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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)

Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2024 7:37 pm
by destroyer008
Great episode! I'm thrilled to learn what happens next! :)

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pm
by Emily
Darky wrote: Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:13 pm
destroyer008 wrote: Wed Aug 14, 2024 7:47 pm
Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far-fetched? ;)

Maybe they put the content of their actions up for sale on the internet. Put up a website for Riley; people could visit and pay money to get access to pictures and videos. Maybe they should ask for a small fee each time they find someone that uses Riley's helpless situation to their advantage, if you know what I mean... 8-)
Well a sort of OnlyFans for Riley isn’t a bad idea. Good bring a lot of bucks
I’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2024 4:47 am
by Darky
Emily wrote: Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pm
Darky wrote: Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:13 pm
destroyer008 wrote: Wed Aug 14, 2024 7:47 pm
Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far-fetched? ;)

Maybe they put the content of their actions up for sale on the internet. Put up a website for Riley; people could visit and pay money to get access to pictures and videos. Maybe they should ask for a small fee each time they find someone that uses Riley's helpless situation to their advantage, if you know what I mean... 8-)
Well a sort of OnlyFans for Riley isn’t a bad idea. Good bring a lot of bucks
I’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!
If it doesn’t fit, don’t do it. But in your latest chapter you admit that Riley keeps losing clothes due to assignments which already means she had to walk home bottomless after the waxing, naked after the party, in her dorm hallways. And still the girls have power over her.

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:01 am
by computerphoto
Darky wrote: Mon Aug 19, 2024 4:47 am
Emily wrote: Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pm
Darky wrote: Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:13 pm

Well a sort of OnlyFans for Riley isn’t a bad idea. Good bring a lot of bucks
I’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!
If it doesn’t fit, don’t do it. But in your latest chapter you admit that Riley keeps losing clothes due to assignments which already means she had to walk home bottomless after the waxing, naked after the party, in her dorm hallways. And still the girls have power over her.
They got dressed after the waxing, and then had to toss their bras out the window, and they lost the rest of there clothes when they had to leave them in the bathroom when taking the shower and walk to the dorm room naked.

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:04 am
by computerphoto
computerphoto wrote: Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:01 am
Darky wrote: Mon Aug 19, 2024 4:47 am
Emily wrote: Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pm

I’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!
If it doesn’t fit, don’t do it. But in your latest chapter you admit that Riley keeps losing clothes due to assignments which already means she had to walk home bottomless after the waxing, naked after the party, in her dorm hallways. And still the girls have power over her.
They got dressed after the waxing, and then had to toss their bras out the window, and they lost the rest of there clothes when they had to leave them in the bathroom when taking the shower and walk to the dorm room naked.
But Darky does have a point, alot of people have already seen her naked, and more videos and photos were taken after the video that started this mess, so I agree I think no matter what is done she has no way to get out of this mess, and I mention in a comment also a while back about her posting the stuff online. So yeah I think I said, that would be a good punishment, making her post it herself online, and having to send to x number of people each time she has to post something.

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:05 am
by computerphoto
computerphoto wrote: Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:04 am
computerphoto wrote: Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:01 am
Darky wrote: Mon Aug 19, 2024 4:47 am

If it doesn’t fit, don’t do it. But in your latest chapter you admit that Riley keeps losing clothes due to assignments which already means she had to walk home bottomless after the waxing, naked after the party, in her dorm hallways. And still the girls have power over her.
They got dressed after the waxing, and then had to toss their bras out the window, and they lost the rest of there clothes when they had to leave them in the bathroom when taking the shower and walk to the dorm room naked.
But Darky does have a point, alot of people have already seen her naked, and more videos and photos were taken after the photos and video that started this mess, so I agree I think no matter what is done she has no way to get out of this mess, and I mention in a comment also a while back about her posting the stuff online. So yeah I think I said, that would be a good punishment, making her post it herself online, and having to send to x number of people each time she has to post something.

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2024 7:12 am
by destroyer008
Emily wrote: Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pm
Darky wrote: Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:13 pm
destroyer008 wrote: Wed Aug 14, 2024 7:47 pm
Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far-fetched? ;)

Maybe they put the content of their actions up for sale on the internet. Put up a website for Riley; people could visit and pay money to get access to pictures and videos. Maybe they should ask for a small fee each time they find someone that uses Riley's helpless situation to their advantage, if you know what I mean... 8-)
Well a sort of OnlyFans for Riley isn’t a bad idea. Good bring a lot of bucks
I’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!
As long as the material isn't distributed to people like Riley's parents and such the threat of sending them something is still relevant, as the website footage would be accessed by anonymous people from all over the globe. But I agree that some level of threat must be kept up to keep her make do things she otherwise wouldn't do.

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)

Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2024 7:27 pm
by Bucket
Yet another new chapter, and so soon too! 😃

Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon. 😃

I've yet to actually read the latest two chapters. I might just go ahead and read them this week, or perhaps wait for one more chapter. I love binge reading several chapters at a time.

Anyway yeah, thanks for the new chapter!

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)

Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2024 2:07 am
by Emily
Bucket wrote: Mon Aug 19, 2024 7:27 pm Yet another new chapter, and so soon too! 😃

Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon. 😃

I've yet to actually read the latest two chapters. I might just go ahead and read them this week, or perhaps wait for one more chapter. I love binge reading several chapters at a time.

Anyway yeah, thanks for the new chapter!
Aww thank you. Comments like this mean a ton to me and definitely motivate me to keep writing.

I can’t wait to hear your thoughts on the new parts!

Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)

Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2024 7:21 pm
by Bucket
Emily wrote: Tue Aug 20, 2024 2:07 am
Bucket wrote: Mon Aug 19, 2024 7:27 pm Yet another new chapter, and so soon too! 😃

Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon. 😃

I've yet to actually read the latest two chapters. I might just go ahead and read them this week, or perhaps wait for one more chapter. I love binge reading several chapters at a time.

Anyway yeah, thanks for the new chapter!
Aww thank you. Comments like this mean a ton to me and definitely motivate me to keep writing.

I can’t wait to hear your thoughts on the new parts!
Glad to hear it, and will certainly give you my thoughts soon!

Finding an amazing story such as this, knowing you've got plenty of chapters to read ahead is just so nice. As you're reading it, you're having so much fun and knowing there's still a few more chapters to read makes for a great time.... and then you catch up, and there are no more chapters left and you have to wait for the next chapter which sucks lol.

So that's why I say, I'm so happy to see you giving us new chapters on what seems like a weekly basis (give or take) and it's just so damn appreciated.

So yeah, keep up the extraordinary work!