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Great story! I really like how you manage to keep her innocence and embarrassment despite the multiple escalating situations. Many stories lose this and ramble too long after completion.

SDS wrote: ↑Wed Dec 14, 2022 9:59 am Great story! I really like how you manage to keep her innocence and embarrassment despite the multiple escalating situations. Many stories lose this and ramble too long after completion.

Wow, that is high praise coming from a legend like yourself! There are two cadences of escalation happening at the same time. I have put great care into trying to balance both. The first is steeper and appears to reset at the end of each chapter. The second is overarching and meant to be much more subtle. But each chapter starts a little higher up the mountain than the one before it because even though it appears that everything had reset, something has always changed which allows another layer to be added. This gradual escalation is what's really driving the plot towards its ultimate destination.

Absolutely my favorite series EVER! Keep it up. Cant wait for more...

jojo12026 wrote: ↑Sun Jan 01, 2023 3:31 am Absolutely my favorite series EVER! Keep it up. Cant wait for more...

Thanks. With all the posts to The Lost Swimsuit Saga lately, there have been no updates to the main story for a while. So, here is a sneak peek at the next few chapter names (with a shout-out to TeenFan for suggesting an enm chapter).

Chapter 12 - My Nightmare
Chapter 13 - Oops!
Chapter 14 - Hardship Study Buddy
Chapter 15 - Mikey Gets a Dare

Wow. I'm honored.
To have even a very small part in the development of this great series make me happy.

neverdoubted wrote: ↑Sun Jan 01, 2023 6:26 pm

jojo12026 wrote: ↑Sun Jan 01, 2023 3:31 am Absolutely my favorite series EVER! Keep it up. Cant wait for more...

Thanks. With all the posts to The Lost Swimsuit Saga lately, there have been no updates to the main story for a while. So, here is a sneak peek at the next few chapter names (with a shout-out to TeenFan for suggesting an enm chapter).

Chapter 12 - My Nightmare
Chapter 13 - Oops!
Chapter 14 - Hardship Study Buddy
Chapter 15 - Mikey Gets a Dare

The enm part will be a seperate chapter I suppose? Or will it be part of the main line?

anthelester121 wrote: ↑Tue Jan 03, 2023 11:02 am

neverdoubted wrote: ↑Sun Jan 01, 2023 6:26 pm

jojo12026 wrote: ↑Sun Jan 01, 2023 3:31 am Absolutely my favorite series EVER! Keep it up. Cant wait for more...

Thanks. With all the posts to The Lost Swimsuit Saga lately, there have been no updates to the main story for a while. So, here is a sneak peek at the next few chapter names (with a shout-out to TeenFan for suggesting an enm chapter).

Chapter 12 - My Nightmare
Chapter 13 - Oops!
Chapter 14 - Hardship Study Buddy
Chapter 15 - Mikey Gets a Dare

The enm part will be a seperate chapter I suppose? Or will it be part of the main line?

Good question. I was planning to make it part of the main story, Chapter 15. But, I think it could stand on its own. What do you think would be better?

Been lurking and following your story ardently. Thank you so much for your wonderful work. Really like your style. Hope to see many more from you (also the completion of thornwood series, that was just, way too good).
And as a reader, just my 2 cents on the new chapters, I think if it can stand on its own, and since there are seperate sections already, it only makes sense for an enm chapter to be a seperate part.
Thanks again and best of luck!

doubledare22 wrote: ↑Wed Jan 04, 2023 4:40 pm Been lurking and following your story ardently. Thank you so much for your wonderful work. Really like your style. Hope to see many more from you (also the completion of thornwood series, that was just, way too good).
And as a reader, just my 2 cents on the new chapters, I think if it can stand on its own, and since there are seperate sections already, it only makes sense for an enm chapter to be a seperate part.
Thanks again and best of luck!

I think I agree, a standalone part seems like a better idea to me. But of course, do what you think will be best. Good luck!

I also want to thank you for your incredible stories. Normally I’m just a reader but when I saw that you are ribeye I had to register me to thank you.
You have an incredible writing style. You write so perfectly that I could imagine all the things like I would be there.

Also I have one question or suggestion. (Hope that is okay, you can ignore it if you don’t want)
One thing I really loved in Thornwood were the limited clothes options Rachel had. Okay I have to say, I’m an ENF fan who likes more the thrilling effect of exposing degrading clothes than complete nude, so that’s a bias
But there is a difference between the embarrassment in the actual situation but also the ongoing humiliation in the background. In Thornwood you had both. The embarrassing situation and the ongoing humiliation that she always only could choose between three different exposing outfits and had no money to buy new stuff.
You wrote in Dare me that the family has also not so much money so there would be the possibility to integrate that (for example when Lucy has to go to school).
But again, just a suggestion and not a request.
Hope you continue to write for a long time, it's really cool that you are back