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Re: The Right Smartwatch [Through Chapter 9]

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It occured to me, even when I originally read the story a few years ago, in Chapter 4 the order he thinks would release Jenny from Karen's control, might not have been specific enough to do so.

I would like to know if this was intentional, and ask if you intend to, beyond the spin-off, add more chapters.
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Re: The Right Smartwatch [Through Chapter 9]

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clockspinning wrote: Sat Jul 02, 2022 5:17 am It occured to me, even when I originally read the story a few years ago, in Chapter 4 the order he thinks would release Jenny from Karen's control, might not have been specific enough to do so.

I would like to know if this was intentional, and ask if you intend to, beyond the spin-off, add more chapters.
It was meant to release Jenny from Karen's control, yes. I am curious why you feel like it wasn't specific enough.

I get that question a lot, if I am going to do more chapters. I make no promises, but I think that I would like to do a full sequel story for this.
I would do my best to keep a similar vibe, but I feel like (hope at least) that my writing has improved a lot since I wrote this story, and if I just started adding more chapters it might feel off. That's why I feel it would be better to do a sequel instead.

Thank you for reading my little story here. I'm hoping you've enjoyed it. :D
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The Right Smartwatch - Chapter 10: A Special Delivery

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Chapter 10: A Special Delivery

Matt received a note in his class before lunch. It said to report to the school swimming pool after his lunch instead of his normal class. He was a little confused at first, but then figured Karen must be up to something again.

When he arrived at lunch, Jenny and Karen were already at the normal table. He went to talk with them quickly before Paul got there. “So, you know what this is about?” Matt said, pulling out the note from his pocket for Karen to look at.

“Yeah.” Both Karen and Jenny leaned in to whisper to him, and Karen said “Today is the mile run for the boys in our gym class. We went yesterday. We got a free period for gym today and all the girls voted to go swimming. We thought we could have some fun today with them.” Both girls pointed to the watch.

“I don’t know. That seems a little risky. You’re alright with this Jenny?”

“Yeah. I kinda had to reveal a few things about the watch to Karen, but we both planned out exactly what to do.” Jenny pulled a piece of paper from her pocket, handing it to Matt. “This is what you say to them when giving them the commands. We’ll have to be there too, but you can tell us after you finish. We’ll both come over after attendance is taken. As long as you say everything exactly like we have written, there should be no problems.”

“Alright Jenny. If you're ok with it, who am I to complain?”

Matt arrived at the pool, finding it empty. He went to sit in the first row of the bleachers, waiting for the class to come in. Soon, some of the girls started to trickle in. Some of them blushed at his presence, having worn more revealing swimsuits than normal, thinking no boys would be present.

Jenny and Karen came out of the locker room together, walking over to Matt. “You look everything over?” Jenny asked. Both her and Karen looked a little nervous now.

“Yeah. You sure you want to go through with this? Last chance to back out.”

Both girls looked at each other, neither wanting to back out for their own reasons. “No. Let’s do this.” Karen said.

Their gym teacher, Ms. Flowers, walked into the pool area then, ready to start class. Seeing Matt though, she came over to talk to him. “So, what was the reason for you attending this class, Matt?”

Karen answered for him. “Ms. Flowers. Matt needs to do a survey for social studies. He thought it would be fun to survey the girls about whether they wore one piece or two piece swimsuits to gym class.”

Their teacher smiled at that. “Well, a little provocative, Matt, but I suppose no harm done. Can you get that done while I do attendance?”

“Sure Ms. Flowers. I’ll be very quick.”

The teacher blew her whistle then, stopping all the girls chatting. “Ok. Line up for attendance girls!”

The girls all lined up for attendance, and Matt pulled out his notebook, pretending to do his survey. When the teacher walked over to start her attendance, Matt pushed the COM button. All the girls stood at attention, waiting for their command. Matt quickly jotted down his fake survey, figuring it would be good to have, just in case, then pulled out the piece of paper Jenny had given him.

“You will all forget about me being here at the pool today. None of you will discuss your naked swim with anyone not present. Ms. Flowers, you will make sure every single girl is dressed before leaving the locker room. You will only say they are naked once every girl here has gone into the locker room when class is over.” He pushed the COM button, letting the girls return to normal.

No one seemed to be doing anything weird, so he pushed the STR button next. Jenny wanted to use the STR button so none of the girls would know they were naked. He watched as 12 girls, including Jenny, and Karen, plus his teacher all stripped their swim costumes off.

Every girl was oblivious to their and each other’s nudity. Their teacher finished taking attendance, and walked over to Matt. He quickly stuffed the paper from Jenny into his pocket and looked up at her. She was one of the younger teachers, so Matt thought she was just as good to look at as the other girls, besides Jenny. Jenny would always be the best to look at, for him.

“Did you get your survey done?” she asked him. Matt held up the notebook for her. “Good. You did that a lot faster than I thought.” She turned back to the girls. “Ok. It’s a free period, so you can do whatever you like, but you all need to stay here for class.” Matt’s heart skipped a beat. They hadn’t thought of the girls leaving class. He thanked whoever was looking out for him.

Karen and Jenny both came to talk with him again. “What? You chicken out?” Karen asked him, looking a little upset.

Matt just chuckled. “No. I did everything you said.”

“Then why are we still wearing our suits?” She said, in a quieter voice.

Matt couldn’t help but laugh. He leaned in to whisper to them. “Don’t freak out or draw attention to yourselves. You’re both naked.” Both girls looked down at themselves, finding their bodies naked. Karen was shocked, and almost yelled out, but covered her mouth with her hand. Jenny had experienced this before, but it still stunned her for a few seconds. Matt pulled back, talking in his normal voice now. “Can you see the others are too?” Both girls looked at each other, then back at the other girls in the pool, and nodded their heads to him.

“That is so freaky! God, Matt. Having that power, I don’t know how you contain yourself.” Karen said to him.

“Well, honestly. When I think about doing something bad, I usually think of Jenny, and what she would think of me.”

Jenny got a big smile at that. “Aww. And here I thought I was a bad influence.”

“Well, I’ve got some… girls to go swim with.” Karen said, almost saying they were naked out loud. Then rushed over and jumped into the pool.

Jenny sat down, taking Matt’s hand. “Don’t you want to swim?”

“Nah. I just want to sit here with you.”

“That’s fine with me. Although, I was hoping to get a good look at you all wet.”

She leaned in to whisper in his ear. “Well, I’m pretty wet already, but if you insist.” She got up, and leapt into the pool. Then she pulled herself up and out of the pool, flipping her hair back, and walked back over to him. “How do I look?” she asked him, the water still dripping off her body.

“Really hot. Watching you get out of the pool like that was amazing.”

She grabbed her towel, wiping off some of the water, then sat down next to him. They both watched as the other girls all swam around and played naked in the pool. Karen was having the time of her life, dunking under the water to look at her naked classmates, and bumping into the girls’ bodies with her own. She spotted Matt and Jenny still sitting in the bleachers, and gave them a big thumbs up, making both of them laugh.

All too soon, class was over, and their teacher was telling the girls to all head to the locker room. Jenny and Karen both went to their own suits, pulling them on, then started to gather the other girls’ suits. “We can’t just leave them here.” Jenny said, when Matt gave her a confused look. Both girls rushed into the locker room, being the last ones in.

Matt waited in the hall, near the entrance to the girls’ locker room, hoping everything would turn out alright. A few of the girls started to come out, all dressed, but blushed at Matt as they walked by. Jenny and Karen came out soon after, both dressed as well.

“Hey Matt!” Jenny said, getting a big smile on her face. “What are you doing here?”

Matt looked at her in confusion, then realized. “You don’t remember? I just spent the whole class period there with you.”

Jenny and Karen both gave him a quizzical look, then both started to remember. “Oh, right. I guess that’s another thing we know about how the watch works now.” Jenny said.

“Yeah, glad you didn’t forget permanently. So, what happened in there? Everything looks good out here. No naked girls so far.”

“Oh, I wish you could have seen it. Ms. Flowers reminded all the girls to get dressed before leaving the locker room, while we were all in the shower, then looked down at herself. She was blushing really hard. All the girls seemed a little freaked too. Then Ms. Flowers asked all the girls to keep it a secret that she had allowed us to skinny dip.” Jenny told him.

“So, no one mentioned me?”

“Nope. If the command worked, they shouldn’t remember you were there. Right? I mean it worked on us.” Karen said.

“Good. It’s just, some of the girls blushed when they walked by. I wonder, even if they can't remember, if they still know on some level I’ve seen them naked.”

“Well, even if they do remember somehow. Who is going to admit to swimming naked at school, and in front of a male classmate?” Karen said.

“Yeah. I suppose you're right. Did you have fun, Karen?” he asked her.

“Oh yeah. Loads. I’m sure it wasn’t too bad for you either.”

“Yeah. It was pretty great, but the best part was getting to spend more time with Jenny.”

“Aww.” Jenny gave him a quick kiss. Karen made a whipping noise and gesture with her arm, laughing at the two. “Don’t call him whipped. I mean I did just let him see 10 other naked girls, plus you and our teacher.”

“Yeah Karen. This was mostly for you. Jenny’s the only girl I need.”

