Help with a story - ENF puzzles / challanges

[dublinjohn]

Sorry to double-post, but I just had another idea. Maybe at the start of the book, it explains that at any time, she can skip a page in exchange for a donation (ie a piece of clothing). Then at some point she could become stumped and have no choice but to skip the page...

...But then the next page begins with something like "based on your answer from the previous page...", and she realises she has to either go back and do the previous page, or forfeit yet another piece of clothing!

This reminds me of a story "Just Playing Along" by dragavan (spelling), it might be worth a read or re-read (which ever is the case) to see how someone else did it.

[SDS]

I'm looking for some ideas for the pages of the book, puzzles / challanges. let me know what you've got and to what stage of undress you think our poor protagonist will be at for yours. Here are a few examlples.

I wonder if there are any on here that could be adapted to your story.

https://www.brainzilla.com/logic/logic-grid/

Thanks ill take a look

[SDS]

Sorry to double-post, but I just had another idea. Maybe at the start of the book, it explains that at any time, she can skip a page in exchange for a donation (ie a piece of clothing). Then at some point she could become stumped and have no choice but to skip the page...

...But then the next page begins with something like "based on your answer from the previous page...", and she realises she has to either go back and do the previous page, or forfeit yet another piece of clothing!

This reminds me of a story "Just Playing Along" by dragavan (spelling), it might be worth a read or re-read (which ever is the case) to see how someone else did it.

Don't think I've read that one do you have a link?

[dublinjohn]

Sorry to double-post, but I just had another idea. Maybe at the start of the book, it explains that at any time, she can skip a page in exchange for a donation (ie a piece of clothing). Then at some point she could become stumped and have no choice but to skip the page...

...But then the next page begins with something like "based on your answer from the previous page...", and she realises she has to either go back and do the previous page, or forfeit yet another piece of clothing!

This reminds me of a story "Just Playing Along" by dragavan (spelling), it might be worth a read or re-read (which ever is the case) to see how someone else did it.

Don't think I've read that one do you have a link?

It might be on an old hard drive, I'll have a look tomorrow, or if you have the search on the old ASN site, his name was spelt dragavan


Edit, I found it, I saved it https://gyazo.com/e4a5dcb7b8586f89d0870f487a7b209f 13.25 years ago, I'll do a cut and paste


viewtopic.php?f=8&t=1983

[SDS]

Great story my first read

[dublinjohn]

Great story my first read

There is a reason I kept it that long

[dublinjohn]

I'm writing a story that stuck in my head and desperate to burst out! I could you some creative ideas as I know you all have from your wonderful work.

Imagine the scene a girl is caught in her worst fantasy, blackmailed to play along with the boys and their mean game of pretend. They set up the living room to look like a classroom, they make her stand up behind her desk as if called upon in class to read from her text book. It's like every kids worst nightmare at school but somehow bottomless with your underwear on show. All the boys surround her in their own fake desks laughing and teasing her as if they were really her class mates.

Every page of the book the boys had designed for her has a challange / puzzle that she must figure out / complete before she is allowed to turn over to the next before the awful game is finally over. Some just embarass her, some the anwsers is what article of clothing she must remove. Some are silly poems aimed to highlight her nudity and shame. Her chief tormentor pretends to be the teacher controling the game with the threat of everyone finding out about her naughty fantasy and the recording he had made of her previously.

I'm looking for some ideas for the pages of the book, puzzles / challanges. let me know what you've got and to what stage of undress you think our poor protagonist will be at for yours. Here are a few examlples.

• A page that tells her to show the digital clock times listed as an analog clock. With no pensil to hand she must demonstate this herself with her arms. Raising her arms to match the arms of a clock gives the boys a good look at her undies as her school shirt raises to uncover them.

• Step by step instructions on how to tie a girl scout knot... she has no string to demonstate so has to remove her school tie to do the knot.

• The 10 verses of "this old man" but everytime she says With a knick-knack paddywhack. one of the boys smacks her bottom with a ruler, every time she messes up or stops for too long she must start again.

• A page with some schoolwork marked by a teacher. A doodle of a bra has the teachers 'marking' sayng Don't doodle on your work. She realises she needs to rub out the bra with her pensil only to then realise that just like it has been removed from her work... it now needs removing from herself...

Did you ever write this?

[SDS]

No sadly i never got around to it...

[dublinjohn]

No sadly i never got around to it...

Dammit


well hopefully I've nudged it and maybe if you get time over christmas

[SDS]

I won't say Never... but i've got such a backlog of stories and so little tome for writing haha