The Midnight Run – Part Fifteen (Reluctant nudity, Public Stripping)
BY: Hooked6 (Copyright 2008 by Hooked6@hotmail.com)
Tina smiled and said helpfully, “Katie Lynn, you had better get to the locker room and get dressed before the dance starts at 8:00.”
“What, you mean you aren’t going to strip me here? Why I’m shocked!” I said with as much venom and sarcasm as I could muster.
Abby was all smiles, “I’ll go with you to help you tie the dress, then you can wait somewhere safe until it’s time. No sense in having any premature exposures.”
“Gee thanks. You’re so thoughtful,” I mumbled and followed her to the gym.
When we entered, I heard the band warming up in the main part of the gym on the basketball court. The very thought of what I was doing seemed more than I could bear. Still tonight’s little dalliance was filled with the things that I seemed to crave: risk, embarrassment, uncertainty and above all nudity! Despite my fears and common sense, I just couldn’t get past that combination that was so addictive!
Once I had stripped bare, Abby handed me the dress and after I had put it on, she fastened the ties. Just the silky feel of the dress got my juices flowing!
Abby, sensing my utter terror, patted me on the shoulder. “You’ll do fine. I’m not supposed to tell you this but after the dress falls off two times we will leave. The first time will obviously seem like an accident and perhaps the second as well, but a third is downright suspicious. Hopefully that little bit of information will make it a little easier for you mentally. You only have to stay until it falls off twice.”
“Gee, why are you telling me this. You’re almost acting . . .”
“Human?” she said interrupting my thoughts as if she could read my mind. “I’m not all bad. Well at least not ALL the time.”
“Thank you for telling me that. It does make it a little better.”
Abby gave me a warm smile and said, “Why don’t you wait in the coach’s office until it’s time. It’s unlocked. I already checked. I’ll come get you when we are all ready to make our grand entrance.” I nodded my approval and she led me out of the locker area and down the short hall to coach’s office near the Girl’s lockers.
Sitting there alone behind the coach’s desk I tried to collect my thoughts and steady my nerves. All I could see were the faces of my classmates and their reactions to seeing my dress fall off! Every time I pictured someone in my mind’s eye the very depths of my soul screamed out, “NO! NOT HIM, or worse, “NOT HER!!! PLEASE LET IT BE SOMEONE ELSE!!!” Instead of calming my nerves I was succeeding in making things worse! I had to put tonight out of my mind. I tried to pass the time by thinking of all the things that happened to me over the past few weeks that I actually liked! I had come a long way and many of the things I did were part of my best masturbatory fantasies! My hormones began taking over my rational self and I began to get aroused . . . almost all of the time lately and tonight was no exception. THAT’S what I needed, I thought, to stay horny! At least then I might enjoy part of this. Yeah right, like hitting your thumb with a hammer in front of others. They might get a good laugh out of it but all I’d get is a sore thumb! I am soooooo screwed!
I was drifting away in my thoughts for who knows how long when I suddenly heard the door open. “COACH,” I exclaimed! “I . . . I didn’t know you’d be here tonight. I was just waiting here for my friends to arrive. I wasn’t messing with anything, honest!” I stammered thinking he might believe I was snooping through his personal stuff and get mad. I quickly got up from behind the desk and started to make my way around so he could have his chair when it happened! The dress fell completely to the floor leaving me once again totally naked only a few feet before his eyes!
His mouth fell open and a shocked look came over his face.
“I’m so SORRY, I don’t know what . . . I’M SO SORRY, I’m just so sorry,” I babbled over and over again as I tried to bend over to pick up my gown. As I did so I looked up to apologize once more when I saw him looking at my breasts dangling loosely towards the floor and he was obviously enjoying the view.
He had a smile on his face as he said, “Katie Lynn, if I didn’t know you better, I’d swear you were trying to seduce me!”
As I picked up the gown hurriedly and tried my best to cover myself, I began speaking so fast that my words almost ran together in one long sentence, “Oh NO Coach! It’s not like that at all, I mean not that you aren’t quite a hunk that any girl wouldn’t mind throwing herself over . . . not that I would do such a thing, I would never let you see me naked, not that I wouldn’t MIND that you saw me naked . . . oh that’s not what I mean!! I wasn’t you know . . . IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!!! HONEST!”
“Calm down Katie Lynn. I know it was an accident.” He walked over to me and grabbed the dress and said, “Turn around and I’ll re-tie this for you.” I did as he asked showing him my bare back side until he pulled up the dress high enough to finally cover my butt and to be able to refasten the ties. Coach seemed calm and collected like he always was. As he grabbed the two dress ties, he said, “One thing I’ve learned about this style of dress, you have to make sure you tie them tightly otherwise they’ll, well, let’s just say you’ll have one heck of a wardrobe malfunction! It’s actually a good thing I came along when I did or you might have really embarrassed yourself if it happened at the dance in front of all your peers!”
Little did he know, I thought, little did he know! I gave him a nervous laugh and when he was through, I thanked him. As I was about to leave, I just had to ask, “Coach, what are you doing here tonight? I mean are you just working late or are you here for the dance?”
“I’m a chaperone at the dance tonight, Katie Lynn so you had better be on your best behavior!” he said with a wink.
“Yes, coach and um . . . thanks again. I’m so sorry!!” I then nervously left his office almost tripping as a I ran out his door!
Once I made it a little way down the corridor, I let out a HUGE sigh of relief! Talk about living life on the edge!
I decided that I needed someplace to hide until the dance started. Abby would look for me in coach’s office but if she spotted him in there the next place, I figured she’d look was the girl’s locker room so that’s where I headed.
As I opened the door, I heard voices. It sounded like the team had gathered inside and were talking. I figured that I had better tell them what had happened with coach and let them know he had made sure to tie my dress so that it wouldn’t fall off. The temptation was great not to say anything but I figured if they noticed the dress tied differently, they would think I had something to do with it - that I cheated or something and I had come too far to ruin everything now!
I was about to make my presence known when I spotted Brooke! What was she doing here? She’s not on the team. Tina was talking so I decided to hide behind the short wall and listen for a bit.
“Gee Brooke, you sure know how to pick ‘em. She is the best girl yet, and CUTE too!”
Abby was laughing and added, “Yeah, you sure have her fooled. Katie Lynn even thinks YOU are her FRIEND!! I don’t think she suspects a thing!”
“I know,” Brooke replied smugly. “That’s the beauty of it. She actually trusts me!! Can you believe it? Just wait until she finds out what I REALLY have planned for tonight!”
Tina remarked, “I’m glad you are our leader. I’d hate not to have you with us. It just wouldn’t be the same! It gets better and better every year!”
I couldn’t believe what I was hearing!! Brooke was their leader? Brooke, my midnight running partner was directing all this? Did I miss something? I thought ABBY was the bitch. SHE was the one that made my life miserable! This just didn’t make sense!
I decided to keep quiet and listen some more.
“Yeah, your idea of that initiation thing was PERFECT!” Paula said.
“No, YOU were perfect, Paula,” Brooke said warmly. “If you hadn’t convinced her that Abby was trouble and that there really was such an initiation thing that we all went through I don’t think we’d be here today.”