Karen started to walk away “Hey. I didn’t say which one of you was whipped.” and she raised her eyebrows and held her hands out palm up, then ran off before the two could say anything.

“Oow! Sometimes I wonder why I’m friends with her.” Jenny said with a little chuckle.

“It doesn’t bother you does it? I mean, you both kind of sprung this on me today.”

“No Matt. Don’t let her bother you. I wanted to do this just as much as her.”

“Really? You’re not just saying that to make me feel better?”

“No. I mean it, but if you’re really not sure.” She pointed to the watch.

“Jenny. I don’t want you feeling like I don’t trust you.”

“Just do it Matt. This is important.”

He pulled up the INT app, and hit the QUE button, not happy to do it, but asked “Does it bother you when I see other girls naked?”

“No. I think it’s really hot, especially watching them take their clothes off for you. It would only bother me if you did anything with them.”

“Do you think I’m whipped?”

“No.” Jenny furrowed her brow. “Hey! I didn’t say to ask that.”

“Do you feel whipped?”

“Maybe a little, but in a good way. You know?” Jenny was getting a little mad. “Matt. Shut that thing off. If you ask me one more question I’ll come take that watch and break it myself!”

He shut it off. “I’m sorry Jenny, and I’m sorry you feel like that.” He walked over to her and grabbed her hands and looked into her eyes. “I want you to know, absolutely know, if you tell me to stop using the watch, or stop doing any of the other things because of it. I will stop in a heartbeat. You are all I care about. I mean it Jenny. I will do anything for you.”

She gave him a big kiss, just as the bell was ringing to end class. Ms. Flowers came out of the locker room, seeing the two kissing, and cleared her throat. They both broke their kiss, looking at her. “You two better get to class. What are you doing here anyway, Matt? You don’t have gym class now.”

“Uh, just came to see Jenny, Ms. Flowers.” She blushed when he looked at her, and walked back into the locker room. “See. That’s how all of them were reacting when they came out of the locker room.”

“Well, Ms. Flowers does have a really cute blush. Come on, we better get to class before she comes back out.”



Katie was still apprehensive about this nudity thing. Her mother had told her she was once again going over to the Stevens’ house for dinner. “I guess, I mean, I know you’re trying to help me feel better about being naked. It’s just that, well, why don’t you have to be naked? It would really help me feel better if you did it too, mom. You know, like you did the other day.” Katie figured her mom would never go naked like that again, and it could be her ticket out of going naked herself.

“Well, uh, I just…” Mrs. Miller thought to herself, it really wasn’t fair to ask her daughters to do something she wasn’t willing to do herself. “You’re right, Katie.” and she started undressing right there in the living room.

Katie looked at her mother with wide eyes, not believing she would really do it. She peeked out the window. Vic was working on some weeding, out in his front yard. She chuckled to herself. Let’s see how you like being naked in front of our neighbor, mom.

Her mother was undressed, and Jessica came down the stairs, ready to go, naked herself. “Alright, let’s go girls.” Mrs. Miller said nervously, opening the door. It’s just across the street, she kept reminding herself.

All three took a few timid steps outside. It was still light out. Katie didn’t want to draw attention to herself, but for sure wanted her mother to face Vic like she had done the other day. “Hey, mom. Go say hi to Vic. He’s right over there.” She said, pointing to him.

“I don’t know Katie. I mean I have to see him all the time, and…”

“Oh please, mom. It would show me how to be brave, just like you.”

“Alright. For you Katie. Come on. Let’s all go.” she grabbed both her daughters’ hands, bringing them over to the middle of their neighbors’ yard where he was working. “Hi Vic.” she said nervously, causing him to look up.

Neither her or her daughters were covering anything, just standing hand in hand. He got quite the view, with the three standing naked like that. Wow, Nancy is just as good looking as her daughter, he thought. “Hi Nancy! Looks like the nudist thing is still going strong. You've even joined in the fun now. Huh? Can I say, it really suits all three of you.”

Nancy blushed, as he just kept checking out her body. “Uh, thank you, but it’s more of a confidence boosting exercise.”

“Well you three should be confident in knowing that all of you are very beautiful. I think it’s just great you all have become nudists. I hope to see you around like this a whole lot more.”

“Well, thanks Vic. We have to get to dinner now. We’ll see you later.”

“I sure hope so. Bye Nancy. Girls.”

Nancy kept holding her daughter’s hands as they crossed the street. Another car honked its horn at them when they were in the middle of the driveway, causing all three to rush up to the door. They all made it in without being seen by anyone else.

Matt wasn’t surprised to see Mrs. Miller naked when he answered the door. The only thing that surprised him was that it had taken her so long to do it. He did like the blush she seemed to have about it though.

His mom had decided to order Chinese food for everyone, and had given him the money to pay for the food. Mrs. Miller, his mom, Katie and Jenny had all gone into the kitchen, and his sister and Jessica were up in her room, when the knock came to the door.

Matt answered the door. “Hi, I’ve got an order for Stevens. 25.98.” The delivery boy said.

At that moment, Jenny, and particularly Katie, came out of the kitchen at the worst possible time. “JIMMY!” Katie yelled. Jimmy was a classmate of hers, and 17. Katie stood there frozen in place, not sure what to do.

Jimmy almost dropped the food when he saw Katie, and just stood there staring at her.

Mrs. Miller came out, to see what her daughter was yelling about. She had met Jimmy before, both him and Katie had been in a school play together. This was a perfect opportunity to help Katie feel better about being nude. “Hi Jimmy. Don’t just stand there. Invite him in, Matt.”

“Uh, come on in.” Matt gestured. He really didn’t know what else to do.

“Thanks, but I can’t stay long. I have more deliveries to do.” He was still just staring at Katie, so focused on her, he hadn’t even noticed Jenny or Mrs. Miller.

Matt paid for the food, and Jimmy said thanks to everyone, and headed out the door. Although he did notice the piece of paper tacked to the wall, and was very interested in what it meant.

After Jimmy left, Katie smiled to herself. Maybe this nudity thing was not so bad.



Mrs. Miller and Katie had gone back home after dinner, but Jessica wanted to stay and have a sleepover with Cindy. The two were playing video games in the living room, while Matt and Jenny sat close together on the couch.

There was a knock at the door. “Oh Matt. Could you get that? It should just be my assistant.” Matt’s mom called to him from the kitchen. Susan Larson, his mom’s assistant from work, was the one at the door.

Susan had been told about the naked girl rule by her boss, but it was still a bit of a shock for her to actually see it in practice, and even more of a shock when Matt’s mom walked out of the kitchen. “These briefs look good, Susan, but we should probably look over them just to be sure. Can you stay? It should only take us an hour or two.”

“Of course, but my kids are waiting in the car.”

“Well, invite them in. I’m sure Matt and Cindy can entertain them for a while.”

Susan went back out to her car to retrieve her children, but figured she better explain her bosses’ eccentric rule to them first. “Kids, listen please. Mrs. Stevens has invited us in for a while. I think there is something I should tell you first. Mrs. Stevens has made a rule that all girls go nude in her house.”

10 year old Timmy and his older brother, 13 year old Adam both laughed a little at that, but Timmy’s twin sister Madeline just looked at her mother in confusion while their older sister, Abbie, 14, looked at her mother in shock.

“Does that mean Madeline and Abbie have to be naked?” Timmy asked his mother with another giggle.

Both girls got a little nervous at hearing that. “Oh no. I don’t think so. We’ll just be here for a couple hours, but Mrs. Stevens' daughter and a couple of her friends are over. I want you all to be very respectful of them.”

“Sure mom. You can count on us.” Adam said. He had met Cindy a few times before, and was relishing the opportunity to see her and her friends naked.

Susan led her four children back into the house, and went into the kitchen to go over those briefs with her boss. Adam was delighted, not only was Cindy naked, but one of her friends seemed to be older. He focused most of his attention on Jenny. Timmy and Madeline both asked to join Cindy and Jessica’s game, with Timmy taking the opportunity to look over the younger girls’ bodies while they added him to the game.

Abbie got a little smug smile on her face, seeing a girl from her class going naked. “Wow, Jenny. I didn’t know you would be here. It’s a very interesting rule they have here.”

Jenny just smiled up at her “Yeah, It’s very freeing.”

Why wasn’t she embarrassed about having to go naked, thought Abbie. “I’m sure everyone at school would love to hear about this.” Jenny got a little nervous at hearing that, and Matt could tell.

“Hey! Leave my girlfriend alone!” Matt wanted to use the watch on her, but didn’t think he could with her two brothers there. He figured he could use it on her at some point, but didn't know if it would be in time before she could blab about the rule. Abbie could tell she had made Jenny uncomfortable with that, and just stared at Jenny with a smug superiority.

“My briefcase is just up in my room. I’ll be back in a minute.” Matt’s mom passed by the kids on the way to her own room. The Larson children were a little surprised to see her naked as well, but said nothing.

Matt’s mom was back in the kitchen in less than a minute. “Susan, I did explain the rules to you. Right?”

“Are my children causing a problem?”

“No. They are very well behaved. I just noticed your daughters were still dressed.”

“Oh, sorry. I just assumed since we would be here for such a short time it wouldn’t matter.”

