Ana Bailey's first day of school

[drtickle]

The story as a stand alone works for me.[…]

Hey, glad to see you back and contributing again! Hope all went well!

[Revengedpirate]

The story as a stand alone works for me.[…]

Hey, glad to see you back and contributing again! Hope all went well!

Thanks drtickle got more tests to take, but feeling a lot better at the moment. I’m hoping I’ve still got at least another twenty to thirty years in me as I’m only 40 docs still haven’t a clue as to what was wrong

[Spanker]

Great story Dr Tickle and great to see you back Revengedpirate. Hope you both continue with your respective stories.

[drtickle]

Great story Dr Tickle and great to see you back Revengedpirate. Hope you both continue with your respective stories.

Thanks, but it’s cake's story… I should continue my stories anyway, so your point is duly noted…

[Hooked6]

I agree that this doesn't have to be a contest entry at all, but if you are looking to turn this into a viable submission, I would suggest these ideas: (message truncated for brevity - see original post for suggested ideas.)

Exactly my point. The story works just as it is without having to enter the KW story contest as it clearly doesn't fit the contest guidelines. That said, Humilatron, if the author wanted to go that way, your ideas for making it fit the KW contest are MARVELOUS!

Hooked6

[Spanker]

Great story Dr Tickle and great to see you back Revengedpirate. Hope you both continue with your respective stories.

Thanks, but it’s cake's story… I should continue my stories anyway, so your point is duly noted…

Oops, my bad.

REWIND: Great story, Cake