The girls all laughed. They were LAUGHING!! They were making fun of me! Abby, Tina, Susan, Paula and even BROOKE my friend and trusted confidant. They were all in on it! And just what was Brooke really planning for me tonight anyway? I couldn’t believe how stupid I was! I was MAD and getting angrier by the minute! I had to get out of there before I lost it completely and think things through!
I quietly backed out of the locker room and headed outside. I thought about going home. I thought about turning them all in after what they had done to me! I thought about revenge! Yeah, make them ALL pay but especially Abby, who did all those things to me and Brooke, the traitor who thought all this up! Oh, they were going to pay big time and I knew just how to do it! I was going to let them think they were getting away with it tonight and then WHAM! They’d never see it coming!
But that was the problem I needed to plan this out and there was so little time! And I needed help. But who could I trust? I wasn’t sure I could trust anyone anymore! I decided I need to make myself scarce for a little while so I could think things through. I needed to make sure this worked. I would hate to lose this opportunity. If I waited, I might not get the chance again. If I acted too soon, I might blow it and once they knew that I knew, the party would be over!
I made my way to the only place I was sure I’d be alone for a while – the visitor’s ticket booth outside the stadium.
Come on think, I chastised myself how could I pull it off. I knew what I wanted to do to them but how to get it done without them suspecting things in advance was the problem. I thought I could get Abby and Brooke taken care of, but the rest of them, they were guilty too and THAT I wasn’t sure I could get done. I thought of a priority system – a rank ordered list of who would be first, second, third and so on. I’d try to get them all but at least this way I’d not get sidetracked.
Abby HAD to be first, there was no doubt about it. Brooke was second as her betrayal really hurt. I trusted her and she screwed me over big time. Paula lied and set me up but it was Tina’s truck that they used to tie me to and it was Tina’s knife that ruined my clothes – okay Tina was third and Paula fourth. Susan didn’t really do anything too horrible but she did help hold me down as the girls stripped me and later shaved me, so she was fifth. I thought about the others but all they did really was keep silent. I’d get to them if I could but if I couldn’t, it wouldn’t be so bad. They’d get the message that Katie Lynn wasn’t to be messed with!
I saw people starting to arrive so I knew time was growing short. Most people parked in the front lots but a few parked in the rear as the dance was being held in the gym it was the closest lot.
I had everything worked out in my mind as to how I was going to do it. I would never get another opportunity like this. I even knew who I was going to ask for help. All I had to do was find them.
The missing unknown factor in all of this, however, was whatever surprise Brooke had cooked up that I didn’t know about. Somehow that worried me. I tried to think of all the possibilities so I could plan for them but Brooke was just too clever. She had surprised me every step of the way. Despite my best attempts to get into her mind and think like I thought she would think, I just couldn’t be sure.
Well, I was as ready as I would ever be so I left the booth and headed towards the gym. It’s amazing how things work out sometimes. Before, I feared attending this dance. Now, I couldn’t WAIT to go! This was going to be so much fun – for me anyway!!
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The Midnight Run – Part Sixteen (Reluctant Nudity, EXPLICIT)
BY: Hooked6 (Copyright 2008 by Hooked6@hotmail.com)
The first thing I did after leaving the booth was look for Tina’s truck. If I was lucky, I’d be able to get inside. I wasn’t absolutely sure I’d find what I was looking for but I figured my chances were pretty good. It didn’t take long for me to spot her vehicle and sure enough she had been careless and the doors were unlocked. Man, what a messy truck. I’ll bet her room at home looks just like this, I thought. It took me a while rummaging through all that junk that she had strewn all over the interior of the cab but there in the glove box was what I was searching for – an entire plastic bag full. I also found something else that I hadn’t really been looking for but thought it might come in handy so I took it as well. I took the items and hid them near the bleachers of the track.
Time was running short I had to find my accomplices. They didn’t know it yet but they were going to help me. One way or another I was sure of it. I only hoped that they were actually going to come to the dance.
As luck would have it the first person I saw was Billy Thompson, another boy I kind of had a crush on before he autographed my body in the back of Tina’s truck. I hadn’t seen him since that vibrator incident. This is going to be awkward, I thought to myself, but I really needed his help. “Hey Billy, wait up!” I called out as I quickly made my way towards him holding the hem of my dress up as I jogged.
“Why look who it is . . . it’s the porno star!” he said teasingly.
“Yeah, yeah, I know. I’m really sorry you got caught up in all that,” I said nervously.
“So, what was THAT all about anyway?” he asked still smiling.
“It was horrible,” I said using my most pitiful-sounding voice. “Those girls FORCED me to do that because I was trying to make the track team and they didn’t want me on it. They figured I’d quit if they embarrassed me enough. You saw how I was tied up, didn’t you?”
“Well, yeah, I noticed but I thought it was because of that promotion you were doing for that movie you’re in.”
“I’M NOT IN A PORNO MOVIE, you idiot!” I snapped angrily. I couldn’t believe he was so stupid!! Then I came to my senses and realized that calling him names wasn’t helping my cause. “Look, Billy I was a victim. Those girls are mean and heartless!”
“Oh,” he said meekly as if he finally understood what I was saying for the first time. “Did you tell the Police? I mean they should all be arrested or something.”
Now that I had his sympathy, I had to use all of my feminine wiles to charm this boy into helping me. “Look, Billy, I don’t think that would solve anything. All they would get is a slap on the wrist. I think they need to be taught a lesson. Don’t you? Otherwise, they’ll keep doing stuff like this to other people and they will keep on being delinquents for the rest of their lives. We owe it to them to help them change.”
“Yeah, well I guess.”
“So, I need your help.”
“MY help? What do you need MY help for?” he asked hesitantly.
“To teach them a lesson, silly boy,” I replied coyly. I want to get back at them for what they did to me and I need your help.”
“Oh NO, count me out. You said yourself those girls are mean! I don’t want any part of it. No way, forget it.”
I put my arm around him flirtatiously and said softly, “Billy, didn’t you like seeing me naked?”
“Well yeah, but . . .”
“And you mean to tell me you don’t want any part of seeing four or maybe even FIVE MORE girls naked?” I must have struck a nerve with that last question because he stopped talking and stared off into space. “Imagine, FIVE more sets of naked boobs, five more curvy asses . . .”
“ALL RIGHT, all right,” he exclaimed, “I get the picture!”
“Good, then you’ll help me?”
“What’s in it for me?”
“WHAT? I just TOLD you what’s in it for you – FIVE naked girls!” I couldn’t believe this. Here was an opportunity of a life time and this kid wants to negotiate!
He shook his head, “Listen, I’m not sure it’s worth it. Those girls are mean and I don’t want to end up naked on the back of a pickup truck riding all over town like you ended up. I mean it has to be something really good for me to take THAT kind of risk.”
I thought about it for a second and he had a point. My heart began beating faster as I thought about what I was about to say. “Okay, how about I let you feel their boobs. Would THAT be enough?”
“No . . . I don’t think so,” He said mulling it over.