“Well, no harm done, but would you please go tell them to undress?”

Susan didn’t like it, but she wasn’t going to argue with her boss, so just said “Yes Ma’am.”

Both women walked back into the living room, and Susan spoke up. “Ok, girls. Mrs. Stevens has asked that you be undressed while here as well.” Thank you mom! Matt and Jenny were both relieved. No way would Abbie say anything about this if she had to go naked herself.

Both her daughters looked at their mother in shock. “Do I have to, mommy?” Madeline asked.

“Yes dear.” Madeline didn’t want to, but if her mother told her to do something, she did it. So, she started to get undressed. She was soon undressed and revealed she was still just a child. She hadn’t started puberty yet at all.

Abbie wasn’t going to go down without a fight though. “No way, mom! I’ll just go wait in the car!”

Susan walked over to her oldest daughter and said in a quiet voice. “Please don’t embarrass me in front of my boss, Abbie. It will just be for an hour.”

“No mom! I’m not doing it. Matt’s here! Adam and Tommy too! I WON’T DO IT!” She stomped her foot. It made both Matt and Jenny excited to know Abbie would be embarrassed to be naked in front of him and her brothers.

Susan was mad her daughter would make a scene like this in front of her boss. “GET YOUR CLOTHES OFF NOW!” She yelled at her daughter.

“NO!” Abbie yelled back.

Susan spun her daughter around and yanked her pants and panties down so fast she didn’t even realize it had happened until her mother started spanking her butt as hard as she could. “MOMMY! PLEASE!” Abbie said through her shock and tears.

“Are you going to listen to what I tell you to do from now on!?” Susan said, still spanking her.

“Yes mommy!” she said through her blubbering.

She continued spanking her for another few moments, when she figured her daughter had enough, she said once more. “Now get your clothes off!” Abbie looked at her mother through the tears, but did as she asked, pulling her pants and panties down and off the rest of the way first. Then she pulled her t-shirt up and over her head, and undid her bra. Then she covered her privates with her hands.

“Mom, the rules are no covering up when you’re naked. Right?” Matt said, grinning at the latest girl he had seen naked.

“Yes, Matt. That’s right.” His mom said. Abbie didn’t want to be in any more trouble, so just dropped her arms and hung her head in shame, still trying to get over her crying. She had brunette hair on her head, but no hair down below. She did have a tiny bit of stubble, so Matt figured she must shave it all off. Her boobs were smaller than Jenny’s, shaped much like Jessica’s, just a little bigger.

Adam was elated. Now not only did he have three naked girls to look at, but now his older sister had to be naked too. He had been trying to get peeks at her in the shower the last few weeks, but had never succeeded. Now he could look her over as much as he wanted, and not even have to chance getting in trouble for it. Timmy just laughed at his older sister’s misery. Even Madeline giggled a little, being 10, she had gotten over her modesty quickly, especially with her sister being the center of attention.

The two women went back into the kitchen, to finish their work. Jenny leaned in to whisper to Matt. Matt got an evil smile at what she was saying and said, “Maybe you ARE the bad influence, Jenny.” and he gave her a wink and followed the women into the kitchen.

He pulled up the INT app and hit the COM button when he was in the kitchen. “Mrs. Larson. You think girls should be naked. When you get home, you will implement the naked girl rule at your house as well.” and he shut off the COM option and grabbed a couple sodas, one for himself and one for Jenny.

When he came back into the living room, Jenny was circling around her naked classmate, grinning at her, while Abbie was still sniffling from her spanking. “So, who were you going to be telling about this interesting rule exactly, Abbie?”

“I was just kidding. Come on…?” Abbie said, almost starting to cry again.

Matt turned to Adam and asked, “So what do you think about the rule, Adam?”

“I think it’s awesome! Especially now that Abbie has to be naked.” he said with a chuckle. “I wish we had this rule at our house.”

Matt got that evil smile again. “Well, you should ask your mom. I bet she would be open to it.” and he turned and gave Jenny another wink, making her giggle.

“You really think so? That would be great!”

“Yeah, and you could invite all of your friends over to see Abbie naked. Hell, invite her friends over too.” Jenny said, copying Matt’s evil smile. “Of course, if they were girls, they would also have to be naked.”

Adam got a twinkle in his eye at that, imagining Abbie’s friends going naked, and a couple of his own female friends from school as well. “Ok. I’ll ask her when we get home.” Abbie did not like how this conversation was going, but felt too humiliated to even speak right now.

“I don’t know why you’re being such a baby, Abbie. It’s not a big deal for girls to go naked, you know.” Cindy spoke up. They had paused their game to watch Abbie’s spanking and listen to the conversation of the older kids.

“How can you say that?” Abbie said, not believing the younger girl’s words, or that she would ever say something so ridiculous.

“Well the reason for my mom’s rule is simple. You see, girls’ private parts are hidden on the inside. So, no one can really see anything looking at you like that. And boobs are feeding babies, so you don’t need to keep them hidden. It’s a good thing you don’t have any hair down there, or Matt would probably have to shave it off, so you’re not confused for a woman.” Abbie could not believe her ears. She would never let Matt touch her down there if she could help it. She was so shocked at what the younger girls had suggested, she couldn’t speak.

Adam was a little surprised at the reasoning, but if it meant the girls had to be naked, he wasn’t going to complain.

Matt and Jenny just smiled to each other as she sat back down next to him on the couch, and took his hand.

Abbie’s mother had also overheard what Cindy said, peeking out the door to make sure her daughter wasn’t causing any more problems. She thought the reasoning made total sense, and would have to apologize to her boss for being so skeptical.

Matt had wanted to make Abbie do more, for the way she had acted so smugly towards Jenny, but never got a chance to be alone with her to use the watch safely. Oh well. He would probably get a chance at some point.

Susan did allow her daughters to get dressed before they all left, when Abbie begged, but Matt knew they wouldn’t be dressed for long.

Matt and Jenny rushed up to his room after they left, to have sex. Both of them could only think about what Abbie would be going through when she got home, and about Adam inviting all his friends over to see her.
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Re: The Right Smartwatch [Through Chapter 10]

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Ignoring that, all she would need to do is force one of Jenny's fingers out of her ears and crack the door open while Matt was giving the club its new instructions forcing Jenny to do anything that Karen says as long as it does not contradict something Matt instructs or has instructed. She could do this as it was suggestion not an order by Matt to plug their ears and "close the door" was not mentioned.

As for why his Chapter four instructions might have not been removed, the instructions that gave Karen control of Jenny specifically stated she would have control of Jenny until Matt says she will do what Karen tells her, by the COM button. His instruction he believed to have Jenny released was ”Jenny, from now on, you will only follow my orders.” but this was after he made the COM instruction that she follow his instructions indefinitely. In chapter 12 (not posted here yet) you learn that another COM instruction trumps this indefinite command instruction. And we learn that COM instructions once given will be rigidly adhered to, while the indefinite instruction order can be subject to interpretation of the recipient.

Note that the supposed instruction that Matt believes will remove Karen's influence doesn't actually mention Karen.

Note that the definition of the word tells can mean to narrate not just command/order.

Note there is no inherent contradiction as he commanded her to do as Karen tells her to in the first place.

Additionally in Chapter seven Karen deliberately gives Jenny an instruction he would overrule and remove her influence over Jenny should he realized Karen still had it. But if Karen honestly believes that Matt will remove her power over Jenny and Karen wants to keep it concealing the fact she still has it from Matt would be a priority and Jenny and Karen interacted (Chapter six) with each other at least once outside Matt's presence allowing the testing if it was still in place and placement of a complicated instruction to conceal it plausible.
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Re: The Right Smartwatch [Through Chapter 10]

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clockspinning wrote: Sun Jul 03, 2022 4:30 am And we learn that COM instructions once given will be rigidly adhered to, while the indefinite instruction order can be subject to interpretation of the recipient.
That's not strictly true. In chapter 5 and 6 Matt is able to take back the commands for Jenny to feel arousal and pleasure, and to not mind that she is naked through just a verbal order to her without having to use the COM button. I can see why you might interpret it that way from chapter 12, but there is more at play for why Matt wasn't able to get Jenny to believe.

That is to say, I just made all of this up. I should hopefully know how this watch is meant to work. I mean, if I don't, who does? :lol: If you want to interpret that Karen would still have control of Jenny after chapter 4, that is fine I guess. But that would leave a couple of continuity errors then, like the example I gave above. It's all moot by the end of chapter 12 anyway.
clockspinning wrote: Sun Jul 03, 2022 4:30 am Ignoring that, all she would need to do is force one of Jenny's fingers out of her ears and crack the door open while Matt was giving the club its new instructions forcing Jenny to do anything that Karen says as long as it does not contradict something Matt instructs or has instructed. She could do this as it was suggestion not an order by Matt to plug their ears and "close the door" was not mentioned.
I imagine Karen is smart enough to not pull something like that. Not only is Matt about to give Karen control over 3 girls she has hand picked, but she is at least somewhat aware of the kind of power Matt has with his watch. Do you really think it would be a good idea for Karen to do that to one of, if not the most important person in Matt's life?
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Oh, and please don't take this as me being upset with you. On the contrary, I love discussing things like this. It brings me great joy. :D
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My point was that poorly worded instructions cause confusion/trouble multiple times in the story already. It would be in Karen's interest to obscure the fact she controls Jenny from Matt. Obviously you did not intend this to be the case, and you can make it not the case, but it can be interpreted that way.

