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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 1:39 am
by steam train
Lovely way to finish what has been a benchmark example of great fantasy ENM & ENF writing in the one magnificent story.

Thank you again for all your time and effort.

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 2:44 am
by NudeBaG
“This is my first attempt at writing this kind of fiction. Feedback welcome. It’s not likely to be the most original story ever, but let’s see how it goes!”

This quote that kicked this whole thing off…
Holy shit!
If this really was your first attempt at this…
You have a gift.

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 2:46 am
by Freesub
I liked it, though perhaps exposing Hannah feels like a loose end that should've been closed.

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 3:55 am
by NudeBaG
In a possible ENF spinoff, I’d still LOVE for Cam to see Hannah, Mia (and maybe even Ellie and Natalie) stripped😈
I know Cam and Ellie got together, but the poor boy deserves to see SOMETHING, right?

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 4:48 am
by JustHere10
Freesub wrote: Mon Feb 24, 2025 2:46 am I liked it, though perhaps exposing Hannah feels like a loose end that should've been closed.
I thought it was a nice subtle way of her getting some embarrassment and keeping her in check so the pics don't circulate. After all Mia probably wouldn't be on board with humiliating Hannah

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 5:22 am
by steam train
JustHere10 wrote: Mon Feb 24, 2025 4:48 am
Freesub wrote: Mon Feb 24, 2025 2:46 am I liked it, though perhaps exposing Hannah feels like a loose end that should've been closed.
I thought it was a nice subtle way of her getting some embarrassment and keeping her in check so the pics don't circulate. After all Mia probably wouldn't be on board with humiliating Hannah
…. But the mother might 😉

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 12:34 pm
by DrWhoFanJ
Mainly repeating the sentiments already ably expressed by others in this thread, but also appending that it’s always a slightly sad day when a very popular and excellent story has to come to an end. Since this is your very first story here, I can only anticipate somehow-even-better stories from you in future!