I swallowed hard, “MY naked boobs then.”
“They’re nice and all but . . .”
“BUT WHAT?!! What would it take, Billy, just spit it out.”
He got an evil smile on his face and replied, “To take that risk I’d need a blow job.”
“YOU’RE OUT OF YOUR MIND!” I yelled. “No fricken way, I’ll get someone else to help me.” I turned and started to walk away.
In a panic Billy called out anxiously, “A hand-job then?”
I paused for a moment then kept walking.
“Look, I didn’t tell anybody at school about what happened to you. THAT ought to be worth something?” he pleaded as I was still walking away.
Upon hearing his words, I stopped and turned around. “You didn’t? You didn’t tell ANYBODY?”
“No, not a soul, so I think a hand-job is fair, especially after you got me all worked up that night.”
“Billy Thompson, are you trying to blackmail me?” I said teasingly.
I felt that familiar feeling in the pit of my stomach like when I was about to do something naughty. “Fine, I promise to give you a hand-job after you help me tonight.” The very words as they left my lips caused me to get unbelievably wet and weak-kneed. What in the world was I doing?? Did I really want revenge THAT much that I would do such a thing to a boy – something I had never done before? Hell, I wasn’t even sure I knew HOW to do a hand-job properly Then I thought of Brooke’s betrayal and I knew my answer.
Billy’s face was gleaming. “No, do it now. I don’t believe you’d do it after you got even with those girls.”
“NOW?! Right here?” I shrieked, “You’re crazy! Besides I don’t have time. The dance is almost about to start.”
“Well . . .” Billy said hesitantly.
I decided to make a small good faith effort to show him I was good for it. My heart was now pounding as I nervously looked around to make sure the coast was clear. I pushed him backwards up against the bleachers and before he had a chance to realize what was happening, I slid my hand down the front of his pants and gently grabbed hold of his penis. To my surprise it was already hard. I couldn’t believe I was doing this – actually TOUCHING a boy!! I had never done such a thing before and it was weird. I just wanted to give him a little proof that I was really going to do it later but I found myself enthralled with how it felt so I lingered a bit as I ran my fingers along the shaft. I was about to pull my hand out when I felt something warm and wet against the palm of my hand. I wasn’t sure what that was then I felt it again, and again! My Gawd he was spurting his stuff already!! I quickly jerked my hand out of his britches and looked at the gooey mess all over my palm. “That’s disgusting,” I thought to myself and quickly wiped my hand on his shirt! I was shocked he came so quickly. I hadn’t even done anything. I never even got a chance to SEE what it looked like for crying out loud! For some odd reason I found myself a bit disappointed. I felt cheated if that makes any sense.
“THANKS!” Billy said finally catching his breath.
“See, I told you I’m good for it. I’ll give you a proper stroking later, AFTER you do all that I ask of you tonight.”
“You mean I get ANOTHER ONE? GREAT!!!” Billy remarked enthusiastically.
How stupid was I? He would have been satisfied with what I had done already. Oh well, looking back I’m sure I said that because deep down I really wanted to see he his penis up close and personal.
I took Billy aside and explained everything I had in mind. “Are you sure you understand?” I asked carefully. “This is really important to me.”
He repeated everything back to me and it was all correct. I left him alone to get himself back together and went on in search of my next accomplice.
I didn’t have to look very hard. Andy Kauffman was standing outside next to his car primping himself in his driver’s side door mirror.
“Andy, Can I speak with you a moment?”
“WELL, WELL don’t you look nice all dressed up, though I liked you better the other way.” He said snidely.
“Can it buster,” I said before I realized how harsh that sounded.
Andy’s face got all humble looking, much like the way he looked the other night after I slapped his hand. “I’m sorry,” he said meekly. “Please don’t be mad.” That was weird, I thought. It was like at the sound of my words he turned into a wimp or jellyfish or something.
“Look, I’m not mad. I need your help.” I said kindly.
“MY help? YOU need MY help? What for?”
“I may be wrong here but how would you like to help me teach Abby and her friends a lesson they’ll never forget?” I said softly.
“What? What’s the matter? Is there trouble in Camelot? I didn’t think you girls ate one of your own! This must be some sort of trick. You’re going to pants me again, aren’t you? Right here at the dance! Oh, please don’t do that. I’ll leave right now and you’ll never see me again.”
“What? Calm down!” I said reassuringly as I took a step toward him.
“PLEASE, I’ve got money. You can have it all?” He was shaking like a leaf now and looked awfully pale.
“What’s gotten into you? I’m not going to pants you? Why on earth would you think . . . OH, I get it. Did Abby and her friends do that to you before?”
He nodded his head carefully and replied, “Yeah, right in the cafeteria last year! It was awful! And it was all because I looked at Brooke and smiled at her as she walked by! They pounced on me and stripped me bare to my knees! All the girls in the cafeteria saw my pecker and laughed and I couldn’t do anything about it! It was horrible! But YOU should know that, you’re one of them, aren’t you?”
Now it was beginning to all make sense. The other night when I said Abby’s name and slapped his hand, he thought I was one of Abby’s girls. “No Andy,” I explained. “You’ve got it all wrong. I’m not one of them. I was naked the other night because she did to me what she did to you only worse, much worse.”
“Really?”
“Yes, and tonight I’m going to get even and teach those girls they can’t mess with me or anyone else without suffering the consequences. I need your help though.”
“Oh no, if she sees it was me, I’m like dead meat!”
“You can wear a disguise, a mask or something. I don’t care. Besides there are others helping me so it will all work out. Geez, Andy, I would think that any REAL MAN would stand up for himself and get back at them for what they did to you.”
Andy smiled and said, “You really mean it? This isn’t a trick? You’re really going to teach them a lesson?”
“Yep, with a little luck they’ll all be naked as the day they were born. How would you like to see that?” I asked poking him in the ribs playfully.
“I’m in. What do I have to do?” I took Andy into my confidence and explained his part in my plan. He too repeated everything back perfectly.
“One more thing, did Abby do anything like what she did to you in the cafeteria to anyone else that you know of?”
“Yeah, Freddie Maccabee.”
“If you think you can trust him, bring him along. I need him to do the same thing you are going to do. That should be enough help so don’t say a word to anyone else, Okay?” He nodded his understanding and I left him to scurry back into the gym before I was missed.
BY: Hooked6 (Copyright 2008 by Hooked6@hotmail.com)
The first thing I did after leaving the booth was look for Tina’s truck. If I was lucky, I’d be able to get inside. I wasn’t absolutely sure I’d find what I was looking for but I figured my chances were pretty good. It didn’t take long for me to spot her vehicle and sure enough she had been careless and the doors were unlocked. Man, what a messy truck. I’ll bet her room at home looks just like this, I thought. It took me a while rummaging through all that junk that she had strewn all over the interior of the cab but there in the glove box was what I was searching for – an entire plastic bag full. I also found something else that I hadn’t really been looking for but thought it might come in handy so I took it as well. I took the items and hid them near the bleachers of the track.
Time was running short I had to find my accomplices. They didn’t know it yet but they were going to help me. One way or another I was sure of it. I only hoped that they were actually going to come to the dance.
