Caroline is Confused (Complete)
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Would love to see more Caroline. Especially after roaming the halls naked on the first day of school. I would also like to see how Mom and the teachers interact as adults. Definitely many ways to go from here.
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I am quite late to this story, but I wish to add my tweet to the list. I very much enjoyed reading about Caroline’s embarrassing mistakes. There are so many threads you’ve touched on already and I’d love to see more of them “fleshed out.”
One idea I’d like to see is this: The principal reviews Caroline’s case with the school counselor, who decides that since Caroline seems comfortable being nude at school, she should be allowed to attend class that way as a method to relieve her anxiety.
I like all the other suggestions as well! I know it’s been months since you finished writing this story. But I hope my tardy request is enough to prod you into reopening this storyline.
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Thank you for taking time to share your thoughts. I would have to shift other things down on my writing stack to make room for this. And unfortunately, reader interest in this story continuing has been relatively low.
Based on the current vote, the interest ranking of stories in progress is:
Can't Catch a Break
The Last Straw
Dare Me
Thornwood
Caroline is Confused
Twelve Days
Unless something changes, it's going to be a long time before the rest of her story gets told. But you never know. If enough people feel strongly enough, I would love to share more of Caroline's perilous tale.
Because it feels like I am always starved for feedback, this is valuable to me. To thank you (and others) for taking the time to post, I will share a couple of insights about this story. You are on to something with the anxiety angle. With Caroline's anxiety understandably spiking at school lately, the school counselor does get involved, advising her on various stress-relieving techniques. One in particular, ends up being incredibly effective. I'll let you guess which one
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Outside of school, when she keeps coming home to find her teen daughter completely naked, Diana starts to worry. Turning to a child psychologist friend, she is advised that the young teen is simply working out her independence and coming to terms with her changing body. Despite these questionable clothing choices, Diana hesitantly agrees not to make a big deal out of it for fear of giving her daughter some complex in these critical, formative years. This is inspired by the premise in Hooked6's masterpiece, "The Age of Discovery". Little does she know that what the confused girl really needs right now is a second brain to help her sort everything out and remember to stay dressed!
Based on the current vote, the interest ranking of stories in progress is:
Can't Catch a Break
The Last Straw
Dare Me
Thornwood
Caroline is Confused
Twelve Days
Unless something changes, it's going to be a long time before the rest of her story gets told. But you never know. If enough people feel strongly enough, I would love to share more of Caroline's perilous tale.
Because it feels like I am always starved for feedback, this is valuable to me. To thank you (and others) for taking the time to post, I will share a couple of insights about this story. You are on to something with the anxiety angle. With Caroline's anxiety understandably spiking at school lately, the school counselor does get involved, advising her on various stress-relieving techniques. One in particular, ends up being incredibly effective. I'll let you guess which one

Outside of school, when she keeps coming home to find her teen daughter completely naked, Diana starts to worry. Turning to a child psychologist friend, she is advised that the young teen is simply working out her independence and coming to terms with her changing body. Despite these questionable clothing choices, Diana hesitantly agrees not to make a big deal out of it for fear of giving her daughter some complex in these critical, formative years. This is inspired by the premise in Hooked6's masterpiece, "The Age of Discovery". Little does she know that what the confused girl really needs right now is a second brain to help her sort everything out and remember to stay dressed!
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I personally love Dare Me. I haven't commented because I don't really have any notes. And I didn't realize there was a vote on your site. Whoops.
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That's a bit of a bummer, I really like this story. But I've loved all your stories so far. Especially dare me and thornewood. Hopefully we'll see this one continue one day 

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Re: Caroline is Confused (Complete)
The first two chapters of Episode 2 are already there, if you look around.
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