skillbox wrote: ↑Mon May 23, 2022 1:49 am
This was a crazy and super enjoyable ride! Man, I loved watching this story and reading whenever new chapters came out. You really managed to bring so many characters to life nearly as soon as they appeared. By the end I was super invested in the fights and cared just as much about the journey to the stripping.
Thanks alot! Honestly I'm weird in that the fights themselves were always just as important to me in both contests as the sexual content. This is probably a side effect of the fact that the majority of my real-life storytelling experience centers around fantasy combat, and the fact that the system I use to run Thirst Game contests was originally setup for my fantasy universe.
skillbox wrote: ↑Mon May 23, 2022 1:49 am
Honestly, I thought Babysitter was surprisingly fun. Just a little brat who’s weirdly hilarious whenever she was on screen.
Babysitter was my absolute favorite out of the 20 for sure. She was wild, uncouth, absurdly immature, and had zero empathy towards others. A lot of stories feature evil masterminds causing the stripping of their victims. Babysitter was the complete opposite, not masterminding anything but still stripping people based on aggressive flailing and chaos made manifest. Her personality and fighting style just emerged as this mixture of anime bratty girls, little kids who never behave, Majin Buu, and this one ex of mine who was WAAAY too into the whole "daddy" thing. It's kinda funny because Babysitter was deliberately designed to lose and lose badly by Revengedpirate, to the point where I removed the long list of weaknesses on her sheet completely in an attempt to balance her better.
skillbox wrote: ↑Mon May 23, 2022 1:49 am
And I love what you did with Author! Now she’ll have time to do alllllll the TTRPGs she wants. And maybe she’ll be the one to start writing ENF stories on this forum. Pen is mightier than the sword indeed.
Yep, congrats on the victory! I imagine that over time Author is going to be streaming so much TTRPG content on Thirst Trap that she becomes a legitimate rival to Critical Role. I'm sure some of the fans will nickname her channel "Critical Hole", but that's just how the internet works.
I enjoyed writing Author a bunch because of how meticulous she was in her planning, where most of the other girls' entire strategies had 1-2 steps at best. Author was lining up step by step from the very start, planning out future battles before she was even done with her current one. Oddly enough, half of her plans didn't work out at all. Her secret to survival was having a backup plan for when she was "beaten". And by "backup plan", I mean "sleep attack" considering that was her comeback ace three times in a row (against Fitness Instructor, Horse Jockey, and Waitress). Author is responsible for more naps than Sleep Number Beds.
Also there's something amusing about the fact that the only black entrant winds up winning the thing. I kept feeling sad that the majority of the user-submitted entrants were white since I had a wider range of diversity in the first event, but in the end it was basically a snowstorm with all of those white things falling down.
skillbox wrote: ↑Mon May 23, 2022 1:49 am
What more is there to say? This story was hot, heartwarming, funny and genuinely gripping. I’m sad there’s no plans for a Thirst Game 3, but I’ll be rereading the first two for time to come. (Already read the first one twice! With a few rereads of my favourite chapters.)
Either way TG Expanded Universe is awesome. Might write something myself for it!
You could definitely write something for the Thirst Trap Studios universe! There's a whole bunch of potential games and show concepts. I have it imagined such that the app has the ability for user to play strip poker and other strip games against one-another as one of the many features, so you might even write up something with Author hosting something of that nature.
The sad part is that my plan for TG3 was going to have a roleplay theme with characters like Barbarian and Rogue going at it, so it would've been so easy to stick defending champion Author in there as the DM.
Writing up these huge stories across months just ends up being super exhausting. I ran into this giant fatigue with Summer Camp of Playville years ago and it wiped me out badly, and then both Thirst Games had the same problem. If I did another of these, I would need to vastly reduce the scope of the writing portion of the event somehow (possibly making it first person following a single entrant).