25 spaces to heaven - A dare dice story

[dublinjohn]

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Any mistakes ive missed would be apreshiated. This story was wrote in a bit of a hurry when I had a lot going on IRL. Haha

Re-read it (again) on get dare, mailed you the typo's there

[dublinjohn]

Displaying the cards was fine and a useful narrative tool to make each draw more impactful. My only issue with them was that we readers generally couldn't remember what each card meant, so it may have been a good idea to post the card meanings directly under each one.

What I did was have another tab opened with the instruction post on it and would just flick to that

[DrWhoFanJ]

Another enjoyable story in this series, well done!


Just one small(ish) question: Any chance of a story in this style where it’s the boys that get stuck naked rather than (or even as well as) the girls? Maybe even a direct sequel to one of these four (as revenge maybe)?

[SDS]

Another enjoyable story in this series, well done!


Just one small(ish) question: Any chance of a story in this style where it’s the boys that get stuck naked rather than (or even as well as) the girls? Maybe even a direct sequel to one of these four (as revenge maybe)?

Being a randomly generated story it could have easily ended up that way haha!

No imediate plans for a future sequal but we'll have to see.

[dublinjohn]

No imediate plans for a future sequal but we'll have to see.

Say it aint so