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Damn cliffhangers

jojo12026 wrote: ↑Fri Jun 14, 2024 5:45 pm Damn cliffhangers

That sneaky SmartWatch seems to be hard at work. Sam and Hope might have turned the tables on Ms. Bruster without the help of the SmartWatch, but it is more probable that Matt was working his magic and compelling Ms. Bruster to tell the truth.

student wrote: ↑Fri Jun 14, 2024 7:09 pm That sneaky SmartWatch seems to be hard at work. Sam and Hope might have turned the tables on Ms. Bruster without the help of the SmartWatch, but it is more probable that Matt was working his magic and compelling Ms. Bruster to tell the truth.

Was Matt even around for that.

That said, I was wondering if Hope would even be able to get dressed with out being instructed to by an authorized person.

student wrote: ↑Fri Jun 14, 2024 7:09 pm That sneaky SmartWatch seems to be hard at work. Sam and Hope might have turned the tables on Ms. Bruster without the help of the SmartWatch, but it is more probable that Matt was working his magic and compelling Ms. Bruster to tell the truth.

Even though this story is a spinoff of The Right Smartwatch, I try to avoid having any sneaky smartwatch usage. Still, some usage has crept in, but it is always the case that Matt is actually present in the scene when that happens; either directly such as him giving Karen control over Hope, or slightly off screen, such as making Vanessa return to math class and strip.

WingDing wrote: ↑Sat Jun 15, 2024 6:47 am Was Matt even around for that.

That said, I was wondering if Hope would even be able to get dressed with out being instructed to by an authorized person.

I don't try to be that sneaky. If the smartwatch is being used for something, then Matt will be present in the scene, even if his actions aren't stated outright.

As for Hope getting dressed when told to, remember that all the commands a girl follows because of the smartwatch are based on how that girl interprets the command. Everyone might have the authority to make her strip naked because of Karen, but someone with authority in her life, such as her parents or her school principal, will probably take priority. She'll get dressed when told to by one of them. You'll notice that Sam was the one asking to be let into the locker room, not Hope.

It's the same reason that Hope can't even come into the Larson house without being naked first. She was told by Karen that she had to follow Mrs Larson's rules explicitly.

Oh, and the smartwatch is tech, not magic.

Superevil says:
As for Hope getting dressed when told to, remember that all the commands a girl follows because of the smartwatch are based on how that girl interprets the command. Everyone might have the authority to make her strip naked because of Karen, but someone with authority in her life, such as her parents or her school principal, will probably take priority. She'll get dressed when told to by one of them. You'll notice that Sam was the one asking to be let into the locker room, not Hope.

It's the same reason that Hope can't even come into the Larson house without being naked first. She was told by Karen that she had to follow Mrs Larson's rules explicitly.

Oh, and the smartwatch is tech, not magic.
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Magic has rules, just like tech--that's why us ignorant monkeys cannot tell the difference. If I read the above right, it was SmartWatch residual and not Matt being present in the moment pulling strings.

Incredible chapter! I loved everything with Sam and Hope in this chapter! I love how Hope attacked Sam's clit and she couldn't get back at her. Everything with the principal was great too! But the highlight for me was everyone in class looking at Sam's privates while she's trying to hold it together in class. The ending was great! I can't wait to see how Sam handles the suggestion to strip! I wish this story would never end

student wrote: ↑Sun Jun 16, 2024 8:53 am Magic has rules, just like tech--that's why us ignorant monkeys cannot tell the difference. If I read the above right, it was SmartWatch residual and not Matt being present in the moment pulling strings.

In this case only Hope is redidualy effected by the watch. None of the other females in this chapter are.

perseus wrote: ↑Mon Jun 17, 2024 4:51 am Incredible chapter! I loved everything with Sam and Hope in this chapter! I love how Hope attacked Sam's clit and she couldn't get back at her. Everything with the principal was great too! But the highlight for me was everyone in class looking at Sam's privates while she's trying to hold it together in class. The ending was great! I can't wait to see how Sam handles the suggestion to strip! I wish this story would never end

With the rate I'm going, you might just get your wish
Thanks for the kind words!

Great story and great characters . I really like it a lot . It has gone on for a really long time and can be a lot at times and so many storylines and characters , but it’s a really good story and I always look forward to seeing what happens next .

It is 48 chapters now . Have you thought of a good ending and conclusion ? Maybe chapter fifty could be a good round number for an ending point . But you are the author , writer and creator so it is your choice .

It’s a great interesting story and your cliffhangers keep me coming back for more . Great job .

Brent Sickel wrote: ↑Tue Jul 09, 2024 3:04 pm It is 48 chapters now . Have you thought of a good ending and conclusion ? Maybe chapter fifty could be a good round number for an ending point . But you are the author , writer and creator so it is your choice .

I do have an ending point in mind, and I've hinted at it in the story, but I'm not sure that I can get to it in 2 chapters, lol.