Any ENF stories where the main girl is mute?

[edithdick]

You know, I should have asked, otherwise it's going to drive me nuts - Do you know approximately when you'll post that sample chapter? No pressure whatsoever. It's just, you've now gotten me ridiculously excited to read that chapter!

Just to be clear, the sample chapter won’t be from this story, but an isolated (probably 6-7 page) complete store in the same theme/tone/severity as the one we are talking about. In part this is to not spoil anything and in part because this will be a long draw, that will take me time to build. The sample will be quick in and out .

As to the tineibe, hopefully in the next 2 weeks

[Bucket]

You know, I should have asked, otherwise it's going to drive me nuts - Do you know approximately when you'll post that sample chapter? No pressure whatsoever. It's just, you've now gotten me ridiculously excited to read that chapter!

Just to be clear, the sample chapter won’t be from this story, but an isolated (probably 6-7 page) complete store in the same theme/tone/severity as the one we are talking about. In part this is to not spoil anything and in part because this will be a long draw, that will take me time to build. The sample will be quick in and out .

As to the tineibe, hopefully in the next 2 weeks

No problem and thanks! I very much look foward to it, and am extremely excited for the actually story!

[Dimitrii]

Between mute and girl as a dog reminded me of a story I read about a writer on a tiny private island who isolated himself to write and to separate him from society as his hatred for his ex grew into everyone of the sex. A girl washes up on his beach and he wants nothing to do with her until her desperate behavior has him treating her as a dog and she goes along with it as she has little choice

[Bucket]

Between mute and girl as a dog reminded me of a story I read about a writer on a tiny private island who isolated himself to write and to separate him from society as his hatred for his ex grew into everyone of the sex. A girl washes up on his beach and he wants nothing to do with her until her desperate behavior has him treating her as a dog and she goes along with it as she has little choice

Ooh, that actually sounds quite interesting! Could you drop the link here?

[Bucket]

It makes sense. I appreciate this kind of feedback. My writing is almost entirely done by 'train of thought'. I emotionally connect with the character and write out their perspective as best I can. Your feedback is important because it gives me a chance to see how well I am doing at communicating what the character feels.

I don't actually know how to tag someone in this forum or if you even can without quoting, so just quoting you as a means of tagging lol.

Let me know if it's a bit of a pain when I bring up the mute girl story and I'll stop. It's not my intention to pester you, and definetely don't want you to feel like I'm trying to pressure you, as that's certainly not most all my intention either. (Like I say, take the time you need)

I just had an idea and thought you'd like to hear it. Let me know if you do. If not, that's ok too.

[edithdick]

I don't actually know how to tag someone in this forum or if you even can without quoting, so just quoting you as a means of tagging lol.

Let me know if it's a bit of a pain when I bring up the mute girl story and I'll stop. It's not my intention to pester you, and definetely don't want you to feel like I'm trying to pressure you, as that's certainly not most all my intention either. (Like I say, take the time you need)

I just had an idea and thought you'd like to hear it. Let me know if you do. If not, that's ok too.

No worries, I just finished passing my CCNA exam and am heading out of the country for a week for vacation. When I get back, I’ll have more time to write. Life feels a bit hectic when you’re working 40+ hours and cramming for a test in between.

[Bucket]

I don't actually know how to tag someone in this forum or if you even can without quoting, so just quoting you as a means of tagging lol.

Let me know if it's a bit of a pain when I bring up the mute girl story and I'll stop. It's not my intention to pester you, and definetely don't want you to feel like I'm trying to pressure you, as that's certainly not most all my intention either. (Like I say, take the time you need)

I just had an idea and thought you'd like to hear it. Let me know if you do. If not, that's ok too.

No worries, I just finished passing my CCNA exam and am heading out of the country for a week for vacation. When I get back, I’ll have more time to write. Life feels a bit hectic when you’re working 40+ hours and cramming for a test in between.

Congrats on passing the exams, as well as taking that well deserved vacation!

Excuse my ignorance, but CCNA is IT right?

