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Re: Rachel Barker (part 2 added)

Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2024 9:08 pm
by RebeccaShaw
Rachel Barker Part 3

The boys went back to playing on the simulator and I began to calm down and get ready as if I were going out for a drink on a normal summer evening. I tried to block my mind from Steven and knew one way or another I would work something out tomorrow but now I wanted to prove to Lee I wasn't all mouth and would display no matter who he had invited over. I guessed it might just be a few of his idiot mates who I would most likely never see again and they would get the sight of their lives and that made me giggle to myself.

I looked at the clock and gave a final look in the mirror, even twirled to see my little skirt flip up and thought despite the outfit looking kind of embarrassing it was also cute. I knocked on the door of the spare room and waited as the boys did their final lap and Lee was delighted that he had beaten Steven’s lap time at the Silverstone Grand Prix circuit. He was gloating about it and I thought never mind the stupid lap time, what about the things you have done to his wife!

Sam was sitting on the same chair that my whole ordeal had begun earlier in the day and Lee told me to get over his knee as I needed a little more colour on my bottom for my “Display.” Sam was grinning as I slumper over and remembered how to lift my bum up as he flipped my skirt up and spent the next five minutes slapping every millimetre of my bum cheeks. It wasn't too painful and I managed not to spoil my makeup but it left a lovely heat spreading from my bottom to my pussy.

As I was rubbing my bum Sam and Lee went downstairs and got their shoes on. I followed and then the realisation hit me that we were going out. God No I thought and Lee and Sam could see the panic in my face. They both smiled and Sam added we were not going far so “get over it.” I was on the point of refusing as Lee opened the door and held his hand to motion me outside. His stern look reminded me to do as he said and walked out and prayed no one I knew would see me walking along the street like this.

“Don't worry Rachel, we are only going round to my parents, they have agreed you can do a little performance for them,” he laughed “And a few others” he added.

I wanted to die right there on the spot and shook my head but kept walking. I didn’t get on with his Mum Karen and his Dad John had always come across as slimy and pervy, always giving me learning looks when I wore a short skirt and so on. My nipples suddenly felt twice as big and a physical shiver ran between my legs as I admitted to myself that I was indeed going to go through with this. I kept walking and made it obvious I wasn't going to back down as the boys looked so pleased with themselves.

“Remember Rachel, you do everything without question and not a hint of defiance, not even a disapproving look on your face my Girl, is this crystal clear?” he informed me.

I replied with a very confident “Yes Sir.” making him smile again as he opened the door.

Karen saw me and a huge grin spread across her face. “Well Mrs Barker, what a pleasant surprise to have the pleasure of your company.” she said sarcastically.

She took my hand and led me through the kitchen to a crowded lounge with a small wooden coffee table in the centre. I saw her Husband John sitting on the sofa with what I presumed was Lee’s Granddad. My legs gave a little shudder as I saw their daughter Tina was also there and felt shocked that they would let her take part as she was a few years younger than Lee. Another man and woman were there as well who I vaguely recognised as neighbours who lived a little way down the street but I had never spoken to. Then as if it couldn't get any worse James ran in. He was the cousin of Lee and about the same age as Tina and was always over kicking his ball in our front garden and just generally being a nuisance kid all the time.

Karen pointed to the little table, “Up you get Mrs Barker, let everyone have a good look at your nice outfit.” she smiled.

They all murmured with approval and commented among themselves how well it suited me and I hardly looked like a stuck up cow now. Karen asked if I had chosen it myself and laughter rang out when I said I had and Lee added that I would be wearing the same sort of things everytime Steven was away from now on. They all gasped in disbelief as Karen explained all that Lee had told her about this unbelievable day. Sam added that I had a new name now and it was “Bitch”. Karen asked if that was true and I gave a polite “Yes Mrs Turner it is true”. Lee looked satisfied with my performance so far as lots of questions were asked to both he and Sam and I tried to listen but I couldn’t catch everything that was being said.

