The New Rules (Chapter 49 - August 11th)

[superevil7]

I never fully understood the lesson for the girls to be learned in this one. Was there one? was it just to be comfortable in their own skin?

It started out as a spinoff from my story "The Right Smartwatch" where Abbie's mom was brainwashed into believing girls are better off naked, and because I wanted to do a FNA style story where the girls are naked.

[EddieDavidson]

Have you seen any NIS stories? Nude in school program?

that's basically the concept behind it is that the Program lessens the likelihood of teen pregnancy because now people are less curious about the body, and so on.

I wrote a 75 chapter story about that, but it's not preachy - however the backdrop is plausibility that most of society accepts public nudity, while quite a few still do not tolerate it, and don't understand it.

I could put that here when I finish if people are interested, but it's more about the Mom entering the Program with her daughter.

[computerphoto]

Have you seen any NIS stories? Nude in school program?

that's basically the concept behind it is that the Program defeats the point of a lot of underage sex, because a lot of it as about taboos and confusion and so by putting out there, and having body positivity it just okay.

I wrote a 75 chapter story about that, but it's not preachy - however the backdrop is plausibility that most of society accepts public nudity, while quite a few still do not tolerate it, and don't understand it.

I could put that here when I finish if people are interested, but it's more about the Mom entering the Program with her daughter.

Yeah I know you done a few NIS stories LOL

NIS: Breeder Program
NIS: Naked in Blue Valley
NIS: Puppy Student Program
NIS: Naked in Summer Camp

The Goldbergs - NIS (Naked in School) Story

Naked on Summer Vacation: Slut Summer School
Naked on Summer Vacation: Sissy Summer School

Naked in the Trailer Park
Naked in the Trailer Park 2
Naked in the Trailer Park 3

[EddieDavidson]

I hope you enjoyed them.

The Goldbergs TV series seemed like the perfect family to embrace NIS. I get a lot of flack for fan fiction, but I just felt like the dynamic of the family with the mother being a "Smother" who would do anything for them, was just too good to pass up. In retrospect, I think I could have made it a little longer.

Some NIS involves corporal punishment version of the Program, where the participants are there as not necessarily volunteers, but as an alternative to discipline. Which at times, I feel defeats the point, because by forcing participation, they aren't really gaining body acceptance, there is some shame involved.

However, it makes a good ENF story. The idea can always be that in reformation of the ideals, it is teaching them valuable life lessons. If everybody is well-adjusted and extroverted- there is no embarrassed, it's just "NF". so there needs to be a balance of characters.

The NIS Blue Valley, was another one like that. I am a big fan of that underrated TV show - DC Girl. It was just so perfect, especially the phallic magic staff she rides around on. I probably could have written that much longer.

My preference is long stories, because when you fall in love with a character and it ends, it's like "So...what happens next?"

That's why NIS Breeder is 75 chapters, and I just published up chapter 62 today. I think it will be a while before I do another one.

I am committed to finishing the Foal story, but I want to do an old fashioned "ENF" story - back to the basics kind of thing. I just haven't made my final decision on the set up. It's nice to be able to brain storm. I don't want to take up this thread with that, but essentially I want to make it extremely plausible, and mostly just about embarrassed nude females around people in clothing. Is there a forum dedicated to story ideas and soliciting suggestions?

I started a thread a while back, but I am not ready to begin writing. I think I still have some thoughts to put together first on the structure. A heartless meanie-butt mommy who insists on teaching her slutty/irresponsible daughters a lesson is a little one dimensional for what I am going for. I think it needs to be a little more organic in how it comes about, with redeemable parents who are not simply plot devices for me.

[LittleFrieda]

Some NIS involves corporal punishment version of the Program, where the participants are there as not necessarily volunteers, but as an alternative to discipline. Which at times, I feel defeats the point, because by forcing participation, they aren't really gaining body acceptance, there is some shame involved.

(This comment is not directed to you) The reluctance of students to go through an NIS program is easy to accept when The Program is first introduced. But hormone addled kids are not fools. With a successful NIS program in full swing, it won't take long for "I get to have full on sex at the start of every class? WHERE DO I SIGN?"

The big downside is for kids like me, who are viewed more like furniture and get no volunteer helpers ... reduced to getting Relief through masturbation. "I can do this at home anytime. I want a girl."

[EddieDavidson]

Not everyone wants to be groped/sex with whomever. In the NIS that I write, there are always limits.

In the latest one, I used a simple "slang" system of Milk, Lemonade and Fudge. If you ask for Milk, it means you want them to touch their nipples and play with them. There is a time limit. Obviously, you can guess what lemonade are fudge for, but "Double Milk" means you can touch (not squeeze/pinch) etc.

It's all about consent in that story, and at the high school level it's much more time than at the college level. I think I painted a fairly believable world.

However, as I say - what I liked about "The New Rules" was the premise that this woman suddenly reads a book by Oprah or gets it in her head;

"Okay Girls, we've got new rules! This is how it's going to be..you'll have to earn your clothes back. If you want to leave the house, you have to ask me. I'll keep them in garbage bags in my room, and when you've (got your grades up/stopped sneaking out/talking back) etc then you can have them back" sort of thing.

That's what I imagined when I first saw the title. That's kind of what has me percolating on a story kind of like that, but not a world where public nudity is acceptable. I want them to be streakers and be really embarrassed about being caught when they decide to sneak out one night.

I used to know a woman when I was growing up, and I remember her inviting me to her house, and it was just her son there, and she goes "OKAY, WHO WANTS TO CLEAN THE HOUSE NAKED!" and strips off, and he strips off, and they start cleaning the house. I was kind of shocked, but the idea being that she liked being nude, and she didn't see it as sexual, it made it easier to get down on the floor and clean.

I didn't get nude though, in fact at the time, I was taken aback by the entire thing. However, she factors into some of the characters that I channel in my story - a happy, upbeat woman who didn't see any problem with it because there really wasn't. She didn't have any illicit plans for me and she wasn't cleaning in a sexy sort of way.