As luck would have it the first person I saw was Billy Thompson, another boy I kind of had a crush on before he autographed my body in the back of Tina’s truck. I hadn’t seen him since that vibrator incident. This is going to be awkward, I thought to myself, but I really needed his help. “Hey Billy, wait up!” I called out as I quickly made my way towards him holding the hem of my dress up as I jogged.
“Why look who it is . . . it’s the porno star!” he said teasingly.
“Yeah, yeah, I know. I’m really sorry you got caught up in all that,” I said nervously.
“So, what was THAT all about anyway?” he asked still smiling.
“It was horrible,” I said using my most pitiful-sounding voice. “Those girls FORCED me to do that because I was trying to make the track team and they didn’t want me on it. They figured I’d quit if they embarrassed me enough. You saw how I was tied up, didn’t you?”
“Well, yeah, I noticed but I thought it was because of that promotion you were doing for that movie you’re in.”
“I’M NOT IN A PORNO MOVIE, you idiot!” I snapped angrily. I couldn’t believe he was so stupid!! Then I came to my senses and realized that calling him names wasn’t helping my cause. “Look, Billy I was a victim. Those girls are mean and heartless!”
“Oh,” he said meekly as if he finally understood what I was saying for the first time. “Did you tell the Police? I mean they should all be arrested or something.”
Now that I had his sympathy, I had to use all of my feminine wiles to charm this boy into helping me. “Look, Billy, I don’t think that would solve anything. All they would get is a slap on the wrist. I think they need to be taught a lesson. Don’t you? Otherwise, they’ll keep doing stuff like this to other people and they will keep on being delinquents for the rest of their lives. We owe it to them to help them change.”
“Yeah, well I guess.”
“So, I need your help.”
“MY help? What do you need MY help for?” he asked hesitantly.
“To teach them a lesson, silly boy,” I replied coyly. I want to get back at them for what they did to me and I need your help.”
“Oh NO, count me out. You said yourself those girls are mean! I don’t want any part of it. No way, forget it.”
I put my arm around him flirtatiously and said softly, “Billy, didn’t you like seeing me naked?”
“Well yeah, but . . .”
“And you mean to tell me you don’t want any part of seeing four or maybe even FIVE MORE girls naked?” I must have struck a nerve with that last question because he stopped talking and stared off into space. “Imagine, FIVE more sets of naked boobs, five more curvy asses . . .”
“ALL RIGHT, all right,” he exclaimed, “I get the picture!”
“Good, then you’ll help me?”
“What’s in it for me?”
“WHAT? I just TOLD you what’s in it for you – FIVE naked girls!” I couldn’t believe this. Here was an opportunity of a life time and this kid wants to negotiate!
He shook his head, “Listen, I’m not sure it’s worth it. Those girls are mean and I don’t want to end up naked on the back of a pickup truck riding all over town like you ended up. I mean it has to be something really good for me to take THAT kind of risk.”
I thought about it for a second and he had a point. My heart began beating faster as I thought about what I was about to say. “Okay, how about I let you feel their boobs. Would THAT be enough?”
“No . . . I don’t think so,” He said mulling it over.
I swallowed hard, “MY naked boobs then.”
“They’re nice and all but . . .”
“BUT WHAT?!! What would it take, Billy, just spit it out.”
He got an evil smile on his face and replied, “To take that risk I’d need a blow job.”
“YOU’RE OUT OF YOUR MIND!” I yelled. “No fricken way, I’ll get someone else to help me.” I turned and started to walk away.
In a panic Billy called out anxiously, “A hand-job then?”
I paused for a moment then kept walking.
“Look, I didn’t tell anybody at school about what happened to you. THAT ought to be worth something?” he pleaded as I was still walking away.
Upon hearing his words, I stopped and turned around. “You didn’t? You didn’t tell ANYBODY?”
“No, not a soul, so I think a hand-job is fair, especially after you got me all worked up that night.”
“Billy Thompson, are you trying to blackmail me?” I said teasingly.
I felt that familiar feeling in the pit of my stomach like when I was about to do something naughty. “Fine, I promise to give you a hand-job after you help me tonight.” The very words as they left my lips caused me to get unbelievably wet and weak-kneed. What in the world was I doing?? Did I really want revenge THAT much that I would do such a thing to a boy – something I had never done before? Hell, I wasn’t even sure I knew HOW to do a hand-job properly Then I thought of Brooke’s betrayal and I knew my answer.
Billy’s face was gleaming. “No, do it now. I don’t believe you’d do it after you got even with those girls.”
“NOW?! Right here?” I shrieked, “You’re crazy! Besides I don’t have time. The dance is almost about to start.”
“Well . . .” Billy said hesitantly.
I decided to make a small good faith effort to show him I was good for it. My heart was now pounding as I nervously looked around to make sure the coast was clear. I pushed him backwards up against the bleachers and before he had a chance to realize what was happening, I slid my hand down the front of his pants and gently grabbed hold of his penis. To my surprise it was already hard. I couldn’t believe I was doing this – actually TOUCHING a boy!! I had never done such a thing before and it was weird. I just wanted to give him a little proof that I was really going to do it later but I found myself enthralled with how it felt so I lingered a bit as I ran my fingers along the shaft. I was about to pull my hand out when I felt something warm and wet against the palm of my hand. I wasn’t sure what that was then I felt it again, and again! My Gawd he was spurting his stuff already!! I quickly jerked my hand out of his britches and looked at the gooey mess all over my palm. “That’s disgusting,” I thought to myself and quickly wiped my hand on his shirt! I was shocked he came so quickly. I hadn’t even done anything. I never even got a chance to SEE what it looked like for crying out loud! For some odd reason I found myself a bit disappointed. I felt cheated if that makes any sense.
“THANKS!” Billy said finally catching his breath.
“See, I told you I’m good for it. I’ll give you a proper stroking later, AFTER you do all that I ask of you tonight.”
“You mean I get ANOTHER ONE? GREAT!!!” Billy remarked enthusiastically.
How stupid was I? He would have been satisfied with what I had done already. Oh well, looking back I’m sure I said that because deep down I really wanted to see he his penis up close and personal.
I took Billy aside and explained everything I had in mind. “Are you sure you understand?” I asked carefully. “This is really important to me.”
He repeated everything back to me and it was all correct. I left him alone to get himself back together and went on in search of my next accomplice.
I didn’t have to look very hard. Andy Kauffman was standing outside next to his car primping himself in his driver’s side door mirror.
“Andy, Can I speak with you a moment?”
“WELL, WELL don’t you look nice all dressed up, though I liked you better the other way.” He said snidely.
“Can it buster,” I said before I realized how harsh that sounded.
Andy’s face got all humble looking, much like the way he looked the other night after I slapped his hand. “I’m sorry,” he said meekly. “Please don’t be mad.” That was weird, I thought. It was like at the sound of my words he turned into a wimp or jellyfish or something.
“Look, I’m not mad. I need your help.” I said kindly.
“MY help? YOU need MY help? What for?”
“I may be wrong here but how would you like to help me teach Abby and her friends a lesson they’ll never forget?” I said softly.
