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Re: Lisa Beaufort Doesn’t Need Modesty
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 4:37 pm
by Freesub
superevil7 wrote: Tue Feb 18, 2025 2:22 pm
Great story, Steam Train! I noticed you borrowed a little from my Fairly Big Tear story, but I think you did a wonderful job weaving the story together, and making it even better! I have to admit, my favorite type of stories focus on one-sided nudity. I would like to request you write a story where only the girls are naked, and the boys have the upper hand the whole time. No worries if that's not your thing, and you don't want to do that. I'll keep enjoying your stories anyway!
Agreed. Like I suggested above, maybe a one-off revenge for Wayne Pulaski, which can be used later to further develop the character across stores
Re: Lisa Beaufort Doesn’t Need Modesty
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 4:54 pm
by perseus
Freesub wrote: Tue Feb 18, 2025 4:37 pm
superevil7 wrote: Tue Feb 18, 2025 2:22 pm
Great story, Steam Train! I noticed you borrowed a little from my Fairly Big Tear story, but I think you did a wonderful job weaving the story together, and making it even better! I have to admit, my favorite type of stories focus on one-sided nudity. I would like to request you write a story where only the girls are naked, and the boys have the upper hand the whole time. No worries if that's not your thing, and you don't want to do that. I'll keep enjoying your stories anyway!
Agreed. Like I suggested above, maybe a one-off revenge for Wayne Pulaski, which can be used later to further develop the character across stores
Not to push my story
but my story with him was about him getting cosmic revenge
But I too would like to see a story about the boys being in total control of the situation over the girls.
Re: Lisa Beaufort Doesn’t Need Modesty
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 7:46 pm
by steam train
superevil7 wrote: Tue Feb 18, 2025 2:22 pm
Great story, Steam Train! I noticed you borrowed a little from my Fairly Big Tear story, but I think you did a wonderful job weaving the story together, and making it even better!
Yes you are right, there is certainly inspiration from your early story. After so many years of writing I find the motivation for a new story often comes from an idea or ideas from another story. I hope I did justice to your idea
Re: Lisa Beaufort Doesn’t Need Modesty
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 7:53 pm
by steam train
superevil7 wrote: Tue Feb 18, 2025 2:22 pm
I noticed you borrowed a little from my Fairly Big Tear story, but I think you did a wonderful job weaving the story together, and making it even better!
PS I suspect the sequel where I am trying to write about the growing relationship between Rebecca and Paul and their frolicking in the lake will be greatly influenced by your above story. It is undoubtedly the inspiration for what I see happening between the two in the lake …. But how far will Rebecca allow Paul to go … how far is Paul prepared to go?
Re: Lisa Beaufort Doesn’t Need Modesty
Posted: Thu Feb 20, 2025 10:07 pm
by Dorky
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