ely wrote: ↑Fri Nov 26, 2021 12:38 am
hi, I just finished reading Private school Private
I'm surprised the whole story ends in this way. I would have ended the series with the arrest for Mr. Clint
Pfft, Albert Clint had the parents' permission to do what he was doing. Besides, he was originally going to be a recurring character of mine considering that he was the secret identity of Executionus, the stripping hero character that I use as my account name. I never ended up posting any of my old Executionus Files on the boards though because the originals were a little rough (and were largely chat roleplays with girls I knew online) and I never got around to remaking them. Too many people kept complaining that this story was too harsh on the stripped teens, even though honestly I didn't go nearly as harsh as several other authors. The actual Executionus Files would've been more extreme because the victims would deserve every ounce of their punishments. There was also a vocal community telling me to focus exclusively on Playville back then, so I did.
The Month's End sequel was originally going to have the next chapter be Lisa coming on to Mr Clint, with him being forced to turn her down as softly as possible while affirming that were he a high schooler himself that he would've been honored to date her. Lisa was going to have slight difficulty accepting that an actual relationship with her principal wasn't possible, but she would come to terms with being friendzoned as his personal assistant by the end of that part. She would really begin to see the true genius in his vision, and would start to allow herself a little perverted joy at the humiliation of her classmates who acted up. After that part concluded, the girl with the lowest grades was going to be absolutely and completely humiliated on stage, ending with her face down, ass up, reaching behind herself to spread her cheeks and lips open wide for the entire student body (and the HD camera for the yearbook).
The ending of that story if I had ever finished it would be Lisa recapping the rest of the year to a friend. She'd explain how after the first month's end that grades improved dramatically, with not one single student scoring below a C. Using Lisa as their advocate, the student body was able to negotiate their way out of future stage punishments as long as no student was failing, with Mr Clint then changing the rules to now mean that ALL failing students would be stripped on stage at the end of every month (but only failing students were in danger anymore). That entire school year saw not one single student drop in grades to an F. Behavior in all areas improved dramatically, parents were thrilled, and the school instantly grew in reputation. All of this proved Mr Clint's system to be a resounding success. After a while, nude punishments became extremely rare instead of common. After only his first year as principal, Mr Clint would leave the school to work as a highly-paid consultant for other troubled schools across the nation, spreading the Executionus Method of discipline from coast to coast.
ely wrote: ↑Fri Nov 26, 2021 12:38 am
I tried to read Jessica Christ, it seemed like my passion because I suffered reading it, and at the time of public hair removal I closed everything. Maybe it would scare me less to see the scariest horror movie in the world than this lol
I'm in shock, lobotomize me now
Haha, and that wasn't even my horror movie story. You should try
Flesh Eaters, my extremely wicked and creepy Halloween story which is probably still my favorite ENF story that I've ever written. Fair warning, it's intended to mix sexy and scary together.
If it makes you feel any better about Jessica Christ, much like the story that it's based on it does have a happy ending.
