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Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 6:10 am
by Themarble
Amazing return, you've transported us perfectly and it's seamless. Hopefully Mark will be struggling with that erection all day, hopefully we check in in James soon. I wonder how he'd feel going to school in his uniform?
Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 12:36 pm
by NudeBaG
I’m thinking there may be 1-2 day time skip after Mark’s first day alone, just to establish a new ‘normal’ as the story progresses again, and then a few chapters focussing on James and his little sister’s’ first day as a Wicker Creek Middle students
If you read back through the older Halloween chapters where I dropped nuggets about Wicker Creek, I made a change to make things easier on me as the writer

Instead of there being an unbalanced ratio of males to females in Wicker Creek, I changed it to being JUST Mark.
(I think there might have been a REALLY young kid dressed as Iron Man?) I might just write that off as a visitor from another town for trick or treating, (ie, I don’t feel the need to return to him at all

)
In fact, if someone would be so kind as to provide me with the Page Number and Chapter Title so I can go in and edit it, that would be great

otherwise, just mentally write it off lol.
I did feel like introducing a new, younger boy for a change in perspective, as Mark’s story progresses and he becomes accustomed to his ‘permanent’ naked status.
James is where that new focus will be for a little bit

Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 12:51 pm
by Trundle
Really looking forward to a new perspective.
Mark has started to get more used to being naked all the time so some of the shock and shame has gone, it'll be nice to get that back with James. Love to see how he reacts to being without clothes!
Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 1:26 pm
by Jeepman89
So thrilled that NudeBag has taken us back into this Magic World again.
Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 3:06 pm
by NudeBaG
Found the part with the boy dressed as Iron Man.
Simply added some dialogue eluding to the fact he was a cousin of the girls dressed as a skeleton and the girl pirate, and that he was visiting just for Halloween, so that’s taken care of

Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 3:34 pm
by Jeepman89
Hopefully James will have a good sized dick for a 13 yr old.
Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 6:19 pm
by NudeBaG
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Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 6:27 pm
by docknumber
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Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 6:54 pm
by Jeepman89
Ooooops. I meant James.
Re: Magic (New 2-17-2025)
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 7:01 pm
by NudeBaG
Jeepman89 wrote: Tue Feb 18, 2025 3:34 pm
Hopefully James will have a good sized dick for a 13 yr old.
We won’t know until James receives his Official Wicker Creek Middle Boys’ Uniform