It would seem to be a super evil thing for the writer to do after all.
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clockspinning wrote: Sun Jul 03, 2022 11:34 am My point was that poorly worded instructions cause confusion/trouble multiple times in the story already. It would be in Karen's interest to obscure the fact she controls Jenny from Matt. Obviously you did not intend this to be the case, and you can make it not the case, but it can be interpreted that way.

It would seem to be a super evil thing for the writer to do after all.
I get what you mean, but I wanted to make Karen a friend to Matt and Jenny, not a conspirator working in the background for her own benefits. And I honestly get that quite a bit about not living up to my name :lol:
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Chapter 11: Date with a Bully

Matt and Jenny were dropped off at the mall by his mother. She wore the cute red dress he really liked. “So, the movie starts in 20 minutes. Did you want to get popcorn or something to drink?” He asked her, as they walked hand in hand, to the mall movie theater.

“Yeah. Maybe some candy too. You know how I love chocolate.”

“Sure Jenny. Get whatever you want.”

They both enjoyed the movie. Matt let Jenny pick, and even though she picked a mushy romantic flick he would have normally never liked, he felt like he could relate to it now.

They were holding hands now, just walking around the mall, in the open space. “So how come you didn’t do anything with me during the movie? I figured with it all dark it would be the perfect place to have some fun.” She asked him.

“Well, I figured, with this being our first official date and all, we could just do some normal stuff for a change.”

“That’s fine by me. I guess you didn’t want to watch me try on bikinis for this summer then?”

“Well, now. Don’t be so hasty, Jenny.” They both got big smiles on their faces. Jenny led him into one of the clothing stores, over to the swimwear section.

“This one?” She held the bikini in front of her body for him to look.

He shook his head. “I think I’ll need to see you wearing it to decide.”

“Let me grab a few and we can go back to the changing rooms.” Jenny grabbed a few suits she liked, and grabbed his hand, dragging him back to the female changing area. He ducked into one of the changing rooms quickly, before anyone noticed him, and she came in after, shutting the door.

Jenny just stood there for a second. “Uh, Matt. You said I couldn’t get naked unless you said.”

Oh. He had forgotten all about that. “Jenny, you can get undressed wherever you like.”

Jenny smiled at him and stripped her dress and underwear off, showing off to her boyfriend again. “So, which one first?” She pointed to the suits hanging on the wall hook now.

“I don’t think any suit will look as good as you do now. You look really cute with just your shoes on, and nothing else. Makes me want to lead you right out into public and show you off to everyone.”

Jenny smiled at him “Come on Matt. Which one?”

“The red one I guess. Red looks really good on you.”

So, Matt got to enjoy looking at Jenny in many different bikinis, and enjoyed even more each time she took one off. “I’ll have to come back for that red one.” She said, “I can’t really afford it right now.”

They were coming out of the clothing store, ready to go get lunch, when Matt overheard a girl yelling in front of the shop next door “No! I want to stay!” a girl with dark, almost black hair was yelling at her mother.

“Ok. Fine Gloria. You can stay. Just call me when you want to be picked up.” The mother had a defeated look on her face.

Matt couldn’t believe it. The girl certainly matched the description his sister had given him. He poked Jenny in the arm and whispered to her “I think that’s Cindy’s bully.”

“Come on. Let’s follow her.” Jenny whispered back.

The couple followed Gloria as she went into another clothing shop. They kept their distance best they could, just trying to keep an eye on her without being noticed. Gloria left the store after a bit, and went into the shop next to it, a novelty shop. Gloria rounded a corner near the back of the shop, and the couple followed, but ended up bumping into Gloria. “Why the hell are you two following me!?”

Matt wasn’t going to let this grade school bully intimidate him, even if up close she seemed a lot bigger than he thought. “You know my sister? Cindy Stevens?”

“Yeah. I know her. What? Come to beat up a girl? Big tough man!” She said in a cocky voice.

“You're the one who’s been taking her lunch money?” Jenny spoke up.

“Yeah. You gonna do something about that blondie?” She had an annoying smile on her face. Jenny took a step towards her, but Matt stopped her. “Yeah. That’s what I thought.” She turned to leave, letting out a loud chuckle.

Matt hit the COM button, freezing her and Jenny in place. “Gloria, you will follow all of our commands.” He hit the button again, and Gloria continued to walk away. “Hey Gloria! Come back over here!”

She turned back around, walking back towards them. “Looks like…” she started to say in the same cocky voice, but Matt interrupted her.

“Shut up! You won't say anything else unless spoken to! Don’t move!” Gloria could only stare at the two in confusion. Matt leaned in to whisper in Jenny’s ear again “I made it so she would do what you say, too.” Jenny got an evil smile at that.

Matt and Jenny both whispered back and forth, planning out what they were going to make Gloria do. Matt walked back over to the front counter. On the way, he spotted something cheap to buy. It would help him get what he wanted for their plan. “I’ll just take this, and could I get a large bag? I have some other stuff I need to carry in it.”

“No problemo, my man. That’ll be $16.50.” The store attendant said. He was just handing Matt back his change, when he saw Jenny leading Gloria over towards them. He dropped the change in shock. Matt looked over at them too. He got a good look at Gloria. The only thing Jenny had left her with, was her shoes and socks. She had breasts about as big as Jenny’s, but her pubic hair hadn’t really come in yet, she only had a few stray hairs, leaving her slit completely visible. Her nipples were large, and just kind of faded out into the rest of her boobs. She was nowhere near Jenny’s league, Matt thought, but it was still nice to see another naked girl.

“Hey. Sorry about my cousin. She’s extremely claustrophobic, and the only thing that really helps is taking off all her clothes.” Jenny told the clerk, acting like it was nothing unusual for a 12 year old girl to be naked at the mall. "Matt, did you get the big bag?"

“Yeah. Right here Jenny.” He handed her the bag, putting what he bought in his pocket.

The clerk wasn’t going to get in the way of a medical emergence. “Oh, groovy. Hope you're feeling better, little missy.”

“Yeah. We better get her out into the more open space.” Jenny said, having finished putting Gloria’s clothes in the bag.

Matt walked over and took Jenny’s hand, and the two made Gloria walk out of the store in front of them. Many of the other patrons at the mall made shocked faces at her, and a lot of kids giggled at seeing the naked girl, but no one made a move to stop them. “Ok Gloria. You just keep following us closely.” Jenny said to her, as they started walking around the main drag of the mall.

They had ended up near the food court, so Matt asked Jenny “Should we get lunch?”

"Yeah. That sounds good. You hungry Gloria?" She turned to ask the naked girl.

"No, not really." It was the first time she could say anything since Matt interrupted her and she could no longer speak again after answering.

The two went to get in line, with the naked girl following close by. As they were waiting, one of the mall security guards came to talk with them. "I'm sorry, but I can't really have her walking around like this." She said to them, getting a good look at the naked girl while smiling and trying to suppress a giggle. "Some of the other customers have been complaining."

"Oh. I'm so sorry. It's just that my cousin here was having a panic attack. She's really claustrophobic. The only thing that helps is taking her clothes off. My mom won't be picking us up until much later." Jenny explained to the guard.

The guard considered what to do. She had been trained to take medical emergencies as seriously as possible, but the naked girl didn’t seem to need any help. The only thing she noticed was the deep blush on her cheeks. “Well… If it’s a medical condition I suppose we can make an exception. I’ll let all the other guards know to leave you alone and ignore any complaints.” She turned to look at Gloria again. “You can stay undressed as long as you need, cutie pie. I hope you feel better.” and she pinched her cheek before walking away.

Gloria couldn't believe it! She had hoped this whole nightmare would be stopped by the security guard, but now, the guard had basically said they could keep her naked as long as they wanted to. Matt and Jenny both smiled at each other. This was going to be a lesson this bully would never forget.

Every way Gloria looked, she saw faces gawking at her, in shock, in joy, and worst of all, in laughter. She had been fortunate enough to avoid anyone she knew seeing her like this, not that she was 100% sure, but that luck would run out soon.

Matt and Jenny had gotten their lunches, and were going to find an empty table, when one of the girls in Gloria’s class spotted her. “Gloria! Oh my god! Gloria, is that you!?” Gloria spun around to face away from them.

Matt whispered into her ear, “Let them get a good look at you.” Gloria spun back around, now facing the girl, letting her and the two boys who were with her get a good look at her naked body.

All three got up to get a better look at the naked girl. “Why, it is you, Gloria! But I think you might have forgotten something this morning.” She said with a giggle. The two boys with her could only stare. “So why are you naked?” She was really laughing hard now.

“I uh…” She tried to answer her question, but Jenny had been thorough in her instructions to the naked girl. She could not say the real reason she was naked, and she could not cover herself, no matter what.

“Gloria had a panic attack.” Jenny started to say. “She’s claustrophobic, and only taking her clothes off helps. I’m babysitting her today. My name is Jenny, and this is my boyfriend, Matt.”