I know all about being swamped with work and just life in general, so you must be really excited for this vacation! Hope you have a great time!

So I actually had this idea a little while ago, but I didn't want you to think that I'm badgering you, so I just wanted to give you a bit of breathing space before I brought this story up again. (Again, whenever I bring this story up with suggestions/feedback, just know I'll never try to rush or pressure you. I'm very excited about it, sure, but don't want you to feel pressured in any way)

Anyway, I'll stop being apologetic for being so enthusiastic about this story now.

So, you remember how I said that ideally within an erotic story, you want to shake things up a bit in terms of the protagonist's various stages of undress? There's all sorts things you could do, but one thing I was thinking would be incredibly fun would be to have the mute girl have to remain bottomless at home.

Sometimes, if she's really lucky, shes allowed to wear a shirt that covers most of her slit, but no matter how much she DESPERATELY tries to preserve as much modesty as she possibly can by adjusting the shirt, the bottom of her slit remains visible. Other times, she's only allowed to wear a shirt that bares her entire midriff, meaning she's completely nude from her naval down, or maybe her shirt is down to her waist, but her whole slit is still completely visible. (You could also have the "carer"/antagonist tell her to hand over the shirt too on occassion) Then a visitor arrives, and she's squirming like mad to try cover her lower half with the shirt with little to no success.

You could even have a Josh type character that'll keep her so uncomfortable because of her exposure, yet a part of her kind of likes his company (and arouses her too, albeit reluctant arousal, like her body is betraying her) despite her IMMENSE embarrassment.


You can still have plenty of moments of completely nude mute girl of course. It's just that "shaking things up" makes her constant exposure feel fresh. It also serves as way to make the enf never being able to adjust to the constant exposure. That way, when she's given even a shred of hope of covering up, even just her top half, that extreme embarrassment occurs all over again when that hope is removed. It's like a reset for her massive embarrassment when she's then told to take off the shit too. (Or is given an even shorter shirt)

When the protagonist is permanently nude, it kind of gives the girl time to "get used to" the exposure, and the reader kind of gets used to it too. Ideally, you want the girl on edge often from fear of being exposed again. You want to make a point of the girl's intense, devastating embarrassment on a regular basis imo.

With that said, I was very impressed how you managed to make Annie's permanent nudity feel fresh for most of More Therapy. It does make sense that a girl who thinks she's a dog would want to remain nude. Well, Sophie would. Not so much Annie lol. Hopefully Annie begins to feel enormous amounts of intense mortification once she's at school.

You of course don't have to use any of this. Do whatever you feel works. But I do love the whole "her lower half is exposed at home" thing. Maybe if she's REALLY lucky, she gets to briefly wear panties, only to be told "hand over the panties". With great reluctance, the panties are handed over, and are wet from intense arousal. Like she's a reluctant exhibitionist.

Anyway, just wanted to share a few of my thoughts. ☺

[edithdick]

This one is definitely more of a... well, a strange request, but are there any stories out there where the main character is a mute girl?

I know that might be slightly bizarre. Borderline taboo maybe even, but it is what it is.

Thanks.

Just a quick update... I am exploring the main character's background by writing a prequel story from a time when she was not mute... From a story telling purpose, I can't post the prequel anywhere until the main story is written and posted since it would include too many spoilers.

The prequel won't lead into the main story, it is more for background and understanding... By the way, how do you feel about female characters who are compulsively submissive?

[Bucket]

Just a quick update... I am exploring the main character's background by writing a prequel story from a time when she was not mute... From a story telling purpose, I can't post the prequel anywhere until the main story is written and posted since it would include too many spoilers.

The prequel won't lead into the main story, it is more for background and understanding... By the way, how do you feel about female characters who are compulsively submissive?

Oh, very nice. Appreciate the heads up!

How do I feel about female characters who are compulsively submissive? When it's the main character, it's literally my favourite! My favourite stories are about protagonists who are very submissive. The more submissive, the better. I was hoping that's the route you take with this protagonist.

Any idea about a potential release time frame btw? I'm definitely very much looking foward to this story quite a lot!