The Ten Commandments of Michelle O’Dell the Irish Girl. Part Un (Part twelve now available)

[Blondie2718]

But a shaving from Andrew could be more intimate (more humiliating) than a waxing at a salon.

I agree. Perhaps with an audience. Someone she knows.

As an aside, the whole angle with the mother is a bit strange. I say this because Andrew was described as a nerd at the beginning and started this endeavor as he had neither the looks nor the confidence to get the girl. So, for the mother to suddenly lust after him seems a bit incongruent. Perhaps a different motivation might be worth considering? For instance, suppose she is more focused on her promoting her daughter's body confidence and teaching her humility. Her interest in Andrew may not be prurient, but perhaps educational, ensure that she trains him to treat her daughter right. That would fit the initial character of Andrew and leave open a bunch of possibilities. Thoughts?

[Revengedpirate]

I’ve thought along the lines of the mother and daughters as a dream scenario where Andrew is dreaming. Though the possibility of having the mum treat them as a couple in training seems doable to. The mum could also provide a way in for both characters. Both Andrew and Michelle walk in each other’s opposite shoes. She becomes the nerd he becomes more popular as he exposes Michelle’s weaknesses