“Nice to meet you Jenny. I’m Michelle, and this is my twin brother Richard, Rick for short. And this is our friend Will. He used to go by Billy, but now he wants a more mature name.”

“So how do you know Gloria?” Jenny asked her.

“All three of us are in her class at school. I didn’t think you would still need a babysitter Gloria. Although, I guess you are still kind of immature.” She said, looking down at the naked girl’s exposed slit. Gloria could only glare back.

“Yeah. I know just how immature Gloria has been acting. Stealing people’s lunch money. Picking fights. Making fun of her fellow classmates. That’s why her mom hired me to babysit her.”

“Really? Her mom always just went along with whatever she wanted before.” Michelle had been the girl who tried to stand up to Gloria. “I hope you teach her a good lesson.”

“Oh, I think we already have.” Matt spoke up. "Look at how well behaved she's acting now."

“I’m glad. Say? Do you think we could get a picture with Gloria? I don’t think anyone else would believe she was really naked at the mall without proof.”

Matt and Jenny both looked side-eyed at each other, but they knew Gloria’s ultimate punishment would end with her being seen naked by her whole class, so decided it wouldn’t hurt. “Sure. Gloria, go stand with them.” Jenny said, taking Michelle’s phone from her. “Say cheese! Smile!” Gloria couldn’t help saying cheese and smiling big as the picture was taken.

“Well, we need to get going. It was nice meeting you Jenny. You too Matt. I’ll see you in school, Gloria. I’m sure it will be a VERY interesting class on Monday!” Both Matt and Jenny could only think, if only she knew.

When Gloria’s three classmates had left, and they had finished lunch, Jenny turned to Matt and asked, “So where should we take Gloria next?”

“Well, I know the favorite hangout for boys is the arcade. Why don’t we all go play some video games for a while?”

“Sure. That sounds like a lot of fun. I’m sure Gloria will really enjoy herself too.”

Gloria didn’t want to go to the arcade like this, especially with all the boys who would be there, but as Matt and Jenny walked hand in hand towards the arcade, she was forced to follow. She continued to get shocked expressions and gasps as she walked by. One woman burst out laughing at seeing her, hitting her boyfriend's shoulder to get him to look. His eyes nearly bulged out of his head.

The arcade was set up with an entrance fee. All the games were free to play inside once they had their pass for the day. Matt went over to Gloria and whispered into her ear, letting her know her new orders. Then they all walked in.

There was loud music playing, and strobe lighting everywhere, so no one really noticed Gloria at first. It wasn’t until she walked up to a young boy playing a game alone that she started to get noticed. She tapped him on the shoulder and said “Can I join your game?”

The boy was focused on the game so just said, “Yeah. Sure.”

“I can’t join you until you push my buttons and play with my coin slot.” She said, feeling the most embarrassment she had ever felt in her life. Jenny overheard what she said and burst out laughing. Matt couldn’t help but laugh too.

The boy finally looked at her, going wide eyed. Gloria just put her hands behind her back, and presented herself to be touched by him. “You sure?” He asked. Gloria just nodded her head, looking down in shame. The boy wasn’t going to pass up this opportunity. He reached right out and pinched her nipples, jiggling her boobs around a little. Then he reached down and inserted his finger into her slit, running it up and down a few times. Gloria let out a little moan, but that was enough for Matt’s order, so she stopped him and started playing the game.

Some of the other boys around had started to notice her now, as she played a fighting game with the first boy. “I’ve got next round with her!” Another boy said.

The round was over, so the next boy came up. “I can’t play with you until you push my buttons and play with my coin slot.” Gloria repeated to the new boy. The boy couldn’t believe his ears, but did as she asked. First he pushed her nipples with his finger, one at a time, then he pulled out a quarter, and stuck it between her pussy lips, making all the other kids laugh. Gloria just turned to select her character, waiting for the next round to start.

Soon a line had formed, mostly of boys, but even some girls, all waiting to get a chance to touch the naked girl and play a round with her. Gloria would say her now famous line to each boy when they came up, only being able to not say it when it was a girl. The girls still took the opportunity to touch her though, and even though she could have stopped them, Gloria didn’t try.

After about an hour, one lucky boy finally won Matt’s game, bringing Gloria to orgasm in front of all the other children and teens. Once she recovered, she said “Sorry boys. Game’s over.” and walked back over to Matt and Jenny.

They brought her back out into the main hall. It was about the time Matt’s mom would be picking them up, so they were ready to let Gloria have her clothes back. “Do you want the honors, Jenny?” Matt asked her.

“Sure. Thanks. Gloria, you will never bully anyone again. You will never steal anyone’s money. In fact, you will never steal anything ever. You will treat everyone, but especially your parents, with respect. On Monday, 30 minutes after school starts, you will stand and remove all your clothes.” Gloria’s eyes went wide at that. “You will not cover your privates while naked. You will not get dressed for 15 minutes, and prevent anyone else from covering you... Without hurting them or yourself. Just run away if you have to. If you get covered, you will continue your 15 minutes at your earliest convenience.”

Jenny seemed to be finished, so Matt spoke up “Gloria. You will not tell anyone about our involvement in any of this. You will take credit for any time you spend naked, today and in the future. From now on, when you are naked, you will feel complete and total humiliation. If you even think of messing with my sister one more time, you will never wear clothes again. Understand!?” Gloria just nodded her head. “Good. You don’t have to wait for someone to speak to you to talk anymore.”

Gloria immediately started to cry. “Can I get dressed now?” She asked through her blubbering.

“What do you think, Matt? Should we let her have her clothes back?” Jenny smiled at him.

“Hmm…”

“Oh, Please!?” Gloria begged them.

“Oh. Alright. You can get dressed. For now, Gloria.” Matt said. Gloria immediately rushed over, grabbing the bag from Jenny, and dumped it out on the floor. She was so shaken up at what happened to her, and was feeling so totally humiliated now, it was a struggle to get her clothes back on, but she was finally able to do it.

The couple turned to walk away when she was dressed, but Gloria was still following them. “Oh, right.” Jenny said with a little giggle, “You don’t have to follow us anymore.” Gloria turned and sprinted away from them, hoping to never see the two again.



The two were so worked up at what they had done to Gloria, that they rushed into the house and almost all the way up the stairs. “The rules, Jenny!” Matt’s mom called to her.

“Sorry Mrs. Stevens. I was just going to get undressed in Matt’s room.” She said, pulling the zipper of her dress down.

“Oh. Alright then. Just make sure she does it, Matt.” Matt nodded his head, as the two rushed into his room. They started undoing each other’s clothes as soon as the door was closed.

Once they were both naked, they fell onto the bed making out. Matt got on top of her, and Jenny opened her legs for him, so he slid his penis right in. “Oh god, Matt! That was brilliant at the arcade! Touch my buttons and play with my slot! Ohhhhhh yes!” Jenny said, looking up at him.

“You were so great with the explanation. Claustr– Ohhh! –phobic. I can’t believe you let her classmates get a picture of her! Shhhhh... She’s going to have that haunt her for the rest of her life!” Matt couldn’t hold out any longer, and shot deep into her.

He was breathing hard, trying to recover, when Jenny said, “Matt, I haven't gotten off yet.” Feeling a little disappointed.

Matt just smiled to himself, and said “Jenny, have an orgasm.”

They were both lying on his bed, still both naked. Matt on his back, and Jenny on her side, playing with his now soft penis. She was just flopping it back and forth a little. “It’s interesting when it’s soft too.” She said, smiling up at him. “So, do you want to do something like we did to Gloria to any other girls?” He wasn’t sure, but his dick responded to that, getting hard in her hand. “Guess you like that idea.” She said, rubbing him up and down now.

“Maybe we should just use our power for good from now on. You know, just on girls who deserve it.” Jenny nodded her head, and went back to stroking him. He was happy she was enjoying playing with him like this, but he felt a little bad Jenny had to tell him she didn't get off. “Say Jenny.” She looked back at him, keeping the same smile on her lips, still rubbing his hard cock. “From now on, when I have an orgasm, you will have one too.”

“Well. That should make what I do next very interesting.” She looked back at his cock, and leaned over, taking it into her mouth. Even though he had just gotten off, he was still a teenage boy, and it only took Jenny a few minutes to make him cum again. When the first spurt hit the back of her throat, it triggered Matt’s order, setting off an orgasm in Jenny. Jenny started to moan, making a humming noise. It was like nothing Matt had ever felt.

They both laid back on his bed, breathing hard. “Thanks Matt! That’s a really great command!”

They were both still lying like that when Cindy burst into the room. “Matt, you’ll never guess..!” She looked with wide eyes at her naked brother, this being the first time she had seen him like that since he was 8. “Oh god! Matt! I’m so sorry!” Cindy covered her eyes with her hands, and turned around. She put her hands out, still keeping her eyes closed, and tried to feel for the open doorway.

Matt was a little embarrassed to have his sister see him like this, but was grateful she hadn’t come in a few minutes earlier. He got up off the bed, and grabbed her shoulders to spin her back around. “It’s ok, squirt. It’s not a big deal, since you're my sister.” He could see how upset it had made her, and was trying to make her feel better.

