It must be at the back of his mind but I don't plan on it getting that dark and hope there can be an element of poetic licence as far as any relation to the real world is concerned.
Mystery Email ( Part 59 January 6th )
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Re: Mystery Email ( Part 57 January 4th )
No, let's keep the police out of this. Nobody wants to see Rob arrested and in jail. It will spoil all the fun for the girls and women in this story.
These estate girls are really in control now. I wonder what the sign says that the new girl made and the stuff she brought as well. The leader said they have plenty of time so who knows what will happen and possibly where they'll take him. (that's why they have a sign?) This is really heating up nicely.
These estate girls are really in control now. I wonder what the sign says that the new girl made and the stuff she brought as well. The leader said they have plenty of time so who knows what will happen and possibly where they'll take him. (that's why they have a sign?) This is really heating up nicely.
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Can't wait to see what the sign says and find out what the other stuff she was told to bring is. I have an idea looking forward to seeing if I'm right.
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Re: Mystery Email ( Part 57 January 4th )
Nor do I but it must be in the back of Rob's mind after he hears one of them say: "How's it going to look if we start screaming and the neighbours or any passer-by comes and sees a naked man with a big hard willy chasing us ?Jeepman89 wrote: ↑Sat Jan 04, 2025 2:19 pm No, let's keep the police out of this. Nobody wants to see Rob arrested and in jail. It will spoil all the fun for the girls and women in this story.
These estate girls are really in control now. I wonder what the sign says that the new girl made and the stuff she brought as well. The leader said they have plenty of time so who knows what will happen and possibly where they'll take him. (that's why they have a sign?) This is really heating up nicely.
That is why I said it will take Lexi to think of a way out of this.
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Just my personal opinion but I find stories that stay to a degree within the bounds of the real world more fun to read. What I have really enjoyed about this story is even though no one in the real world would ever let a teenage girl control them like Lexie does Rob you have written the characters and situations so well that you can see how it could happen and why he would do these things and think it's not that far fetched.
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Re: Mystery Email ( Part 57 January 4th )
That's my preference too and has been my intention, so I am gratified if I have succeeded. At least where some readers are concerned I know ENF and ENM situations can and do occur in real life but in the vast majority of those cases, they would be one off incidents and once that incident has been recounted, that's it. So in attempting any long form narrative, there does have to be some degree of suspension of disbelief.Vader wrote: ↑Sat Jan 04, 2025 4:52 pm Just my personal opinion but I find stories that stay to a degree within the bounds of the real world more fun to read. What I have really enjoyed about this story is even though no one in the real world would ever let a teenage girl control them like Lexie does Rob you have written the characters and situations so well that you can see how it could happen and why he would do these things and think it's not that far fetched.
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Debbifan, you have made this series very believable for me.
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That is what I have been trying to do in Bad day for a run don't know how successful it has been that is my intention.Debbifan wrote: ↑Sat Jan 04, 2025 5:17 pmThat's my preference too and has been my intention, so I am gratified if I have succeeded. At least where some readers are concerned I know ENF and ENM situations can and do occur in real life but in the vast majority of those cases, they would be one off incidents and once that incident has been recounted, that's it. So in attempting any long form narrative, there does have to be some degree of suspension of disbelief.Vader wrote: ↑Sat Jan 04, 2025 4:52 pm Just my personal opinion but I find stories that stay to a degree within the bounds of the real world more fun to read. What I have really enjoyed about this story is even though no one in the real world would ever let a teenage girl control them like Lexie does Rob you have written the characters and situations so well that you can see how it could happen and why he would do these things and think it's not that far fetched.
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Re: Mystery Email ( Part 58 January 5th )
Part Fifty-Eight
My legs were getting numb. I was still lying on my back on the coffee table, grasping my ankles as close to my shoulder blades as I could manage. The five girls were sitting around me, swigging vodka straight from the bottle. They had found it in my drinks cabinet and had no idea how it was to be consumed. They hadn't yet reached the stage of going clubbing and were totally ignorant of the mysteries of cocktails but they somehow associated vodka with the cool girls that they aspired to become before too long. They were ostensibly supposed to be ignoring me but they kept sneaking glances and collapsing into giggles at the extreme pose they had forced me to assume and the total exposure that it entailed. They began to turn their attention fully back to me.
"I can't believe he's still lying there like that" one of them laughed. "You do realise we can see everything you've got ?" another laughed and I felt the heat rise to my face again. Nothing that had gone before since the day I received that mystery email had caused anything like this level of humiliation. "We should all take selfies with him again while he's in this pose" decided the fifth girl, who had arrived late and so who I happened to know was called Stacey. The other four took up the suggestion eagerly, posing around me and laughing, pointing, flashing peace signs and giving the thumbs up.
"Let's make him dance for us" one of the quieter ones asserted. "Good idea" agreed the ring leader. "OK, you can get up" she instructed me. It was a relief to get off the table and stretch my aching limbs but the prospect of dancing for them did not fill me with any great glee. "Shall we get him to twerk for us Caz ?" suggested one, turning to the ring leader who I now assumed was called Caz. "Nah" Caz decided. "He'd probably be pants at that. I think he should do a chicken dance, anyone could do that !"
I couldn't believe what I was doing. The girls were laughing so much that they could hardly stand, though maybe the vodka had something to do with that too. "That's it, bend those knees, flap those elbows. And don't forget to cluck" Caz demanded, through tears of laughter. And all the while, I was still sporting that wretched erection !