James walked up to stand in front of me and with no attempt to hide it he bent down a little to look up my skirt. “So can I call you Bitch from now on, Mrs Barker?” he asked.

Everyone laughed and Lee said yes of course, anytime he saw me he could call me Bitch. I was blushing more now when I saw Lee take James to one side and I knew exactly what was going to happen. Karen walked around serving tea and biscuits and there was a general hum of conversation in the room. James walked up to me again and Lee announced that young James had something to say so could we have quiet. My hands pressed harder into my head and I thought my heart had stopped as he seemed to take forever to speak.

“Corner BItch,” he tried to sound strict but was laughing too much to achieve that.

I got down from the table and saw a corner of the room that looked clear and obviously prepared specially for my visit. Getting down from the table was awkward with my hands still on my head but I managed and walked over to the corner. I pressed my nose firmly to the wall and got myself in my well practised pose now. Karen congratulated Lee on finding a very suitable position for me and added that it should put an end to my snide,backtaking, bitching that I was known for. Everyone agreed and added their own congratulations to Lee.

I was made to stand back up on the table and then sent to the corner by various other people to show how well I could obey instructions. I knew this was the easy part and knew the hard part was coming as again I saw Lee talking to James. I was back up on the table with James in front of me again and he had a huge grin on his face. The room was quiet as he looked right in my eyes.

“Display Bitch,” he almost shouted with excitement.

I tried to focus quickly on what I was doing and not make a mess of it and Just tried to imagine an empty room as my hands went to the base of my crop top and tugged it firmly up almost as high as my shoulders to bare my breasts. Then as fast as I could I reached under my little pink skirt and yanked my knickers to my knees and thrust my legs along the edge of the table to stretch them tight. Then the final ignominy and to complete my total shame, I lifted my skirt high above my waist. For a few seconds the room was silent then erupted into loud, raucous laughter.

All I could concentrate on was staying still and not looking anyone in the eye as one by one they walked around me looking closely at all I had to show. Karen shook her head and said my bottom wasn't very red but Lee assured her it would be by the end of tonight which made everyone laugh again. Her Husband John just reached out and tweaked my nipple before a glance from Karen made him move his hand. He lowered his head to look right at my pussy.

“Oh given, the undercarriage a run over with the razor, have you dear?” He asked “Just for us or keep it like this all the time?”

Lee and Sam came up and explained they were going to shave me totally bald later but it was like this when Lee first took my knickers down. The other guy was called Tony and he was just cupping my bum cheeks and lifting them and dropping them and announcing that had a lovely “Spring” to them and even gave them a couple of hard “Smacks". James saw this and ran behind me eager to do the same. He asked Lee if he could smack my bum as well. Lee looked at me and grinned.

“Why don't you ask the bitch if she would like you to give her some slaps to her bare bottom.” he told James.

James hurried back around to face me and looked up at my face for a second then right at my pussy which was at his eye level. “Well Bitch do you want some smacks to your bare bum?” he asked like it was the most normal thing in the world to ask a grown woman.

I knew I had to be polite and show respect to him just the same as everyone else and took a deep breath. “Yes please James, I would very much like to have lots of hard smacks to my bare bottom, if it isn't too much trouble.” he beamed with delight and replied “OH it's no trouble.”

With that he was soon behind me “Slapping” eagerly all over my bum cheeks. I could feel my cheeks beginning to sting a little but stayed in position without any trouble. Sam meanwhile was explaining to John and Tony how he thought it would be good if he had a way of opening my cunt lips more for when I am on display. They both thought that was an excellent idea and deep in thought at how they might achieve that. Sam took hold of my labia and pulled apart as far as he could and that along with the continuing “Smacks” from James had me thrusting my hips lewdly now.

