I certainly encourage readers to be inspired by the stories here. But this modified version could be more modified. Basically it's the exact
same wording with huge penis inserted in place of normal size.
I would have preferred the re-write to be in Buckaroo's style of writing, possible a change in point of view, to bring out thoughts and actions
that were NOT in the original version.
Don't give up on asking to do alternate versions, but please make it more your own.
It's your unique style that makes reading a Buckaroo story interesting.
Water Tubing Accident
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I have a style of writing?
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I thought about this when the re-write was proposed. If I had done the re-write, I would have kept his penis a normal size but had a larger boat with more female relatives on board, no towel available of course. He can't always cover up as he's called upon to help manage to tube cords while several other females take their turns in the water.
There might also be an erection problem on the boat eventually. When they finally return to the dock, he just gives up and allows whatever relatives that are there to see him naked as he assists in tying up the boat. He finally just calmly walks back naked to the cabin, all sense of modesty lost.
There might also be an erection problem on the boat eventually. When they finally return to the dock, he just gives up and allows whatever relatives that are there to see him naked as he assists in tying up the boat. He finally just calmly walks back naked to the cabin, all sense of modesty lost.
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This may have been idealNickTwisp wrote: Sat Apr 05, 2025 4:26 pm I thought about this when the re-write was proposed. If I had done the re-write, I would have kept his penis a normal size but had a larger boat with more female relatives on board, no towel available of course. He can't always cover up as he's called upon to help manage to tube cords while several other females take their turns in the water.
There might also be an erection problem on the boat eventually. When they finally return to the dock, he just gives up and allows whatever relatives that are there to see him naked as he assists in tying up the boat. He finally just calmly walks back naked to the cabin, all sense of modesty lost.
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That evening after dark, he talks his shy cousin Nick Twisp into going skinny dipping with him in the lake. Much to Nick's dismay, they are subsequently joined by Jessica (in a bathing suit). Nick is appalled to be caught naked by Jessica and another female cousin.
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BTW, I am working on the continuation of "Nick's Sports Physical>"
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BTW, I am working on the continuation of "Nick's Sports Physical>"
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