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Re: ASS Phase 3 - Executionus

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2022 4:47 pm
by jastes22
This really was a fantastic story. And I wouldn't be opposed to having that epilogue stretched out into it's own story. Maybe Kimberly finds something to hold over Victoria and stretches out her torment over the last couple of days of camp.

Re: ASS Phase 3 - Executionus

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2022 10:35 pm
by Executionus
jastes22 wrote: Sun Aug 07, 2022 4:47 pm This really was a fantastic story. And I wouldn't be opposed to having that epilogue stretched out into it's own story. Maybe Kimberly finds something to hold over Victoria and stretches out her torment over the last couple of days of camp.
Honestly I don't think there's much more that Kimberly could even do to Victoria at this point. Once you've let over a hundred boys fondle and masturbate a girl and sent explicit pics and vids to literally everyone she knows, it winds up being hard to find anything new to threaten or blackmail that girl with.

It is implied in the ending paragraph that Kimberly strips other girls who cross her though, as Kimberly has the mentality moving forward where she has nothing to lose if anyone ever tried to strip her back. After all, everyone has already seen it all, so why care if she's naked again?

That being said, I don't think I'll ever return to the Kimberly character. The story ended with Kimberly becoming the very thing she hated and she would be quite a toxic bully as time went on. Any story about her after her villain origin story would have too much negativity for me to enjoy writing it all that much. Even as a hero she was full of hatred the entire time. Her as a bully would get reeeeeal dark after a while.

Re: ASS Phase 3 - Executionus

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2022 10:05 pm
by Revengedpirate
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