"Alright, that's enough of that" Caz finally announced. "Go and get the sign Stace." Stacey went out to the hall and returned with a large cardboard sheet. "Here you, hold this" Caz instructed, thrusting the sign into my hand. The wording on it was simple enough. 'This is what happens to people who mess with the Estate Girls !!!' No doubt looking suitably shamefaced, I held the sign in front of me as Caz prepared to take yet another photo. "Not like that. Hold it off to one side so that everyone can see your willy" she demanded.
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Caz looked at the resultant photo on her phone. "That'll do" she was satisfied. "Bloke like you must have a good quality printer ?" she asked. "Upstairs" I reluctantly answered. "Right then, upstairs it is" she announced cheerfully. We all traipsed into my bedroom. Caz handed her phone to one of the other girls. "You're the techie. Print that off, biggest size you can get, the quality's pretty good." She turned to me. "Might as well have another nice pose while we're up here. Kneel on the bed and get that ass up in the air !" I began to complain. "Think yourself lucky we ain't going to spank it" Caz replied. I heard more giggling behind me as I took up another what I assumed was highly revealing position.
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It didn't take long for the printer to provide what they wanted but the five girls left me kneeling awkwardly for a few more minutes while they whispered conspiratorially. Then Caz spoke up loudly, "I think it's getting a bit stuffy in here don't you girls ? Time we all went out for a bit of fresh air." Were they going at last, I hoped ? But those hopes were dashed to be replaced by another shock. "And when I say all, I mean all of us. Including our friend here !" as she swotted my upturned ass. "But I can't go outside like this" I protested as I got to my feet. "Oh but you can. And you will" Caz gloated. "Don't worry, we've got transport for you" she added and the other girls collapsed in laughter once again.
My legs were getting numb. I was still lying on my back on the coffee table, grasping my ankles as close to my shoulder blades as I could manage. The five girls were sitting around me, swigging vodka straight from the bottle. They had found it in my drinks cabinet and had no idea how it was to be consumed. They hadn't yet reached the stage of going clubbing and were totally ignorant of the mysteries of cocktails but they somehow associated vodka with the cool girls that they aspired to become before too long. They were ostensibly supposed to be ignoring me but they kept sneaking glances and collapsing into giggles at the extreme pose they had forced me to assume and the total exposure that it entailed. They began to turn their attention fully back to me.
"I can't believe he's still lying there like that" one of them laughed. "You do realise we can see everything you've got ?" another laughed and I felt the heat rise to my face again. Nothing that had gone before since the day I received that mystery email had caused anything like this level of humiliation. "We should all take selfies with him again while he's in this pose" decided the fifth girl, who had arrived late and so who I happened to know was called Stacey. The other four took up the suggestion eagerly, posing around me and laughing, pointing, flashing peace signs and giving the thumbs up.
"Let's make him dance for us" one of the quieter ones asserted. "Good idea" agreed the ring leader. "OK, you can get up" she instructed me. It was a relief to get off the table and stretch my aching limbs but the prospect of dancing for them did not fill me with any great glee. "Shall we get him to twerk for us Caz ?" suggested one, turning to the ring leader who I now assumed was called Caz. "Nah" Caz decided. "He'd probably be pants at that. I think he should do a chicken dance, anyone could do that !"
I couldn't believe what I was doing. The girls were laughing so much that they could hardly stand, though maybe the vodka had something to do with that too. "That's it, bend those knees, flap those elbows. And don't forget to cluck" Caz demanded, through tears of laughter. And all the while, I was still sporting that wretched erection !
"Alright, that's enough of that" Caz finally announced. "Go and get the sign Stace." Stacey went out to the hall and returned with a large cardboard sheet. "Here you, hold this" Caz instructed, thrusting the sign into my hand. The wording on it was simple enough. 'This is what happens to people who mess with the Estate Girls !!!' No doubt looking suitably shamefaced, I held the sign in front of me as Caz prepared to take yet another photo. "Not like that. Hold it off to one side so that everyone can see your willy" she demanded.
https://www.xvideos.com/profiles/enthus ... =2&slide=9
Caz looked at the resultant photo on her phone. "That'll do" she was satisfied. "Bloke like you must have a good quality printer ?" she asked. "Upstairs" I reluctantly answered. "Right then, upstairs it is" she announced cheerfully. We all traipsed into my bedroom. Caz handed her phone to one of the other girls. "You're the techie. Print that off, biggest size you can get, the quality's pretty good." She turned to me. "Might as well have another nice pose while we're up here. Kneel on the bed and get that ass up in the air !" I began to complain. "Think yourself lucky we ain't going to spank it" Caz replied. I heard more giggling behind me as I took up another what I assumed was highly revealing position.
https://www.xvideos.com/profiles/enthus ... =2&slide=7
It didn't take long for the printer to provide what they wanted but the five girls left me kneeling awkwardly for a few more minutes while they whispered conspiratorially. Then Caz spoke up loudly, "I think it's getting a bit stuffy in here don't you girls ? Time we all went out for a bit of fresh air." Were they going at last, I hoped ? But those hopes were dashed to be replaced by another shock. "And when I say all, I mean all of us. Including our friend here !" as she swotted my upturned ass. "But I can't go outside like this" I protested as I got to my feet. "Oh but you can. And you will" Caz gloated. "Don't worry, we've got transport for you" she added and the other girls collapsed in laughter once again.
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Re: Mystery Email ( Part 58 January 5th )
I was a little off about the sign thought it would say Estate Girls bitch kind of suspected they would have transport for poor naked erect Rob. Hi ho hi ho off to the store naked Rob does go. Sounds like this is going one long humiliating journey for Rob.
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