Cindy peeked one eye open, looking at her brother's face. She could see he wasn’t mad, and opened both her eyes. She couldn’t help but look down at his dangling penis, resting on top of his balls. Matt also noticed where she was looking, but couldn’t really do anything about it at this point, so let her look. “Wow. You're a lot bigger than the last time I saw you.” Cindy couldn’t help saying, still just staring at it.

Jenny let out a laugh, now sitting up on the bed. “Yeah. He’s pretty good looking, isn’t he?”

Cindy looked at her and nodded her head, then realized she was talking about her brother, “I don’t know. He’s my brother.” She looked back down at his privates, and her eyes went wide. “Woah! It’s huge now!”

Matt had gone erect again. Something about being naked with his sister and girlfriend, both of them naked also, and especially after Jenny had said he was good looking, really excited him. Jenny could see how hard he was again as well, and got up to close and lock the door. She turned back to the two siblings, “So, is this the first time you’ve seen an older boy naked, Cindy?”

“Well I saw Jake and Dillan, but Matt is the oldest.” Cindy was a little embarrassed by the question.

“Did they let you touch them?” Jenny was getting a wicked smile on her face. Matt wasn’t sure where Jenny was going with this.

“No. They only touched me.”

“Well I’m sure Matt would be ok with you touching him a little. That way you're not in the dark about boys anymore.” Matt looked at Jenny with wide eyes.

“Wow. Really? You’d really be ok with that Matt?” Matt just nodded his head at her, sure if he opened his mouth he would say no. Cindy, seeing her brother’s approval, slowly reached out towards him, tentatively taking the shaft in her grip. He thought he looked pretty normal sized in Jenny’s hand, but in Cindy’s he felt huge.

Jenny came over, putting her hand around the smaller girl’s “Now you want to rub him up and down, like this.” Matt was now getting jerked off by his sister and girlfriend at the same time. He started to moan. “See. That noise means he likes it, and we should start going faster.” Both his girlfriend and sister had huge smiles on their faces now. Seeing that, combined with their touch was enough for him, he shot one big jet of sperm out the end of his cock, in between the two girls, and dribbled the rest out. This was the third time he had gotten off in about an hour.

His orgasm triggered Jenny’s. She clamped her legs closed and hunched over, moving her hand from his cock to his shoulder to hold herself up.

Cindy wasn’t really paying attention to Jenny, still just looking at her brother’s shrinking penis. “Wow! That was amazing! Can I do it again?”

Matt and Jenny both went to sit down on his bed, trying to catch their breath. “I don’t know, squirt. I need some time to recover.”

“Matt and I have been doing that since we got home. It takes boys a bit longer to recover than girls, and they can only do it so many times a day.”

“Oh. Well, thank you, Matt.” Cindy ran over and gave her brother a big hug. “Well, I should go. Oh! I almost forgot. I came in to say, Paul called me earlier. He wants to go on a date with me!”

“Really? That’s great, squirt. I know you really like him. I know he really likes you too.” He didn’t think Paul would have it in him.

“Jenny? Can you help me pick out what to wear? Too bad I can’t just go like this.” She said, waving one of her arms in front of her naked body.

“Paul would have a heart attack if you went on a date with him naked. He can barely tolerate it now. He passed out when he saw Jenny naked for the first time.”

“I’ll just have to keep getting him used to it then.” Cindy said with a grin.

“So where are you two going? It will help me know what to pick out for you to wear.” Jenny asked.

“Probably the mall.” Jenny got a big smile on her face, and looked side eyed at Matt.

Matt chuckled. “No Jenny. She can’t go on her date with Paul, naked.” Jenny stuck her bottom lip out, making a sad face at him.

“If anyone is going to be going on dates naked, it’s definitely you, Jenny.”

Jenny gave him a little pout. “Come on Matt. You know I was kidding.”

“I know.” Matt answered her back, but purposely left out whether he was kidding or not. “So, when’s the date, Cindy?”

“Tomorrow at noon.”

“Ok. I’ll come over tomorrow morning and help you get ready.” Jenny told her.

“Thanks Jenny. You always used to dress so nicely.”

“Hey! I still wear clothes. Sometimes.” she said with a laugh.

“Alright. See you later.” Cindy ran off, leaving the door open behind her.

Matt got up to close it, and then turned back to Jenny. “I suppose I should get dressed before my mom bursts in next.”

“Aww. I like seeing you naked.”

“Well I suppose I can stay like this for a little while longer.” They both got on his bed, cuddling again. “You know Jenny, if you want, I could make my mom not mind if I’m naked. Yours too.”

“What!? No way. I don’t want you going naked in front of my mom. Thanks for offering though.”

“So just here then?”

“No. I don’t think so. I think it's kind of special, me being the only one to see you naked.”

“Cindy just saw me.”

“I know, but that was an accident.”

“It was an accident. What the two of you just did to me?”

“No. I just felt like we both kind of owed her. No, the door being unlocked. We need to be more careful.”

“Alright, Jenny. I didn’t really want to be naked in front of my mom either. I just offered for you.”

Jenny was able to work up the courage to finally ask her mother for permission to spend the night with him, which she of course readily agreed to. The two figured if Jenny didn't go home, their first date was still technically not over.

“Oh. I almost forgot. I bought this for you at the mall. I know it’s not much…” He opened the box, with a little stainless steel ring inside.

“Matt, It’s wonderful!” She said, sliding the ring on her finger, then gave him a hug, and a few quick kisses on his lips.
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The Right Smartwatch - Chapter 12: The Motherload

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Chapter 12: The Motherload

Still being over at Matt's house, Jenny helped Cindy pick out a dress to wear for her date with Paul the next morning. Paul was there at noon, right on time of course. "Wow Cindy. You look beautiful. The Wizard of Oz is one of my favorite movies."

"Really? Mine too." Cindy beamed at him. Jenny had picked out a light blue dress for her to wear. Although she looked a lot more like the girl from Return to Oz. Matt's mom drove the two to the mall, deciding to get some shopping done herself, so Matt and Jenny had the house to themselves for a while.

In the late afternoon, Karen came over, bringing Kelly with her. She looked over her shoulder at the sign after coming in. "It really is real." She said with a laugh, then shrugged her shoulders and started to get undressed. "You too, Kelly."

The four were all chatting, Matt the only one in clothes, when he leaned over to whisper in Jenny's ear "Have you told her about the best feature of the watch?" Jenny just tilted her head a little, and smiled at him. "Hey Karen."

"Yeah?"

"Have an orgasm." Karen was more than happy to learn about this new feature of the watch.

Matt woke up early the next morning, before his alarm went off. He didn’t feel tired, so he got up and had breakfast, then went to take his shower. He figured he had let enough time pass, so headed out his door and over to Jenny’s house to spend time with her before school.

Jenny opened the door, letting out a little yawn. She had just woken up before he got there. “Oh, hi Matt!” She got a big smile, realizing who it was.

“Morning girlfriend.” Matt stepped in, and she came closer to hug him around the neck and give him a nice long kiss.

“Morning Matt. You’re here early today.” Jenny’s mom said, walking into the room.

“Say, I’ve got to go get a shower before my mom uses up all the hot water. Have you eaten breakfast already?” Jenny asked him.

“Yeah. I already ate.”

“Ok. Be back in a bit. Be nice to him mom.” and she ran off to take her shower.

Matt sat down on the living room couch, and Jenny’s mom sat down across from him. “So, are you enjoying your birthday present?” Jenny had gotten him the nice button down shirt he was wearing now.

“Yeah, it’s really comfortable.”

“Comfortable isn't how I would describe it exactly. Exciting, a little naughty, but probably a whole lot of fun for you. That’s what it seems to me, anyway.” Matt looked at the naked woman with wide eyes, realizing exactly what she was talking about. He looked down at the watch out of reflex.

“Oh, you were probably talking about your shirt. No. That’s from Jenny. The watch is from me.” He could only sit there in stunned silence. “I didn’t think you would figure out what it was capable of so fast. I’m impressed.”

“Uh, Jenny accidently hit the button. WAIT! YOU GAVE THIS TO ME!? Why!? How!?”

“Slow down, Matt. I’ll explain what I can. Yes. I gave you the watch. Why? To help you and Jenny finally get together. How? I switched it with the original package.”

“You wanted Jenny under my control?”

“I could tell you really loved her, and wouldn’t hurt her or let anything bad happen to her. I know you had some fun with the other girls, making them go naked, toying with them a little, but I know that’s all you did with them. I trusted you Matt, and you didn’t betray that trust.”

“But you’re… Where the hell did this thing come from? How can it do what it does?”

“I can’t answer those questions.” He glanced down at the watch, considering turning on the truth option. “Go ahead. It won’t work.” She pointed to the earrings she was wearing. “Blocks the signal.”

“But you’ve been wearing those for a while. How did I command you to not care if Jenny was naked?”

“You didn’t. I’m a pretty good actor when I need to be. Good line about taking out the trash, by the way.”

Matt still felt like he was in shock. “Does Jenny know that you gave this to me?”

“No, and you can’t tell her now. When the time is right, we will tell her together.”

“You want me to lie to Jenny?”

“Lie is such a strong word. Just don’t tell her you know where the watch came from. It’s very important you don’t.”

“Um... Alright. I guess.”

“Good. Now, any other questions you have?”

