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by Dormouse
Mon Nov 04, 2024 12:11 pm
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Re: The Odd Couple: Pilot Episode - “The New Arrangement”

I never watched this show so this means nothing to me.
by Dormouse
Tue Nov 19, 2024 11:47 am
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey (trigger warning - underage nudity)

Of course, in the UK, hockey means field hockey. And it's a game associated with girls at school. Indeed, there is a type of schoolgirl story called "jolly hockey sticks". What the girls got up to in the showers, I never found out. :-)
by Dormouse
Tue Nov 26, 2024 12:23 pm
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Re: Nicole Part 3: Literally on Display

I do like stories where the protagonist learns to accept their nudity and starts enjoying it.
by Dormouse
Wed Nov 27, 2024 1:32 pm
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Re: Why do authors seem to treat it as a requirement to use the word "pussy" instead of vagina, vulva, or just genitals?

Well, technically, remembering my O-level biology from many years ago, the vagina is the sheath from the vulva to the womb, the vulva is the external visible part. (Well, OK, visible vulvas are not that common in the street.) For some, the term vulva is too formal, whereas pussy is more what someone ...
by Dormouse
Tue Dec 10, 2024 4:38 pm
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch8 Posted on 12/10/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)

A bit of advice. You really should decide whether you are writing in the present tense or the past tense. Mixing them up just causes confusion.
by Dormouse
Mon Jan 13, 2025 12:27 pm
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Re: The New Girl Isn't Shy (Chapter 7 - posted 1/11/25)

I think this is what's called a toxic relationship.
by Dormouse
Sun Jan 26, 2025 4:33 pm
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Re: The New Girl Isn't Shy (Chapter 10 - posted 1/25/25)

It is apparent that Mina is now enjoying being naked. I actually prefer CNF (Confident Nude Female) to ENF.
by Dormouse
Thu Feb 20, 2025 4:55 pm
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Re: The New Girl Isn't Shy *COMPLETE* (Chapter 17 - posted 2/19/25)

I can't help feeling that is going to be a rocky marriage.