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Actually, bikini comes from the Bikini Atoll, scene of atomic bomb testing in the forties and fifties. It actually means coconut place and the Marshallese name is Pikinni. Apparently, the effect of the swimsuit on men was thought to be like the effects of an atom bomb.

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Yes, I guessed it immediately.

I did something similar on the old ASN story board, only there it was a stage hypnotist playing a trick on an audience member who complained about his act. (And the story ended with the victim still oblivious the next day, and going out for a run.)

To add to that, given the board's raison d'être, it would be a bigger surprise if she was fully clothed the whole time.

Wow! Didn't expect the mass nudity. Nor spending the night with Ada. Now makes me wonder what they got up to.

Sorry, once the control element came to the fore, I lost interest. I prefer stories where the protagonist gets to enjoy nudity. Someone once described my stories as CNF - Confident Nude Female.

I tend to enjoy more where the character is not embarrassed by being naked, actually starts to enjoy it. It's the effect she has on other people that amuses me. Maybe why I enjoy Nude in Public websites - the models all seem to be enjoying themselves.

I did a story on the Naked Fiction Storyboard ...

countrymouse wrote: Wed Apr 13, 2022 7:29 am 3

Berk = C word

Not so much Regency as Cockney rhyming slang, and still very much in use today. It comes from Berkeley Hunt, and is pronounced to rhyme with "kirk".

mikewozere wrote: Tue Apr 12, 2022 9:41 pm Really, you should begin a new paragraph for each new speaker. I find it useful to pay attention to how pro writers handle dialogue in novels

A useful tip. I've been an avid reader all my life and I hope I've worked out how to make my writing work from seeing what others do.

Chapter One - Part One


“Obviously we can’t make anyone participate without risking a harassment suit. So without at least one volunteer, I have had to table the idea despite it being the bur in everyone’s saddle.” Joanna said. “I know it would work; I just wish I could find a single woman as ...

I haven't posted any stories here, but I have on other boards. As it happens, I can't post a story in instalments as I like to go back and polish the story before posting anything. When I start to write a story I have a good idea as to how it will end and just have to fill in the details in the ...