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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2024 5:00 pm
by jojo12026
Thank you for this amazing tale! Hope to see more from you!
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2024 6:50 pm
by SixPathsKeyblader
I enjoyed this story. I must say that I am surprised that they managed to go the whole story without any controversy. Like I and others have said: If even one of those pictures were to leak, then the coach could have gotten into some massive trouble.
Also, a funny note: This story is in the ENF section, but it was more like just NF or UNF (unashamed naked female), because Heather was not at all embarrassed.
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2024 7:00 pm
by tiger_kitten_2025
SixPaths,
I agree, she wasn't really embarrassed but I figured it was a close enough fit to the theme that it might be acceptable to everyone. I considered exploring what happened if they got caught, but I decided I didn't want this story to have dark elements. Maybe a future story might.
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2024 7:26 pm
by Somebody
Super sweetles! I think that was a great ending.
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2024 9:45 pm
by LittleFrieda
tiger_kitten_2025 wrote: Fri Dec 27, 2024 7:00 pm
SixPaths,
I agree,
she wasn't really embarrassed but I figured it was a close enough fit to the theme that it might be acceptable to everyone. I considered exploring what happened if they got caught, but I decided I didn't want this story to have dark elements. Maybe a future story might.
My favorite kind of story. The only place I have seen where your work would fit right in was Indian Outlaw's place ... gone about a decade now.
Thanks.
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2024 10:32 pm
by tiger_kitten_2025
LittleFrieda,
I think I remember that site. I always enjoyed this one before it became defunct too l, sadly.
https://southerncomfortrpg.weebly.com/index.html
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Sat Dec 28, 2024 1:50 am
by MaireadM
Fine story.
You decision to stop was correct.
Looking forward to more writing from you.
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Sat Dec 28, 2024 3:48 am
by Freesub
The onset of puberty was my favourite age for sure.
Overall, excellent story, though episodic in style.
I'm interested to see what your next project will be. Maybe one with multiple girls and fewer guys this time?
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Sat Dec 28, 2024 4:42 am
by KnightMan
I love this story. Every part of it. I'm curious, while you were writing, did you ever picture yourself in Heathers place? I think writing gives us a chance to live out our fantasies in a safe environment. Well done and I hope to see more of your work.
KnighMan
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Final Chaper Posted on 12/27/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Posted: Sat Dec 28, 2024 12:00 pm
by tiger_kitten_2025
KnightMan,
I always picture myself in my stories. If I write something, it will always have a character named Heather, because that's me. I use writing to explore things that could have happened to a younger me although in actual reality nothing particularly exciting ever happened to me.