“How did you get this?”

“That’s the same as asking me where it came from.”

“Why would you give it to me?”

“I said. So, you and Jenny would finally realize you loved each other. Any other questions?”

Matt did have one more question he kind of always wondered about “Well, uh, ok, not that I want it or anything like that, but is there a version that works on boys? Men?”

“A little nervous? No, not that I’m aware of, but you never know what the future will bring. Alright. I think that’s enough for now. I’m sure it’s going to take you a long time to process all of this.”

He looked at her, confused. “Wait? I get to keep it?”

“Yes. It is a gift, after all.”

“You’re ok with what I’ve been doing with it?”

“It was expected. One of the options IS to make a girl strip naked.”

“I can’t believe you're ok with me using this on Jenny?”

“Well, it’s true. Now, I need to go make breakfast for Jenny and myself. You sure you don’t want anything?”

“No. I’m not really very hungry right now.”

She left him alone, still feeling like he was in shock. Jenny came back out after a few minutes, carrying her clothes for the day, and sat next to him on the couch, putting her head on his shoulder and taking his hand. “I love you, Matt.” she said softly into his ear.

“I know. I love you too, Jenny.” Well, he did want to thank whoever had given him the watch. He just didn’t understand why her mom would want him to lie. Jenny’s mom though? How could a flight attendant get her hands on something like this?

“Whatcha thinking about?”

“Nothing really. Just enjoying sitting here with you like this.” She smiled at him, and then nestled her head into his shoulder. He felt really bad for lying to her like this.

Matt struggled with the guilt all day. On the bus to school, at lunch, in every class, especially history. Jenny came over to his house after school, and ate dinner with his family.

Cindy, of course, could not stop talking about what Gloria had done during class that morning, explaining how her classmate just kept refusing to get dressed all day. Luckily Michelle was there to explain her claustrophobia to the teacher and later her parents when they were called in, but Matt couldn't even really enjoy that.

They went up to his room after dinner, to work on homework. “You’ve seemed really distant today, Matt. What’s wrong?” Jenny had gotten really excited at Cindy's story and was a bit worried when Matt had rejected her advances and just wanted to work on homework.

God! How could he keep this from her? This is way too much to ask of him. “Jenny, what if I told you I knew where the watch came from?”

“What? The aliens finally come to visit?” She chuckled. He had told her all about his theories of where the watch could have come from.

“No. You're not going to like it. You better brace yourself.” He took a deep breath, before continuing. “How well do you know your mom, Jenny?”

“Pretty well. I’ve known her all my life. Why?” Why would he be bringing up her mom all of a sudden?

“Ok. Here it goes. Apparently the one who gave me the watch... Is your mom.”

Jenny looked at him perplexed, then burst out laughing. “MY MOM! Really!? Oh god, thanks Matt. I needed that.”

“I’m not kidding, Jenny. She just told me this morning.”

She looked at his serious face. “My mom, a flight attendant, somehow got a watch that can control girls, and then gave it to you? You really think my mom would want you in control of me?”

“I don’t know why for sure. She said she wanted to get us together. I mean it did work. And flight attendant, that’s like the perfect cover for a CIA agent or whatever she is.”

“CIA!? Come on! My mom gets scared of the loud noises at movies, no way could she handle something like that.”

“You didn’t see her face. It was like she was a completely different person. Maybe we should go talk to her.” Crap. He was going to ask her not to tell her mom he had said anything.

"Alright. Let's go now. You're just going to have to tell her to forget about the watch though."

They made their way through the back door, finding Jenny's mom in the living room. "Say mom? What do you think about smartwatches?"

"Eh. I don't really like them. They are still way too big. Plus having to charge my watch every day seems like a hassle." Well, she did say she was a good actor.

“You haven't heard about any special features they might have?”

“Yeah, like making girls strip naked or follow your commands!” Matt just felt like confronting her now.

“Oh my. That would be something. Could make a good plot for a book or movie, but you would probably have to leave out the naked part.”

Matt couldn’t believe she would continue lying like this. “The only reason Jenny is going naked is because of this thing!” He held up the watch and pointed to it.

“Matt, you were right there when I made the rule about Jenny being naked.” He could see just a little curl on the edge of her lips. “Now, I’m in the mood for ice cream. Would you be a dear and get us some, Jenny?”

“Sure mom.” Jenny just rolled her eyes at him with a smile as she walked past, shaking her head.

“Couldn’t even make it a day. Huh? It’s a good thing people believe what they want to believe.” She said once her daughter had left the room.

“I can’t believe you would lie to her like that!”

“I didn’t lie. I just let her think I didn’t know what the watch is capable of. I’m impressed though. You must really care about her if you couldn’t keep it from her.”

“I love her. I’m starting to think you…” He didn’t want to say the whole sentence.

“I’ll let that slide since you don’t have all the information. You probably won’t ever know all the information, but do know I love her. She is my whole world.”

“I’m sorry. I just don’t understand.”

“Like I said, you probably never will.”

“I’m going to keep trying to convince her.”

Her mouth curled into a small smile. “I expect you will. Just know, you won't be able to use the watch to do that.” Jenny came back in, carrying three bowls of ice cream for them. “Thank you sweetie.”

Matt didn’t know what to say after that. He just ate his ice cream in silence. He had known Jenny’s mom just as long as Jenny. He had always felt like she was kind of a second mom to him, but now he felt like he didn’t know her at all.

Jenny brought him up to her room after they finished. “I think you're right about the watch.” His hopes rose for a moment. “That it kind of hides itself to people under its influence. I mean you basically admitted to my mom you used it to get me naked and she still made excuses for it.”

“She’s just a really good actor, Jenny.”

“My mom!? I can always tell when she’s lying to me.”

“I’m telling you, she admitted it to me this morning.”

“Ok. Let’s say you’re telling the truth. How do you know it was really her?”

“What are you talking about? I was talking to her.”

“Sure, but whoever left that watch to you, could have another one. They could have commanded my mom to tell you that.” Jenny got a worried expression on her face. “Oh god! Do you think that’s what happened!?”

He hadn’t considered that. He was glad Jenny was so smart. “You could be right.” He grabbed her in a hug. They were both getting scared now. “I don’t know, Jenny.”

“So, what did she say to you? Exactly?”

“Well she took credit for giving me the watch as a birthday gift like I told you. She said she gave it to me to get us together. She was kind of wishy-washy about if she wanted you under my control, but then said she trusted me because I didn’t do anything with the other naked girls. Then she answered my questions.”

“What did you ask her?”

“Well, where it came from, and how it works, but she said she couldn’t say. One other thing too.”

“What was that?”

“Well… I asked if there was one that worked… on boys.”

Jenny got a little smile on her lips and a faraway look in her eyes. “And...?”

“She said she didn't think so.”

“Aww. Too bad. Would be fun controlling you for a change.”

“Jenny, this is serious. Besides, I let you control me when you want.”

“But it’s different. When I’m telling you what to do, you can always refuse if you really want. I always have to leave it in your hands, even if I say our word, there is always that little chance you could ignore me.”

“I wouldn’t do that to you, Jenny.”

“I know. I trust you. I just wish you could experience it just once like I do.”

There was a knock on Jenny's door. "You decent Matt?" Matt had started to enjoy how Jenny's mom always joked like this, but now he felt annoyed.

Jenny went to open the door. "Hey Mom. What is it?" Jenny was trying to see if her mom was under control of someone, but she seemed to be acting normal.

She walked into the room with them. "I just wanted to ask if you were staying the night Matt?" Matt saw an opportunity and hit the COM button on the watch. Jenny froze in place, but her mother just smiled at him.

"What were you trying to do with that exactly? I showed you my earrings. You won't be able to control me, Matt."

"I didn't want to control you. I just wanted to really know if I couldn't."

“Hmm. Smart. Well, do you have any commands for Jenny, or are you going to leave her like that all night?”

Matt wasn’t sure what to do. Even if her mom had said it wouldn’t work, he was going to try to get her to believe with the watch. “Jenny. You believe your mom gave me the smartwatch.” Jenny’s mom just held her hand out palm up, motioning for him to continue. So, he shut off the COM option.

“You’re really ok with that, mom?” Jenny continued, not having heard their conversation.

“Sure honey. I can tell just how much Matt loves you. Well, I’ve got an early flight out in the morning. I probably won't see you until I get back Thursday. Matt, you're welcome to stay all week if you like.”

He felt too nervous to confront her now, so he just said “Thanks, Mrs. Powers.” in a defeated voice.

“Please, Matt. Call me mom.” He didn’t like that joke anymore. “Goodnight kids.” She closed the door on the way out.

“I don’t know, Matt. She seemed pretty normal to me.”

“So, you don’t believe me?”

“Sorry, Matt. It’s just too crazy. It’d be like if you said Santa Claus was real.”

That gave him an idea. What if he couldn’t make her believe anything with the watch. He hit the COM option again. “Jenny. You believe in Santa Claus.”

“What was it you just said about Santa?”

“It’d be like if you said he wasn’t real.”

“Santa Claus is real?”

“Yes, Matt. Who do you think brings all the presents on Christmas?”

“Well maybe your mom does it.”

