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Re: Almost lost my first story, something else in the works.

Posted: Thu Oct 31, 2019 10:15 pm
by unfair
Great story as always Nikolai, I like the stealing phone and changing password idea, and the revenge was fun.

3 points though:
-I don't understand what you mean by the title? Some context?
-The story repeats from about 3/4 down, mistaken copy paste of some kind (was disappointed there wasn't as much story left as I thought haha)
-The actual stripping and after felt a little rushed.

Re: Almost lost my first story, something else in the works.

Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2022 10:20 am
by Bombasticbagman195
Is it just me or has this story disappeared?

Re: Almost lost my first story, something else in the works.

Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2022 3:20 pm
by TeenFan
This is the "make up your own story" story board.
Since you come up with story yourself, you won't be disappointed in the ending.