Karen came to look closely between my legs now and Sam let go of my pussy lips so she could see better. She reached out and made me gasp as she pulled it down way harder than Sam had done. I screwed my face up in pain as James was still relentless with tanning my bottom as hard as he could. Karen kept holding tightly to my swollen labia and then almost tried to fold it back before exclaiming she had an idea.

“Maybe if I got a needle and some thread and just put a little stitch in her lips it would look a lot more open for when she likes to show herself like this.” she smiled.

I prayed she was joking but sensed she was serious as the other woman walked up,who was called Liz, added that it would probably feel no worse than having it pierced and lots of dirty sluts like me had rings in their parts. Sam and Lee looked delighted and said they would think about it. James announced his arm was tired with all this “Smacking” and did anyone else want a turn. John and Tony were about to volunteer when all of a sudden Tina spoke up.

“Can I have a turn Bitch?” she asked, “But I want to use my hairbrush, not my hand on your fat arse.”

Once again everyone laughed and Lee asked her how she knew about what else a hairbrush could be used for. She snapped back that he wasn't the only one to read Granddad’s magazines which again brought more laughter. She ran to her room to fetch it and my eyes opened wide when I saw how big it was. Lee once again reminded me to be polite and the whole room fell silent. I knew I couldn’t call her Sir and began to speak. .

“Yes MIss Tina, I would be so grateful if I could go over your knee and,” I hesitated, “ have my bare bottom thrashed with your hairbrush to teach me my place on the street now,”

Of course she looked delighted and sat on a dining chair and hooked her finger for me to go over to her. I stumbled down from the table and kept my hands on my head and walked absurdly to ensure my knickers stayed at my knees until I was facing her. Without saying anything she swung the brush against the inside of my right thigh making me let out a little yelp. I hardly had time to process the sting when she spun the brush around in her hand and gave me a “backhand” slap on my left thigh.

“Close your legs you dumb bitch. I don't want to look at how you neatly shave your bush for my brother and his mates.” she spat.

Everyone seemed to quieten down and were fascinated by this strict attitude and persona from a girl less than half my age and not far off half my size. Lee laughed that I must spend all my time sorting out my precious bush instead of cleaning my car or the house properly. Sam added that when they shave me bald later I will have more time to look after the house properly. Everyone laughed at that as well as me closing my legs and Tina dragging my knickers to my ankles and making me step right out them.

“Go on Mrs Barker, get right over my daughter’s knee so she can show us all where you belong.” she said proudly.

As soon as my hands touched the floor and my bottom was in the air she began to swing the brush down with such venom I was howling more like a stuck pig than a grown woman. The pain was agonising and immediate and my legs were kicking frantically. The room filled with gasps and laughter and mocking comments.

“Enjoying yourself Bitch?”............”What a cry baby”.........”Hey Lee, fancy your little sister having to show you how it’s done properly.”

She yanked my head back by grabbing my ponytail and told James to come and pick my knickers up. Between snivelling and sobbing and my hair being pulled so tight I saw him standing in front of my face with my knickers in his hands. I was horrified to see him turn his nose up in disgust as they were clearly wet.

“We don't want to listen to your pathetic whining, you stupid bitch. Ask him to stuff them in your mouth” hissed Tina as she yanked my hair harder.

“Oh please, Please James Sir, will you put my knickers in my mouth so you don't have to listen to my stuck up, know it all smart mouth and me crying like a baby because I am getting my bare bottom spanked like I need very often from now on.” I made the most shaming statement of my whole life.

He did as I asked with a huge smile on his face and as I closed my mouth over my knickers Tina let go of my hair. I stared back at the floor only to be told by Karen to look up and see our new visitors who had arrived just in time to hear my polite request to James.

I lifted my head to see Steven and his parents and my own parents join in a round of applause! Then Karen offered them a cup of tea and a seat to watch the rest of my performance for the evening.

