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Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2024 5:25 pm
by perseus
I too would like to know you plan by reading the next chapter
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2024 8:18 pm
by student
" I even have a plan for old, great-uncle Herbert, may he soon rest in peace." (neverdoubted)
Great Uncle Herbert has a Fotomat?
Better yet, Great Uncle Herbert is a professional photographer with his own portrait studio and has an assistant who does hair and make-up for glamor and figure studies?
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2024 11:39 am
by neverdoubted
student wrote: ↑Fri Apr 05, 2024 8:18 pm
" I even have a plan for old, great-uncle Herbert, may he soon rest in peace." (neverdoubted)
Great Uncle Herbert has a Fotomat?
Better yet, Great Uncle Herbert is a professional photographer with his own portrait studio and has an assistant who does hair and make-up for glamor and figure studies?
Not even close
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2024 2:07 pm
by student
Neverdoubted: "Not even close"
Can't win 'em all--but I'll count it as a win when Chapter 7 posts.
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2024 3:24 pm
by jojo12026
This story is delicious. Can't wait for next part!
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2024 9:35 pm
by mikewozere
Looking forward to the next installment.
Even wearing a jacket, Mary will struggle to climb/crawl without revealing herself to other members of the public I imagine
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2024 8:20 pm
by perseus
Can we hope for an update soon?
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2024 4:35 am
by neverdoubted
Maybe tomorrow. Stay tuned.
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2024 9:50 am
by Freesub
I'm never not tuned! It's a daily habit to check now
Re: The Last Straw (new 4/4)
Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2024 12:02 pm
by TwoWeeksAway
This is a thrilling story that keeps the reader engaged from beginning to end. The pacing is perfect, and the unique concept makes it stand out from other stories in this genre. The characters are complex and well-developed, which makes even the most unbelievable events seem realistic and entertaining.
There's so much potential for excitement and danger during this underground exploration, and one idea for the plot could be for our protagonist to get caught wearing the jacket, resulting in an embarrassing punishment that the narrator is invited to witnesses.