Re: Almost lost my first story, something else in the works.
Posted: Thu Oct 31, 2019 10:15 pm
Great story as always Nikolai, I like the stealing phone and changing password idea, and the revenge was fun.
3 points though:
-I don't understand what you mean by the title? Some context?
-The story repeats from about 3/4 down, mistaken copy paste of some kind (was disappointed there wasn't as much story left as I thought haha)
-The actual stripping and after felt a little rushed.
3 points though:
-I don't understand what you mean by the title? Some context?
-The story repeats from about 3/4 down, mistaken copy paste of some kind (was disappointed there wasn't as much story left as I thought haha)
-The actual stripping and after felt a little rushed.