Re: Rachel Barker part 3

Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2024 9:13 pm
by RebeccaShaw
Rachel Barker Part 3

The boys went back to playing on the simulator and I began to calm down and get ready as if I were going out for a drink on a normal summer evening. I tried to block my mind from Steven and knew one way or another I would work something out tomorrow but now I wanted to prove to Lee I wasn't all mouth and would display no matter who he had invited over. I guessed it might just be a few of his idiot mates who I would most likely never see again and they would get the sight of their lives and that made me giggle to myself.

I looked at the clock and gave a final look in the mirror, even twirled to see my little skirt flip up and thought despite the outfit looking kind of embarrassing it was also cute. I knocked on the door of the spare room and waited as the boys did their final lap and Lee was delighted that he had beaten Steven’s lap time at the Silverstone Grand Prix circuit. He was gloating about it and I thought never mind the stupid lap time, what about the things you have done to his wife!

Sam was sitting on the same chair that my whole ordeal had begun earlier in the day and Lee told me to get over his knee as I needed a little more colour on my bottom for my “Display.” Sam was grinning as I slumper over and remembered how to lift my bum up as he flipped my skirt up and spent the next five minutes slapping every millimetre of my bum cheeks. It wasn't too painful and I managed not to spoil my makeup but it left a lovely heat spreading from my bottom to my pussy.

As I was rubbing my bum Sam and Lee went downstairs and got their shoes on. I followed and then the realisation hit me that we were going out. God No I thought and Lee and Sam could see the panic in my face. They both smiled and Sam added we were not going far so “get over it.” I was on the point of refusing as Lee opened the door and held his hand to motion me outside. His stern look reminded me to do as he said and walked out and prayed no one I knew would see me walking along the street like this.

“Don't worry Rachel, we are only going round to my parents, they have agreed you can do a little performance for them,” he laughed “And a few others” he added.

I wanted to die right there on the spot and shook my head but kept walking. I didn’t get on with his Mum Karen and his Dad John had always come across as slimy and pervy, always giving me learning looks when I wore a short skirt and so on. My nipples suddenly felt twice as big and a physical shiver ran between my legs as I admitted to myself that I was indeed going to go through with this. I kept walking and made it obvious I wasn't going to back down as the boys looked so pleased with themselves.

“Remember Rachel, you do everything without question and not a hint of defiance, not even a disapproving look on your face my Girl, is this crystal clear?” he informed me.

I replied with a very confident “Yes Sir.” making him smile again as he opened the door.

Karen saw me and a huge grin spread across her face. “Well Mrs Barker, what a pleasant surprise to have the pleasure of your company.” she said sarcastically.

She took my hand and led me through the kitchen to a crowded lounge with a small wooden coffee table in the centre. I saw her Husband John sitting on the sofa with what I presumed was Lee’s Granddad. My legs gave a little shudder as I saw their daughter Tina was also there and felt shocked that they would let her take part as she was a few years younger than Lee. Another man and woman were there as well who I vaguely recognised as neighbours who lived a little way down the street but I had never spoken to. Then as if it couldn't get any worse James ran in. He was the cousin of Lee and about the same age as Tina and was always over kicking his ball in our front garden and just generally being a nuisance kid all the time.

Karen pointed to the little table, “Up you get Mrs Barker, let everyone have a good look at your nice outfit.” she smiled.

They all murmured with approval and commented among themselves how well it suited me and I hardly looked like a stuck up cow now. Karen asked if I had chosen it myself and laughter rang out when I said I had and Lee added that I would be wearing the same sort of things everytime Steven was away from now on. They all gasped in disbelief as Karen explained all that Lee had told her about this unbelievable day. Sam added that I had a new name now and it was “Bitch”. Karen asked if that was true and I gave a polite “Yes Mrs Turner it is true”. Lee looked satisfied with my performance so far as lots of questions were asked to both he and Sam and I tried to listen but I couldn’t catch everything that was being said.

James walked up to stand in front of me and with no attempt to hide it he bent down a little to look up my skirt. “So can I call you Bitch from now on, Mrs Barker?” he asked.

