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Leon wrote: Preview: Sadistic Life of Unrelenting Terror by Leon

T-boh, this is for you.

Preview

Disclaimer: this story is 100% fictional. Most of the stuff described in this story is illegal. Fantasize to your hearts contempt; just don’t do any of this shit in real life. If you do you may get ...ed in the ass. If you know the difference between fantasy and reality, enjoy. If not… STOP READING RIGHT THE ... NOW AND GET SOME ...ING HELP!

Now that the boring stuff is out of the way, enjoy the preview of Sadistic Life of Unrelenting Terror (title subject to change)

16 year old head cheerleader Lacy Knight gets a call from Mrs. Hunter to watch their children for the weekend. She thinks it’ll be all fun and games since the children are around that age (you choose, 10 and 11 or older, or younger [no younger than 9 and 10]) when they want to be left alone. Having babysat for them before; she knew that John and his older sister Riley liked to stay in their bedrooms. Their younger sister Susie, who was only 3, would present the biggest challenge since she cried whenever no one was paying attention to her. Lacy didn’t mind, she knew she could handle anything. She was wrong.

This story will include;
Blackmail
Stripping
‘Exploring’
‘Experimentation’
Humiliation

This story may include
Sex (haven’t decided yet, leaning towards yes, but no guarantees)
Suggestions by you, the readers

Warning: I am not a professional writer, yet. My writing likely sucks and there will probably be grammatical and spelling errors. If you wish you may point them out, just don’t harp on me or this story may not continue.

Preview
Chapter 0: prelude
Lacy arrives at the Hunter residence. She puts her stuff in the parents’ bedroom and hangs out with Susie in the living room. A while later John and Riley join them as they watch a movie. Everything was going great until after Susie was put to bed. Lacy’s perfect life has gone straight to Hell!

This will probably include pantsing, but not much else.

I expect this to be released before the end of the month. It would’ve been released last weekend but I’ve been so ...ing busy. I still am, but expect this by the 30th. The first chapter should be released before the end of May. That chapter will include stripping, humiliation, and more.

If you have any suggestions for this story feel free to leave a message here. I do not guarantee I will include everything, but I will try so long as the story isn't grossly effected in a negative way.

The title is not concrete, I am open to suggestions.

jimmythehand wrote: Re: Preview: Sadistic Life of Unrelenting Terror by jimmythehand

Without more information all I can say at this point is that the story sounds like something I'll enjoy reading. I personally enjoy bra stuffing being exposed in this type of story and the age and (presumably hot/apparently perfect body) cheerleader status of the protagonist would make it even more appropriate and enjoyable. I won't be offended if you don't include that, of course and will continue to follow this with anticipation. Good luck!

Joshua wrote: Let er rip Leon by Joshua

Leon,
Here's my suggestion. Write what you think think is a hot story and don't worry about people's opinions. Let er rip. It all starts with a good story premise and baby sitting diabolical children is a good start. Go with it. Let er rrrrrip.

Joshua

Andrew wrote: Sounds promising by Andrew

I like the sound of it so far Leon. Just roll with what you personally enjoy writing. For me, babysitting stories are some of the absolute best in the genre, and you seem to have a good base. Just write in your comfort zone about the kinds of events you enjoy in these stories, and I'm sure you'll do great. I eagerly await the 30th to see how it turns out!

Someguy wrote: Great Story by Someguy

this sounds like it could be an amazing story i cant wait, also i think having sex in it would be great. and dont worry to much about spelling errors, as long as the wording is good. ive seen a few stories on here that the wording made no sense and just ruined the whole thing for me.

Janienudiepants wrote: Now the most important part by Janienudiepants

write it from someones point of view, and "person" -- first third or whoever you thing will be the best to tell it...