“What? What’s the matter? Is there trouble in Camelot? I didn’t think you girls ate one of your own! This must be some sort of trick. You’re going to pants me again, aren’t you? Right here at the dance! Oh, please don’t do that. I’ll leave right now and you’ll never see me again.”
“What? Calm down!” I said reassuringly as I took a step toward him.
“PLEASE, I’ve got money. You can have it all?” He was shaking like a leaf now and looked awfully pale.
“What’s gotten into you? I’m not going to pants you? Why on earth would you think . . . OH, I get it. Did Abby and her friends do that to you before?”
He nodded his head carefully and replied, “Yeah, right in the cafeteria last year! It was awful! And it was all because I looked at Brooke and smiled at her as she walked by! They pounced on me and stripped me bare to my knees! All the girls in the cafeteria saw my pecker and laughed and I couldn’t do anything about it! It was horrible! But YOU should know that, you’re one of them, aren’t you?”
Now it was beginning to all make sense. The other night when I said Abby’s name and slapped his hand, he thought I was one of Abby’s girls. “No Andy,” I explained. “You’ve got it all wrong. I’m not one of them. I was naked the other night because she did to me what she did to you only worse, much worse.”
“Really?”
“Yes, and tonight I’m going to get even and teach those girls they can’t mess with me or anyone else without suffering the consequences. I need your help though.”
“Oh no, if she sees it was me, I’m like dead meat!”
“You can wear a disguise, a mask or something. I don’t care. Besides there are others helping me so it will all work out. Geez, Andy, I would think that any REAL MAN would stand up for himself and get back at them for what they did to you.”
Andy smiled and said, “You really mean it? This isn’t a trick? You’re really going to teach them a lesson?”
“Yep, with a little luck they’ll all be naked as the day they were born. How would you like to see that?” I asked poking him in the ribs playfully.
“I’m in. What do I have to do?” I took Andy into my confidence and explained his part in my plan. He too repeated everything back perfectly.
“One more thing, did Abby do anything like what she did to you in the cafeteria to anyone else that you know of?”
“Yeah, Freddie Maccabee.”
“If you think you can trust him, bring him along. I need him to do the same thing you are going to do. That should be enough help so don’t say a word to anyone else, Okay?” He nodded his understanding and I left him to scurry back into the gym before I was missed.
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Re: The Midnight Run (1,2,3,4,5,6, 7,8,9, 10,11,12,13,14,15,16 . . .
The Midnight Run – Part Seventeen (Reluctant Nudity, Public Stripping)
BY: Hooked6 (Copyright 2008 by Hooked6@hotmail.com)
“THERE you are!” Abby said quite put out as she saw me entering the gym. “Where have you been?”
“Coach is here,” I said calmly. “He came in when I was in his office so I had to leave. I was looking for you guys for like forever. Where have you been?”
“Oh,” Abby replied. “We, um, had some business to take care of.” She then grabbed hold of my arm and led me into the gym. “Let’s get this SHOW on the road!” We all made our entrance into the gym together and to my surprise Abby already had tickets for all of us. They must have really planned this out well to have tickets in hand.
The gym was filling up fast! I would have literally died if coach hadn’t come along and fixed my dress. Seeing all these people here I was sure I would have never been able to go through it! Now all I had to do was keep them from discovering that little fact about my gown until I was able to put my plan into action. Moments later Brooke waltzed into the gym and joined the girls and acted as if she hadn’t known they were going to be there. What a con artist!
The band started playing and the girls all took a seat on the inside bleachers along the wall. After the first song was over Tina stood up and said, “Did we tell you that you have to dance with whomever we tell you to tonight?”
“Um, no actually, you didn’t,” I replied a bit snotty-like.
“Well, it’s true. Why don’t you go over and ask Josh to dance? He’s just standing there.” Tina explained. I wrinkled up my nose and walked off in his direction. I see their plan now. They were going to pick the most popular guys for me to dance with and make sure it was on the fastest songs so that my dress would be sure to slip off with all that moving around!
The girls sat there in anticipation just waiting for what they deemed the inevitable to happen on the crowded dance floor; little did they know that I was prepared. The truth be told, I actually liked dancing with Josh. If they hadn’t “made” me ask him I surely would never have had the guts to do it myself.
Time went on and I decided that I had better make myself look anxious and worried otherwise they’d figure out something was up. I needed to stall for time until it was dark outside otherwise my plan wouldn’t work.
After several dances and some lighthearted conversations with the boys the team had picked out for me, I was decidedly having a great time! Time was flying by and I was having fun, so much so that I failed to notice the girls on the bleachers. When I returned, they were waiting for me.
“Gee you’re having awfully good luck with that dress,” Abby said suspiciously.
“Yeah, how about that?” Tina added.
“You HAD to jinx my good luck by bringing that up, didn’t you?” I asked trying to deflect their suspicions.
Abby stated moving around behind and as she did was saying, “Maybe it’s just good luck or maybe you’re cheating. Well, well, look here girls, someone’s been fiddling with the ties.” They all gathered around to have a look for themselves.
I began to get nervous and, in an instant, saw my plans for revenge beginning to unravel right before my eyes! “I’m not a cheater,” I said defensively, “I can explain . . .”
Just then coach walked up and said “Hello girl’s having a good time?”
“Hi coach,” several answered in unison.
Coach then spotted Abby messing with my gown. “Katie Lynn, are you having problems with your dress again? I thought I fixed that.”
“Um, you did coach. Abby was just making sure, you know. I thought it felt a little loose.”
“YOU fixed Katie Lynn’s dress, coach?” Tina asked quite surprised.
Coach chuckled and replied, “Well, yes she was having a little trouble with it in my office earlier and I offered to help. I warned her about dresses like that. So, are you all having fun?”
“Oh yeah” Brooke spoke up, “We’re having a blast!”
“Good. Make sure you mingle some. I saw you all just standing around. This is a Senior’s Welcome Back Ball. Get out and meet some people. You’ll have a blast. Try and be more like Katie Lynn. I saw her dancing with a whole bunch of guys,” coach said encouragingly.
“We will coach,” Brooke answered for the group. After a few more pleasantries he left.
“So,” Abby said with a wry smile, “Coach fixed your dress, huh?”
“Yeah, I um, forgot about it until he said something. It sort of fell off, you know, right in front of him.”
The girls all laughed heartily. “We’ll let it slide THIS time,” Abby said firmly “but we had better not catch you or anybody else messing with it, understand?”
“Yeah, ah sure, no problem,” I muttered. Man was that ever close. It was a good thing coach came over when he did, otherwise I would have been screwed. What am I talking about, I was screwed. Abby was retying the dress and the likelihood of it falling off was now almost certain! Maybe I could put my plan into action early – before the dress dropped. I had to find my boys!
Before I could spot either of them Tina said, “Isn’t that Billy Thompson over there. Doesn’t Katie Lynn have a crush on him?”
“I do believe she does,” Abby said laughing. “Go dance with him.”
It was all I could do to keep from smiling. I never would have spotted him in that crowd out there but thanks to Tina I would now be able to put my plan into action early.