“What!? My mom wouldn’t lie to me like that.” He flashed back to a very similar conversation they had had when they were younger. Only it was her who insisted he wasn’t real. Well, he better put her back. So, he hit COM once more and told her not to believe in Santa.

“Yeah I figured it out, and my mom sat me down and told me he wasn’t real when I asked her.” Jenny said when he shut off the watch.

“Yeah, and then you told me, and I almost told my sister, but my mom stopped me.”

“You didn’t get in too much trouble did you?”

“No. She just explained to me it was sometimes nice to have faith in things, even if you know it’s not real, and not to ruin the magic for Cindy.”

He ended up spending the night with her, not wanting to leave her alone with her mother after that. He didn’t really feel like doing anything, so they just held each other through the night, falling asleep fast. When Jenny’s alarm went off, he headed back home to get ready for school.

Jenny was waiting for him to walk to the bus stop. “I really don't think she is under the control of anyone.”

“Yeah. Me neither.” Something told him Jenny’s mom was telling the truth, and that she wasn’t under the control of someone else. It was another long day at school for him, trying to think of a way to convince Jenny her mother had given him the watch.

They were walking home, hand in hand, and had just reached the bottom of Jenny’s driveway. “So, I’ve got a lot of homework to work on. Want me to come over so we can work on it together?” He had decided to leave the situation with Jenny’s mom alone for now. She did say they would tell Jenny together at some point.

“Matt, we need to talk.” Jenny said. He noticed she had tears in her eyes now.

“What’s wrong, Jenny?” She seemed really happy just a minute ago.

“Matt. You and I are not good together. What we’ve been doing to other girls. I think…” She struggled with the words. “I think we should break up.”

“WHAT!? Jenny! What? Why!? Please!? I said I would give up the watch whenever you want. Here!” He started undoing the watch band, but she grabbed his hand to stop him.

She was crying openly now. “No Matt. I know you like it too much. That’s not fair to you. You’ll just get mad at me for taking that away from you. That’s why we need to break up.”

“Jenny, I don’t care about this thing! All I want is you! You don’t have to follow my commands anymore! Jenny, stand on one foot.” Jenny didn't move, still just crying. “There! See! It’s done!”

“I’m so sorry, Matt!” She turned and ran up her driveway, and into her house, locking the door behind her. Matt just stood there, at the end of her driveway, still in shock. He probably stood there for a good 5 minutes, staring at her doorway, hoping she would run back out and say she was just kidding. Finally, he turned and walked back home, realizing the metaphor of having your heart ripped out was more real than he thought.

He went into his house, bawling his eyes out before he even had the door shut. He saw the sign tacked near the door, and ripped it down, tearing to pieces in anger. He had to prove to her he didn't care about the watch. He went into the garage, grabbing a hammer, ready to smash it to pieces. He hesitated for a second, before bringing the hammer down, but it just bounced off the face of the watch. He tried three more times, but he hadn't even made a dent. “What the hell is this thing made of!?”

He brought it into the kitchen next, filling the sink with water. When it was deep enough, he submerged the watch, hoping to sort it out. He left it in the water for a good few minutes, then pulled it out. He hit the power button, expecting nothing, but the screen still lit back up, even displaying the INT app, like it was taunting him. “Son of a BITCH!” He threw it against the wall behind him, which left a good nick in the sheetrock, but when he picked the watch back up, it was still working.

He didn’t know what else to do. He needed to talk to Jenny. Hopefully he could work this out with her. He rushed over to her front door, pounding on it. “Please Jenny! Just come talk to me!” He yelled.

A car pulled into the driveway, coming to a stop as it reached the top. He looked back, realizing it was Jenny’s mom. “You have to take this thing back!” He yelled over to her, as she stepped out of her car.

She started walking towards him. “Matt. Calm down. What’s this all about?”

“I don’t want this anymore. You take it back.” He held out the watch for her to take, but she just shook her head. “FINE!” He threw the watch down onto the sidewalk as hard as he could, making it bounce and skip into the yard. Jenny let out a little gasp, seeing him throw the watch as she opened the door.

Jenny’s mom got a little smile on her lips. “WHAT ARE YOU SO HAPPY ABOUT!? JENNY JUST BROKE UP WITH ME BECAUSE OF THAT THING!” He looked at her in shock and anger. “YOU DID THIS! DIDN'T YOU!? YOU MADE HER BREAK UP WITH ME!”

“Matt. I can’t believe you’re still on that.” Jenny said, making Matt realize she had been watching the whole scene. He could tell she had been crying really hard.

“No, Jenny. Matt’s right. I gave him the smartwatch.” Both teens just stared at her in shock. She went to pick up the watch from where it landed in the yard, and started walking back towards them. “Both of you come into the house with me. We need to have a good talk.”

Both teens followed the woman into the living room in stunned silence, sitting down next to each other on the couch. Jenny’s mom sat down in a chair across from them, and started hitting buttons on the watch screen, then turned it back towards them. “Says here it was submerged in water for a couple minutes, and before that the accelerometer says it was jostled quite a bit. I’m guessing you were trying to break it.” Matt nodded his head to her. “Good. Then you pass my final test.”

“What test?” He asked.

“Well, I know you love Jenny, and how much she loves you. In order to get the two of you together, it needed to be something drastic like this, or I’m sure you both would have been too afraid to share your real feelings.”

“You really gave that to him mom!?” Jenny still couldn’t believe it.

“Oh right.” Jenny’s mom pulled out a little key fob looking device from her purse, hitting one of the buttons. “There. Now all commands given to Jenny have been canceled.”

Jenny was finally starting to realize her mother had really given the watch to Matt, and it was making her mad. “What the hell! How could you just let him have control of me like that!? Let him keep me naked!?” She got up from her seat.

“SIT DOWN JENNY!” Jenny sat back down, a little frightened. “What was it you said? Oh yes. You said you like to be naked in front of him. You also said it was hot to be under his control.”

“You were listening to us!?” Matt blurted out.

“Only to the important things.” she paused for a moment. They both just stared at her in shock. “Tell me, Jenny. Do you love him?”

"Yes. I do."

“Matt?”

“Yes. I love Jenny.”

“Then everything worked out.”

Jenny spoke up again. “How can I ever trust you again? I feel like I don't even know you.”

“Jenny... I’m still your mother. I’m the one who carried you for nine months and breast fed you. I’m the one who looked after you when you were sick, or when you broke your arm in 4th grade. I will always be your mother, and always look out for you. I’m sorry for having to keep this part of my life from you for so long. Just know it was important that I did. I love you, Jenny. You mean everything to me.”

"But how do I know if it was real? How do I know you didn't just command me to love Matt?"

"You'll just have to trust me about this, like you trust him with control of you, and have faith in your own feelings. The watch isn't capable of things like that. It can't make you love someone, Jenny. It can't create feelings out of nothing. It can only enhance or suppress them."

The two teens considered what that really meant for a moment, but Jenny continued, "So what commands did you give to me exactly?"

"Just two. One was to not believe Matt if he told you I gave him the smartwatch, and the other was to break up with him the day after he told you I gave him the smartwatch."

“Why though? Why would you make Jenny break up with me?”

“Well, like I said, it was my final test for you. I had to know that you would really give up the watch for her. Like you said yourself. It was really two tests in one. You could have just as easily ordered her to keep going out with you.”

“So, this was all just a big test to see if Matt was good enough for me?”

“Yes. Well that, and I have my own reasons.” She stood up, and started to get undressed. “Now Jenny. The rules still apply.”

Jenny looked at her mother in shock. “What if I refuse?”

“Well, I would be disappointed, but if you really want to wear clothes, I won't stop you.” Once undressed, she grabbed the watch and the little remote and walked to stand in front of Matt. “Here.” She held out the watch to him.

“Why are you giving this back to me? I figured this was all over.”

“No. It’s yours. It is a gift, after all.” He took it from her, still unsure. “This is supposed to go with it.” She held out the little remote for him. “The next version of the app will have an end button, but for now if you want to undo all commands, that’s the easiest way.”

After handing it to him, she grabbed a small box from her purse, giving it to Jenny. "Well, open it." Inside was a pair of earrings similar to her own. "Blocks the signal when you wear them.”

“I found this in the driveway. I think it belongs to one of you.” She set the little stainless steel ring on the coffee table. “I'm sure the two of you have a lot to talk about." She took her clothes and purse and headed to her own room.

Now alone, Jenny turned to Matt, “I’m so sorry I didn’t believe you, Matt.”

“It’s not your fault. You were under some kind of command not to believe me.” He picked up the ring from the coffee table. “Listen, Jenny. I still love you. I still want you to be my girlfriend. Will you go out with me again?” He held it out to her.

She got a huge smile on her face, and let him put the ring on her finger. “Does that even count as a break up? If I was forced to do it against my will? I love you, Matt.” She leaned in for a long kiss.

“So, what do you think about everything your mom just said?”

“Well. I’m not sure. Her heart seemed to be in the right place, even if she went about this in a really weird way.” She stood up and started to remove her clothes.

“What are you doing?” he said with a little chuckle.

“Well my mom said it was up to me whether I wanted to wear clothes or not. I just feel kind of weird sitting here with you, not naked.”

“Jenny. You’re awesome.”

“I know.”


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