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Re: Poolside Shenanigans.
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2024 5:21 pm
by TeenFan
That was some interesting backstory about Charlie's sister.
Charlie's friends taking him for a walk. How nice. I'm sure he needs the exercise. If Charlie heads in the wrong direction he comes with
his own leash. Just grab it and pull.
Re: Poolside Shenanigans.
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2024 5:51 pm
by Jeepman89
Awesome chapter. Can't wait to see what happens when he has to do the dare.
Re: Poolside Shenanigans.
Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2024 2:05 pm
by Trundle
Amazing!
The long wait between your stories are always frustrating but then when they are posted it's totally worth the wait. This was as fantastic an update as ever, I always love getting some backstory for the characters.
Left off last time, I went back to catch up, with Charlie having his foreskin pulled back and his Mother potentially about to come into the garden and see him erect for the first time. I loved the detail you go into describing Charlie's panic and anxiety at his situation, it ramps up the drama and reminds the reader of what's at stake. I always like it when the boy is never fully used to being naked.
ENF usually isn't my thing but I really enjoyed this and it was written beautifully. Even though she was mega embarrassed it was also turning her on and she had to try and get relief, even if meant letting her cousins grope her
This backstory gives us insight into why Suzy may be enjoying her brothers humiliation so much, payback. She knows what it's like to be embarrassed and she wants to inflict it on Charlie.
Creepy uncle Simon
Mother making her mind up Charlie will be naked for all future visits from his friends haha, poor Charlie. He has more embarrassment to come I bet. Abigail and Steven working together to throw him under the bus, Steven wanting a little payback for his own humiliation. The shared universe with you and TeenFan is really paying off. Charlie saved by the bell! But who is at the door???
Surely Charlie won't be made to do a front yard walk naked and erect? What will the neighbours think?
Fantastic as always. Cannot wait for the next one!
Re: Poolside Shenanigans.
Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2024 9:08 pm
by DCTreshPender
Please more!
Re: Poolside Shenanigans.
Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2024 10:23 pm
by Supermario17
This story is absolutely amazing so far, hopefully more ASAP