As luck would have it the band was playing another fast song and the floor was crowded! I got to Billy just as he was walking off. “Billy, wait!” I called. When I reached him, I grabbed his arm and pulled him back onto the floor.
Just then the band guy announced this was going to be a spotlight dance. “When the spotlight finds you, do your best moves as everyone will be watching!” he said loudly. The students started clapping and the music got louder and faster. The lights in the gym grew dimmer and the bright roving light focused on a couple near the band. I was grateful to be in the relative darkness as the girls hopefully wouldn’t see me leaning over and talking to Billy secretly. I instructed him that I was going to have to start early and for him to find Andy Kauffman and get things ready.
The light moved on to yet another couple as Billy insisted on repeating his instructions to me to be sure he got them right. I didn’t really want him yelling in my ear over the music like that but I was glad he wanted to get it perfect. The light moved on to still another couple.
“That’s PERFECT, BILLY,” I said trying not to look suspicious and he nodded. “Get going right after this song!” He nodded again. I looked over and found the girls and, even in the darkness, I could tell they were all watching me like a hawk. Hopefully I hadn’t aroused their suspicions.
Then suddenly Billy and I were bathed in the brightness of the spot light and everyone looked at us. Billy, who was not a good dancer almost panicked and stopped dancing. He looked so stupid just standing there, but I encouraged him by saying it wouldn’t last long and to keep moving. He seemed to pick up his pace and then – BAM! That damn dress fell right to the floor!! The spotlight started to move away but then the operator must have realized what had happened and it zoomed in right back on me in a nanosecond! I was naked in front of everyone I knew from school!! I screamed and everyone laughed!! THEY LAUGHED and pointed and laughed some more!! I was mortified beyond belief! I dropped to my knees to try and hide myself and then gathered up the garment and tried to pull it back up. Of course, stupid ole me was kneeling on it and it took me a moment to realize why I couldn’t cover myself! I then stood up, bent down, giving the guys behind a good look at my ass and yanked the thing back up! I immediately ran out of there holding my dress up even though it barely covered my boobs! I ended up running past the girls who were also laughing their fools heads off – they saw it all!
Abby stopped me and did her best to look like she was trying to help me. The spotlight moved on to other couples and the band kept playing but several students just HAD to gather around me to be part of the fun as Abby fumbled with the ties. “TURN AROUND and HOLD STILL!” she barked as she spun me around to face me away from the bleachers. That’s the last thing I wanted to do was look out towards the dance floor and face all those kids looking at me with stupid grins on their faces. At least the music was still playing and the gym was essentially still somewhat dark except for those in the spotlight. It goes without saying that people nearest us could see me quite clearly as well as my blushing face and trembling legs.
Abby kept fiddling with those stupid ties. “HURRY UP!” I yelled in a panic afraid she was going to – you guessed it, she let go of the ties and dropped the dress again as if it was an accident. “OOPS!” she said at the top of her voice as those nearby busted out in hysterics at seeing me naked again - my tiny tits, my shaved pubis all things I wasn’t proud of on display to my fellow classmates of mine. I couldn’t believe she did that!!
Abby made a big show of trying to get my dress back up as if she was nervous or something making it appear like it kept falling out of her hands because she was in panic mode or something, much to the delight of everyone watching. Their laughter could be heard even above the loud music. By the time the song ended I was dressed again. When the normal lighting was restored and the band started playing a slow number, I asked Abby if I could use the bathroom. She laughed and said I probably needed to before I pissed all over myself again like I did the other night. “Very funny,” I said snidely, “very funny!”
“Don’t be gone long,” she said, “You still have one more to go.”
“WHAT? It fell twice,” I said in protest.
“Coach doesn’t count.”
“I wasn’t counting him. It fell once on the floor and then once because of your stupid butter-fingers!”
“Nope, that was all once incident. One more time, right girls?” My teammates all nodded their heads so I knew I was screwed.
“Fine” I snapped in reply! “Just give me a while to collect myself. I’ll be back, though, don’t you worry.” I then headed off to the ladies’ room. I couldn’t believe that all those people saw me like that – and in that damn spotlight to boot! At least the spotlight was on when I was still dressed and everyone then saw my gown slip and fall. It looked more like an accident that way! If the spotlight had found me AFTER the gown had fallen It would look like I had been up to something. THAT thought was too horrible to think about. I was lucky. There was no doubt about it!
I waited in the restroom long enough for the boys to get ready then I carefully made my way back out towards the gym. I peeked around the corner wall and saw that the girls had all separated and were talking to various students around the floor. They were all laughing so I assumed they were all talking about me! It didn’t matter, I thought. It would all work our better that way.
I then saw Andy approach Abby. “Coach wants to see you.”
Abby scrunched up her face and I could hear her reply, “He does? What for?”
“I dunno. Maybe it has something to do with Katie Lynn or maybe he wants to talk with you about the track team. All I know is that he said I was to bring you to him.”
“Oh all right,” she replied and followed him towards the rear exit door.
I counted to ten after I saw then leave the floor and scurried not too far behind to eventually join them. I would know in a few seconds whether this was going to work or not.
BY: Hooked6 (Copyright 2008 by Hooked6@hotmail.com)
“THERE you are!” Abby said quite put out as she saw me entering the gym. “Where have you been?”
“Coach is here,” I said calmly. “He came in when I was in his office so I had to leave. I was looking for you guys for like forever. Where have you been?”
“Oh,” Abby replied. “We, um, had some business to take care of.” She then grabbed hold of my arm and led me into the gym. “Let’s get this SHOW on the road!” We all made our entrance into the gym together and to my surprise Abby already had tickets for all of us. They must have really planned this out well to have tickets in hand.
The gym was filling up fast! I would have literally died if coach hadn’t come along and fixed my dress. Seeing all these people here I was sure I would have never been able to go through it! Now all I had to do was keep them from discovering that little fact about my gown until I was able to put my plan into action. Moments later Brooke waltzed into the gym and joined the girls and acted as if she hadn’t known they were going to be there. What a con artist!
The band started playing and the girls all took a seat on the inside bleachers along the wall. After the first song was over Tina stood up and said, “Did we tell you that you have to dance with whomever we tell you to tonight?”
“Um, no actually, you didn’t,” I replied a bit snotty-like.
“Well, it’s true. Why don’t you go over and ask Josh to dance? He’s just standing there.” Tina explained. I wrinkled up my nose and walked off in his direction. I see their plan now. They were going to pick the most popular guys for me to dance with and make sure it was on the fastest songs so that my dress would be sure to slip off with all that moving around!
The girls sat there in anticipation just waiting for what they deemed the inevitable to happen on the crowded dance floor; little did they know that I was prepared. The truth be told, I actually liked dancing with Josh. If they hadn’t “made” me ask him I surely would never have had the guts to do it myself.
Time went on and I decided that I had better make myself look anxious and worried otherwise they’d figure out something was up. I needed to stall for time until it was dark outside otherwise my plan wouldn’t work.
