steam train wrote: Wed Feb 19, 2025 10:15 pm
Thank you again for this wonderful series. I have enjoyed how the author slowly exposed the girls over the course of this ENM story. A lot of authors like to leave things to the readers imagination, but I am not one of those. I usually have a clear idea in my head what a character looks like and try to bring that out in the story. This has been done so well in this story. For example over multiple chapters we get a full idea of Ellie : “” Had perfectly rounded, smooth breasts with small, pink nipples standing erect from the middle of them and a thick pubic bush of ginger hair which also covered her pronounced labia lips.””. That’s a very full description
Greatly appreciate your writing efforts.
100% agree
I really don’t like picking favorites on here, but this work really speaks for itself.
From start to finish-
The ‘art of the tease’ has been on full display!
And that tease paid off 100 fold!
And it seems there’s a bit more to go
steam train wrote: Wed Feb 19, 2025 10:15 pm
Thank you again for this wonderful series. I have enjoyed how the author slowly exposed the girls over the course of this ENM story. A lot of authors like to leave things to the readers imagination, but I am not one of those. I usually have a clear idea in my head what a character looks like and try to bring that out in the story. This has been done so well in this story. For example over multiple chapters we get a full idea of Ellie : “” Had perfectly rounded, smooth breasts with small, pink nipples standing erect from the middle of them and a thick pubic bush of ginger hair which also covered her pronounced labia lips.””. That’s a very full description
Greatly appreciate your writing efforts.
Never let it be said that I don't respond to feedback.
Thanks to you and everyone else who has helped me to make this story better!
