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Great Story

Wonderful! Just wonderful! A true classic in the making.

SDS xx

Thanks! I'm very proud of how this one came out, especially since it's been an idea of mine for so long. The original version of this that I tried to write 2 years ago was just trash, which is why I never finished it or posted any of it. I rewrote the whole thing from the ground up this time, filled with heavy symbolism and purpose in addition to just the humiliation.

The irony being that I'm an atheist that is not a fan of most Christians, but I have a huge love of Christian mythology (especially the parts and characters most people don't know). I've used it extensively in my non-porn writing over the years. I'm sad that Jessica isn't real, because her reforms would change the entire world for the better.

Unbelievable. One of the best stories of this nature I've ever read. This was a masterclass in telling this kind of story, and you have demonstrated once again why your name belongs at the top of lists for great writing in the genre!

Religious and blasphemous connotations in this story aside, It was extremely well-written and I must admit that the idea of Lady Evelyn's Improv Theatre where an unknowing "victim" playing a part live on stage in front of a packed house without knowing the script in advance is then humiliated on that very stage in front of people she knows as part of the play is PURE GENIOUS.

That concept could be applied to any number of plots (scripts). Kudos for a very original concept.

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It's like I always say: blasphemy is a blast-for-me!

A masterpiece. Truly excellent work, in both the humiliation aspect and the metaphorical play.

For the humiliation part - loved the camera recording and zooming in on her, her being spread open and so clearly exposed, and her friend posting photos on her Snapchat. Loved the DVD sales, and the photo the boys would have her autograph afterwards. Also liked that she had a bush, and the "Crown of Thorns" was a really original and smart way of humiliating her.

For the metaphorical play - great throughout the story, but especially loved the part backstage when she realizes she is in heaven and the play is still going on, and how Jesus didn't come back for three days because that's what it took for him to forgive God - wasn't expecting it and it fit excellently in the story.

I regained my courage and continued to read the story. Luckily the ending made it less traumatizing for me xD

You are master of enf

Enf = evil naked female

ely wrote: ↑Sun Nov 28, 2021 12:02 am I regained my courage and continued to read the story. Luckily the ending made it less traumatizing for me xD

Glad you enjoyed it! This story really did end up being one of my top favorites that I've written for a lot of reasons.

If there is a movie about this someday I would perfectly see Jennifer Lawrence in the role of Jessica Christ.