this way since birth. I don't use a hearing aid and communicate just fine, but things...

You’re right, I did figuratively and literally provide a shopping list for the reader. I guess I just didn’t realise how obvious the next steps and subsequent escalation of events would be to the reader. I’m taking this all on as constructive feedback, and hopefully I can fine-tune some of these thi...

A nice beginning. The story begs a return to the gym and locker ever day at 9 am. I wonder if she cleans the shower stalls at times as well.

My name is Sarah. I’ve always been pretty Conservative about my body and shy to be seen even in my underwear or bikini. One day I was swimming with my friend Millie in her swimming pool. Speaking of Millie, she has always been the cool, extroverted type girl who always believes in You Only Live Once...

Word had spread quickly about April's punishment and a small crowd was already waiting. With April in the middle the the two grinning girls easily pulled her out into the daylight. She was blushing profusely not wanting to make eye contact with her laughing schoolmates as she was pulled forward. She...

I felt a wave of tingling all over my body as I started screaming. My face (and maybe my whole body) turned to a shade of pink. I watched Millie giving me a wicked grin while subtly biting her bottom lip. She held my hands above my head and slid my top up my hands, and off me. “There you go, honey. ...

Great writing.
Would have loved it if she'd been dragged out of the tent naked in front of the workers

By the way, does anybody know what the "Add Friend / Add Foe" feature does? Add Foe blocks someone and hides all of their posts for you. I think Add Friend gives you notifications every time someone posts, but I haven't messed with it. It's more intended for PHP boards with significantly ...