Brown Eye Hole - a girls don't need modesty story

[EddieDavidson]

I do not "do" ages - the characters are the age the reader wants/needs them to be.

I prefer relative maturity, and there are enough context clues for you to make an educated guess - however I dont' know the relative laws current or future and I am not going to do ages.

I have another chapter for this one, but I have been distracted lately.

[steam train]

I do not "do" ages - the characters are the age the reader wants/needs them to be.

I prefer relative maturity, and there are enough context clues for you to make an educated guess - however I dont' know the relative laws current or future and I am not going to do ages.

I suspected this might be your writing style. I have had this discussion over many years with other authors. Some like to leave things to the reader’s discretion and likes while other authors, myself included, want the reader to imagine the character just as I imagine them when writing.

Both are very valid methods and add to the variety within story archives.

For me Tina’s lack of breasts but having pubes (albeit shaved off unless she is lying) suggests to me probably 11 years old but she could be as old as 12 but no later in age. As I noted, you have written in chapter 1 “ Tina is a year younger than me and shorter”, so that quote would make Cole 12 or possibly 13 years old at the eldest end of the possibilities.