After several dances and some lighthearted conversations with the boys the team had picked out for me, I was decidedly having a great time! Time was flying by and I was having fun, so much so that I failed to notice the girls on the bleachers. When I returned, they were waiting for me.
“Gee you’re having awfully good luck with that dress,” Abby said suspiciously.
“Yeah, how about that?” Tina added.
“You HAD to jinx my good luck by bringing that up, didn’t you?” I asked trying to deflect their suspicions.
Abby stated moving around behind and as she did was saying, “Maybe it’s just good luck or maybe you’re cheating. Well, well, look here girls, someone’s been fiddling with the ties.” They all gathered around to have a look for themselves.
I began to get nervous and, in an instant, saw my plans for revenge beginning to unravel right before my eyes! “I’m not a cheater,” I said defensively, “I can explain . . .”
Just then coach walked up and said “Hello girl’s having a good time?”
“Hi coach,” several answered in unison.
Coach then spotted Abby messing with my gown. “Katie Lynn, are you having problems with your dress again? I thought I fixed that.”
“Um, you did coach. Abby was just making sure, you know. I thought it felt a little loose.”
“YOU fixed Katie Lynn’s dress, coach?” Tina asked quite surprised.
Coach chuckled and replied, “Well, yes she was having a little trouble with it in my office earlier and I offered to help. I warned her about dresses like that. So, are you all having fun?”
“Oh yeah” Brooke spoke up, “We’re having a blast!”
“Good. Make sure you mingle some. I saw you all just standing around. This is a Senior’s Welcome Back Ball. Get out and meet some people. You’ll have a blast. Try and be more like Katie Lynn. I saw her dancing with a whole bunch of guys,” coach said encouragingly.
“We will coach,” Brooke answered for the group. After a few more pleasantries he left.
“So,” Abby said with a wry smile, “Coach fixed your dress, huh?”
“Yeah, I um, forgot about it until he said something. It sort of fell off, you know, right in front of him.”
The girls all laughed heartily. “We’ll let it slide THIS time,” Abby said firmly “but we had better not catch you or anybody else messing with it, understand?”
“Yeah, ah sure, no problem,” I muttered. Man was that ever close. It was a good thing coach came over when he did, otherwise I would have been screwed. What am I talking about, I was screwed. Abby was retying the dress and the likelihood of it falling off was now almost certain! Maybe I could put my plan into action early – before the dress dropped. I had to find my boys!
Before I could spot either of them Tina said, “Isn’t that Billy Thompson over there. Doesn’t Katie Lynn have a crush on him?”
“I do believe she does,” Abby said laughing. “Go dance with him.”
It was all I could do to keep from smiling. I never would have spotted him in that crowd out there but thanks to Tina I would now be able to put my plan into action early.
As luck would have it the band was playing another fast song and the floor was crowded! I got to Billy just as he was walking off. “Billy, wait!” I called. When I reached him, I grabbed his arm and pulled him back onto the floor.
Just then the band guy announced this was going to be a spotlight dance. “When the spotlight finds you, do your best moves as everyone will be watching!” he said loudly. The students started clapping and the music got louder and faster. The lights in the gym grew dimmer and the bright roving light focused on a couple near the band. I was grateful to be in the relative darkness as the girls hopefully wouldn’t see me leaning over and talking to Billy secretly. I instructed him that I was going to have to start early and for him to find Andy Kauffman and get things ready.
The light moved on to yet another couple as Billy insisted on repeating his instructions to me to be sure he got them right. I didn’t really want him yelling in my ear over the music like that but I was glad he wanted to get it perfect. The light moved on to still another couple.
“That’s PERFECT, BILLY,” I said trying not to look suspicious and he nodded. “Get going right after this song!” He nodded again. I looked over and found the girls and, even in the darkness, I could tell they were all watching me like a hawk. Hopefully I hadn’t aroused their suspicions.
Then suddenly Billy and I were bathed in the brightness of the spot light and everyone looked at us. Billy, who was not a good dancer almost panicked and stopped dancing. He looked so stupid just standing there, but I encouraged him by saying it wouldn’t last long and to keep moving. He seemed to pick up his pace and then – BAM! That damn dress fell right to the floor!! The spotlight started to move away but then the operator must have realized what had happened and it zoomed in right back on me in a nanosecond! I was naked in front of everyone I knew from school!! I screamed and everyone laughed!! THEY LAUGHED and pointed and laughed some more!! I was mortified beyond belief! I dropped to my knees to try and hide myself and then gathered up the garment and tried to pull it back up. Of course, stupid ole me was kneeling on it and it took me a moment to realize why I couldn’t cover myself! I then stood up, bent down, giving the guys behind a good look at my ass and yanked the thing back up! I immediately ran out of there holding my dress up even though it barely covered my boobs! I ended up running past the girls who were also laughing their fools heads off – they saw it all!
Abby stopped me and did her best to look like she was trying to help me. The spotlight moved on to other couples and the band kept playing but several students just HAD to gather around me to be part of the fun as Abby fumbled with the ties. “TURN AROUND and HOLD STILL!” she barked as she spun me around to face me away from the bleachers. That’s the last thing I wanted to do was look out towards the dance floor and face all those kids looking at me with stupid grins on their faces. At least the music was still playing and the gym was essentially still somewhat dark except for those in the spotlight. It goes without saying that people nearest us could see me quite clearly as well as my blushing face and trembling legs.
Abby kept fiddling with those stupid ties. “HURRY UP!” I yelled in a panic afraid she was going to – you guessed it, she let go of the ties and dropped the dress again as if it was an accident. “OOPS!” she said at the top of her voice as those nearby busted out in hysterics at seeing me naked again - my tiny tits, my shaved pubis all things I wasn’t proud of on display to my fellow classmates of mine. I couldn’t believe she did that!!
Abby made a big show of trying to get my dress back up as if she was nervous or something making it appear like it kept falling out of her hands because she was in panic mode or something, much to the delight of everyone watching. Their laughter could be heard even above the loud music. By the time the song ended I was dressed again. When the normal lighting was restored and the band started playing a slow number, I asked Abby if I could use the bathroom. She laughed and said I probably needed to before I pissed all over myself again like I did the other night. “Very funny,” I said snidely, “very funny!”
“Don’t be gone long,” she said, “You still have one more to go.”
“WHAT? It fell twice,” I said in protest.
“Coach doesn’t count.”
“I wasn’t counting him. It fell once on the floor and then once because of your stupid butter-fingers!”
“Nope, that was all once incident. One more time, right girls?” My teammates all nodded their heads so I knew I was screwed.
“Fine” I snapped in reply! “Just give me a while to collect myself. I’ll be back, though, don’t you worry.” I then headed off to the ladies’ room. I couldn’t believe that all those people saw me like that – and in that damn spotlight to boot! At least the spotlight was on when I was still dressed and everyone then saw my gown slip and fall. It looked more like an accident that way! If the spotlight had found me AFTER the gown had fallen It would look like I had been up to something. THAT thought was too horrible to think about. I was lucky. There was no doubt about it!
