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Re: The Blinds - Short Story - Update 1-23-25

Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2025 7:07 pm
by Enf_Kink
SixPathsKeyblader wrote: Fri Jan 24, 2025 5:05 pm
Horn-eman000 wrote: Fri Jan 24, 2025 8:30 am I’m sorry, but it would be a lot better if Caylee didn’t get covered in her own piss, or get her hair wet. (Not to mention if any of her piss made it into the toilet before her was pulled off of it, that means her hair is covered in piss too)
I agree. I tend to be grossed out by a lot of toilet related hijinks. Other than that I liked the chapter.
Thank you. Haha. Totally fair. Not my normal thing either, just the visual really made me laugh.

Re: The Blinds - Short Story - Update 1-23-25

Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2025 7:24 pm
by Bucket
Enf_Kink wrote: Fri Jan 24, 2025 7:07 pm
I had a bit of an epiphany of how it could help move the main story along in a way I had not anticipated and rewrote it to fit in. I have a lot of the next chapter of Emma's story written now and looking forward to sharing it.
LOVE to hear This! 😃 As for the bonus story, it was great. Pee kinks are quite fun. I enjoyed this. Nice to have you back writing!

Re: The Blinds - Short Story - Update 1-23-25

Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2025 8:44 pm
by Somebody
That was fantastic. I also agree that it's hard to keep that kind of story going once the nudity has been revealed. The only way around that I've seen, and I wish people would write this kind of thing more, is when psychological methods, hypnosis, or even drugs restore or even enhance the girl's modesty.

Re: The Blinds - Short Story - Update 1-23-25

Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2025 4:26 pm
by Enf_Kink
Bucket wrote: Fri Jan 24, 2025 7:24 pm
Thank you!
Somebody wrote: Fri Jan 24, 2025 8:44 pm That was fantastic. I also agree that it's hard to keep that kind of story going once the nudity has been revealed. The only way around that I've seen, and I wish people would write this kind of thing more, is when psychological methods, hypnosis, or even drugs restore or even enhance the girl's modesty.
Thank you! I believe Literotica used to have quite a few hypnosis type stories similar. Might want to check it out if you haven’t already.

Re: The Blinds - Short Story - Update 1-23-25

Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2025 6:40 pm
by Bucket
Enf_Kink wrote: Sat Jan 25, 2025 4:26 pm
Bucket wrote: Fri Jan 24, 2025 7:24 pm
Thank you!
Somebody wrote: Fri Jan 24, 2025 8:44 pm That was fantastic. I also agree that it's hard to keep that kind of story going once the nudity has been revealed. The only way around that I've seen, and I wish people would write this kind of thing more, is when psychological methods, hypnosis, or even drugs restore or even enhance the girl's modesty.
Thank you! I believe Literotica used to have quite a few hypnosis type stories similar. Might want to check it out if you haven’t already.
I'm... not entirely sure if you intended to quote me, but just thought I'd reply with some sort of acknowledgement nonetheless. ☺

Re: The Blinds - Short Story - Update 1-23-25

Posted: Sun Feb 02, 2025 11:03 pm
by toya
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Re: The Blinds - Short Story - Update 1-23-25

Posted: Mon Feb 03, 2025 1:59 am
by SixPathsKeyblader
toya wrote: Sun Feb 02, 2025 11:03 pm💛
Stop it! Stop spamming threads with your sex site advertisements! You've always got me excited to see that perhaps a story has updated, only to see that it is just some spam!