Everyone laughed and Lee said yes of course, anytime he saw me he could call me Bitch. I was blushing more now when I saw Lee take James to one side and I knew exactly what was going to happen. Karen walked around serving tea and biscuits and there was a general hum of conversation in the room. James walked up to me again and Lee announced that young James had something to say so could we have quiet. My hands pressed harder into my head and I thought my heart had stopped as he seemed to take forever to speak.

“Corner BItch,” he tried to sound strict but was laughing too much to achieve that.

I got down from the table and saw a corner of the room that looked clear and obviously prepared specially for my visit. Getting down from the table was awkward with my hands still on my head but I managed and walked over to the corner. I pressed my nose firmly to the wall and got myself in my well practised pose now. Karen congratulated Lee on finding a very suitable position for me and added that it should put an end to my snide,backtaking, bitching that I was known for. Everyone agreed and added their own congratulations to Lee.

I was made to stand back up on the table and then sent to the corner by various other people to show how well I could obey instructions. I knew this was the easy part and knew the hard part was coming as again I saw Lee talking to James. I was back up on the table with James in front of me again and he had a huge grin on his face. The room was quiet as he looked right in my eyes.

“Display Bitch,” he almost shouted with excitement.

I tried to focus quickly on what I was doing and not make a mess of it and Just tried to imagine an empty room as my hands went to the base of my crop top and tugged it firmly up almost as high as my shoulders to bare my breasts. Then as fast as I could I reached under my little pink skirt and yanked my knickers to my knees and thrust my legs along the edge of the table to stretch them tight. Then the final ignominy and to complete my total shame, I lifted my skirt high above my waist. For a few seconds the room was silent then erupted into loud, raucous laughter.

All I could concentrate on was staying still and not looking anyone in the eye as one by one they walked around me looking closely at all I had to show. Karen shook her head and said my bottom wasn't very red but Lee assured her it would be by the end of tonight which made everyone laugh again. Her Husband John just reached out and tweaked my nipple before a glance from Karen made him move his hand. He lowered his head to look right at my pussy.

“Oh given, the undercarriage a run over with the razor, have you dear?” He asked “Just for us or keep it like this all the time?”

Lee and Sam came up and explained they were going to shave me totally bald later but it was like this when Lee first took my knickers down. The other guy was called Tony and he was just cupping my bum cheeks and lifting them and dropping them and announcing that had a lovely “Spring” to them and even gave them a couple of hard “Smacks". James saw this and ran behind me eager to do the same. He asked Lee if he could smack my bum as well. Lee looked at me and grinned.

“Why don't you ask the bitch if she would like you to give her some slaps to her bare bottom.” he told James.

James hurried back around to face me and looked up at my face for a second then right at my pussy which was at his eye level. “Well Bitch do you want some smacks to your bare bum?” he asked like it was the most normal thing in the world to ask a grown woman.

I knew I had to be polite and show respect to him just the same as everyone else and took a deep breath. “Yes please James, I would very much like to have lots of hard smacks to my bare bottom, if it isn't too much trouble.” he beamed with delight and replied “OH it's no trouble.”

With that he was soon behind me “Slapping” eagerly all over my bum cheeks. I could feel my cheeks beginning to sting a little but stayed in position without any trouble. Sam meanwhile was explaining to John and Tony how he thought it would be good if he had a way of opening my cunt lips more for when I am on display. They both thought that was an excellent idea and deep in thought at how they might achieve that. Sam took hold of my labia and pulled apart as far as he could and that along with the continuing “Smacks” from James had me thrusting my hips lewdly now.

Karen came to look closely between my legs now and Sam let go of my pussy lips so she could see better. She reached out and made me gasp as she pulled it down way harder than Sam had done. I screwed my face up in pain as James was still relentless with tanning my bottom as hard as he could. Karen kept holding tightly to my swollen labia and then almost tried to fold it back before exclaiming she had an idea.

