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Chapter One - Part One


“Obviously we can’t make anyone participate without risking a harassment suit. So without at least one volunteer, I have had to table the idea despite it being the bur in everyone’s saddle.” Joanna said. “I know it would work; I just wish I could find a single woman as ...

Deleted accurate prediction of the rest of this story!

My best suggestion continue writing the story. Either they find out if it were right/wrong or it is irrelevant to the story, as some details tend to be.

I think this topic would be better suited for the General Discussions thread.

And while I haven't personally written anything on *this* board, I've read and watched enough media to feel like I can comment on the topic.

A story is about the journey not the destination. The readers on the board are ...

DrWhoFanJ wrote: Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:15 am If I may make a prediction about the future journey of this story...

Oh. Jeez...

I almost want to ask you to delete that comment....

Congratulations, that is more or less exactly how the finale of this story was going to eventuate!

Uhh....

Wow. I'm at a loss for words...

In my experience in ENF writing, usually when somebody made a prediction/suggestion about one of my stories it wound up being WILDLY incorrect. I don't know why, but often I get guesses that dramatically break from the characters in the story (Like turning kind characters mean). There's only been a ...

You’re right, I did figuratively and literally provide a shopping list for the reader. I guess I just didn’t realise how obvious the next steps and subsequent escalation of events would be to the reader. I’m taking this all on as constructive feedback, and hopefully I can fine-tune some of these ...

My name is Sarah. I’ve always been pretty Conservative about my body and shy to be seen even in my underwear or bikini.

One day I was swimming with my friend Millie in her swimming pool. Speaking of Millie, she has always been the cool, extroverted type girl who always believes in You Only Live ...

Word had spread quickly about April's punishment and a small crowd was already waiting. With April in the middle the the two grinning girls easily pulled her out into the daylight. She was blushing profusely not wanting to make eye contact with her laughing schoolmates as she was pulled forward. She ...

I felt a wave of tingling all over my body as I started screaming. My face (and maybe my whole body) turned to a shade of pink. I watched Millie giving me a wicked grin while subtly biting her bottom lip.

She held my hands above my head and slid my top up my hands, and off me.

“There you go ...