The Prefect

[randomlygenerated]

This is definitely one of your best stories/one of my favorites along with The Debt.

I would like to see more stories like these. The school setting is definitely a good one.

I'm also quite partial to exploring alternative ideas of things. Like, I'd be down to read an alternate short version of the prefect that fits your original idea where Elise is just stripped outside on the bridge.

Regarding the next arc of the Prefect, I personally think a time skip is a good idea, especially if it is conducive to the writing process.

[jastes22]

I definitely enjoyed this story. I think the organic progression of the story has been fun to read. I like the idea of a time skip. I enjoy how Elise does everything to stop something from happening (like losing her skirt) to actually doing it semi-willingly herself.

Two thoughts on ideas. Maybe Kaitlyn continues to hold the pictures over her and has Elise do embarrassing things on campus. Or maybe Melinda gets more involved and becomes more her new master, or even gets some of the other prefects involved.

I also like the idea of Kaitlyn tricking Elise into doing more, like calling her right as she gets to her room so she's technically supposed to be naked but doesn't have time to change. I could imagine a scene where Kaitlyn throws a party at her dorm and has Elise "perform" for them as Kaitlyn's pet.

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Not really creative enough to think of good ideas, but my favorite part was when she got kicked out naked.

[shmeckle]

I especially liked that Elise was always thinking, "I'll just get through this and then later I can fix it," leading her to try to pick the lesser of two evils when Kaitlyn makes her choose. And only to find out she was doing what Kaitlyn wanted all along. She never realizes her "chance to fix it" never comes.

I can imagine her trying to put her foot down at some point, only to have Kaitlyn show her even more scandalous videos that she didn't even know existed.

Her always being nude in her room with the doors unlocked has a lot of potential. Sooner or later someone besides Melanie will come in and see her naked. Is she going to try to convince them she's a nudist? I can see Melanie making it even worse and trying to get the other prefects to support her "nudist lesbian lifestyle."

I can hardly wait to see the next arc.