“Maybe if I got a needle and some thread and just put a little stitch in her lips it would look a lot more open for when she likes to show herself like this.” she smiled.

I prayed she was joking but sensed she was serious as the other woman walked up,who was called Liz, added that it would probably feel no worse than having it pierced and lots of dirty sluts like me had rings in their parts. Sam and Lee looked delighted and said they would think about it. James announced his arm was tired with all this “Smacking” and did anyone else want a turn. John and Tony were about to volunteer when all of a sudden Tina spoke up.

“Can I have a turn Bitch?” she asked, “But I want to use my hairbrush, not my hand on your fat arse.”

Once again everyone laughed and Lee asked her how she knew about what else a hairbrush could be used for. She snapped back that he wasn't the only one to read Granddad’s magazines which again brought more laughter. She ran to her room to fetch it and my eyes opened wide when I saw how big it was. Lee once again reminded me to be polite and the whole room fell silent. I knew I couldn’t call her Sir and began to speak. .

“Yes MIss Tina, I would be so grateful if I could go over your knee and,” I hesitated, “ have my bare bottom thrashed with your hairbrush to teach me my place on the street now,”

Of course she looked delighted and sat on a dining chair and hooked her finger for me to go over to her. I stumbled down from the table and kept my hands on my head and walked absurdly to ensure my knickers stayed at my knees until I was facing her. Without saying anything she swung the brush against the inside of my right thigh making me let out a little yelp. I hardly had time to process the sting when she spun the brush around in her hand and gave me a “backhand” slap on my left thigh.

“Close your legs you dumb bitch. I don't want to look at how you neatly shave your bush for my brother and his mates.” she spat.

Everyone seemed to quieten down and were fascinated by this strict attitude and persona from a girl less than half my age and not far off half my size. Lee laughed that I must spend all my time sorting out my precious bush instead of cleaning my car or the house properly. Sam added that when they shave me bald later I will have more time to look after the house properly. Everyone laughed at that as well as me closing my legs and Tina dragging my knickers to my ankles and making me step right out them.

“Go on Mrs Barker, get right over my daughter’s knee so she can show us all where you belong.” she said proudly.

As soon as my hands touched the floor and my bottom was in the air she began to swing the brush down with such venom I was howling more like a stuck pig than a grown woman. The pain was agonising and immediate and my legs were kicking frantically. The room filled with gasps and laughter and mocking comments.

“Enjoying yourself Bitch?”............”What a cry baby”.........”Hey Lee, fancy your little sister having to show you how it’s done properly.”

She yanked my head back by grabbing my ponytail and told James to come and pick my knickers up. Between snivelling and sobbing and my hair being pulled so tight I saw him standing in front of my face with my knickers in his hands. I was horrified to see him turn his nose up in disgust as they were clearly wet.

“We don't want to listen to your pathetic whining, you stupid bitch. Ask him to stuff them in your mouth” hissed Tina as she yanked my hair harder.

“Oh please, Please James Sir, will you put my knickers in my mouth so you don't have to listen to my stuck up, know it all smart mouth and me crying like a baby because I am getting my bare bottom spanked like I need very often from now on.” I made the most shaming statement of my whole life.

He did as I asked with a huge smile on his face and as I closed my mouth over my knickers Tina let go of my hair. I stared back at the floor only to be told by Karen to look up and see our new visitors who had arrived just in time to hear my polite request to James.

I lifted my head to see Steven and his parents and my own parents join in a round of applause! Then Karen offered them a cup of tea and a seat to watch the rest of my performance for the evening.

Re: Rachel Barker (part 3 added)

Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2024 3:14 am
by litrob2000
Great story, Bex! Well done! Yes, please post more...

Re: Rachel Barker (part 3 added)

Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2024 10:31 am
by Malman2002
Hi Rebecca....really creative and well written.