I waited in the restroom long enough for the boys to get ready then I carefully made my way back out towards the gym. I peeked around the corner wall and saw that the girls had all separated and were talking to various students around the floor. They were all laughing so I assumed they were all talking about me! It didn’t matter, I thought. It would all work our better that way.
I then saw Andy approach Abby. “Coach wants to see you.”
Abby scrunched up her face and I could hear her reply, “He does? What for?”
“I dunno. Maybe it has something to do with Katie Lynn or maybe he wants to talk with you about the track team. All I know is that he said I was to bring you to him.”
“Oh all right,” she replied and followed him towards the rear exit door.
I counted to ten after I saw then leave the floor and scurried not too far behind to eventually join them. I would know in a few seconds whether this was going to work or not.
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Re: The Midnight Run (1,2,3,4,5,6, 7,8,9, 10,11,12,13,14,15,16 . . .
The Midnight Run – Part Eighteen (Reluctant Nudity, Public Stripping)
BY: Hooked6 (Copyright 2008 by Hooked6@hotmail.com)
I saw Andy and Abby leave the gym and head outside. I was following close behind trying not to make my presence known.
“Where’s coach?” Abby asked impatiently. “I don’t see him anywhere.”
“He’s right . . . HERE!” Andy said with excitement and then turned around and pounced on her. It was so dark out and she was so taken by surprise she didn’t see Billy Thompson or Freddie Maccabee scurrying up to join him. They were upon her before she even had time to react. Before long they had literally dragged Abby over to the short fence that surrounded the track and had her arms outstretched along the top of the fence rail. I then ran up and removed a couple of wire ties from the plastic bag that I had taken from Tina’s truck and secured Abby’s arms to the fence rail so she couldn’t move. She soon discovered, like I had that night in Tina’s truck, the more she tried to get free, the tighter they got around her wrists so she eventually stopped struggling. I then secured her ankles to the fence as well making sure I kept them spread as far as I could get them.
“Let me go, you pervs,” she yelled. It was then I guess she finally recognized it was me in the darkness. “KATIE LYNN! What are you doing?!”
I got right up in her face and smiled, “Let’s just say it is MY turn to have a little fun now. I’m sure you remember this little pose, don’t you? Since you had me bound that way, I can only assume it’s your favorite position.” I then fastened the ball gag in Abby’s mouth – the one that I had been fortunate enough to find in the plastic bag with the wire ties in that pigsty that Tina calls her vehicle.
“MMmmmmppppghhhhh!” Abby yelled her protests muffled by that gag. I just laughed.
“One down, four to go.” I said as I took up my place outside the gym door.
Andy Kauffman went back inside and found Brooke. He had been instructed this time to tell Brooke that Abby needed to see her outside right away, that there had been a change in plans.
A short while later Andy was leading Brooke outside. She had only taken a few steps when she saw Abby tied to the fence. “ABBY, what on earth?!” she said in total shock.
Just then the boys pounced and soon she too was tied along the fence right next to Abby.
I didn’t have a gag for Brooke so I held my hand over her mouth and read her the riot act of how callous and cruel I thought she had been and how hurt I was that she deceived me as Andy returned inside to find Tina. Brooke seemed surprised that I knew as much as I did. I let her believe that I had known for a while rather than tell her that I only had just discovered her betrayal that night. I wanted her to wonder how I could possibly have known.
Like before it worked like a charm and soon Tina was secured next to Abby and Brooke. To my delight Paula and Susan were the easiest of all and they didn’t even seem to put up much of a struggle at all.
Then the moment of truth came at last. “I suppose you are all wondering why I called you here tonight,” I said sarcastically. I then walked up to Abby and began unbuttoning her dress. She had buttons all the way down the front so in no time her bra, slip and panties were showing. I then pulled out the pair of scissors I had hidden away and began snipping here and there in order to strip her bare. “It’s a shame to ruin such a nice dress, but I’m sure you have more.” I really got into it and before long she was standing naked as the day she was born as the boys all looked on eagerly. “That’s one you’ve never seen naked before. Make sure you get a GOOD look at EVERYTHING!” I said to my partners and made my way over to Brooke. Of course, they wasted no time in checking out every curve and crevice.
Brooke shook her head as if silently pleading for me not to do this. She could have yelled or screamed as she didn’t have a gag like Abby but for some reason she didn’t. She just stood there as I stripped her. To my surprise she wasn’t wearing a bra but that was one less thing I had to dispose of. I recalled Abby’s humiliating gesture of pinching my nipple when I was exposed and how I hated it, so I reached out and gave both of hers a good tweaking!
“That’s two, you boys haven’t seen naked before,” I said giggling to them as they moved in front of Brooke to check out her body. Even in the darkness I could tell Brooke was blushing profusely.
Tina, Susan and Paula all followed in turn. I took my time relishing my revenge hoping that by dragging this out it would increase the shame and humiliation that my victims were experiencing. I wasn’t worried about being caught as we were all in literal darkness. Only those close at hand could see well enough to realize what was going on.
After the boys all got a good look at the girls, noting aloud to each other the differences among each of the naked bodies before them, I stepped back in front of the line of girls and waved my hand nonchalantly. “Okay guys, you know what to do next.” Andy and Freddie took off running while Billy Thompson remained with me.
“What are you doing now?” Brooke asked plainly.
“You’ll see. You all didn’t think I stripped you just to show your naked asses to those guys, did you?” I said flippantly. To a girl, their faces distorted in a panic with their eyes widening and mouths dropping open as far as they could go – well, all except poor Abby who was still gagged. She looked pitiful with slobber all running down her face and dangling like long strings from the corners of her mouth. I took pity on her and removed her gag. I know that was probably stupid of me, but since none of the other girls were making a scene, I figured I’d be nice.
No sooner had I removed the gag when Abby began giggling, “You were right, Brooke, she DOES fit in!”
“What?” I asked confused.
Brooke now smiling explained. “She means you were a good choice. I was sure you’d fit in to our little group and you just proved me right. I couldn’t be happier.”
“What do you mean you couldn’t be happier?” I snapped in reply. “Don’t you realize what’s about to happen?”
Brooke laughed as if she couldn’t care less and Tina spoke up, “Doesn’t matter, we like how it’s going so far, so keep it up.”
I figured they were just trying to psych me out by pretending this didn’t bother them. I KNEW public exposure bothered Abby because I saw how she reacted when I stole her clothes in the shower and she ran after me. “You aren’t fooling me,” I said calmly. “I know you are all scared to death!”
Paula chimed in, “No, not really. It’s all part of being in the club.”
“Club? What club?” I asked totally taken aback.
“The DeeARReee club,” Abby said proudly. “Brooke here selected you for membership and we’ve been evaluating you all this time. I’m pleased to say you’ve passed with flying colors!”
“The WHAT club, the DeeARReee club?? What the hell is that?”
“Say it slowly,” Abby said choking back her laughter.
“DeeArrEE . . . dee – ARR – eee, hmmm . . . dee – arr - eee . . . Oh, I get it, D.R.E. They’re initials, an acronym of some sort, right?”
“Yep,” Brooke acknowledged. “D.R.E – the DARE to RISK EXPOSURE Club.”
“Yeah, we are all into taking risks exposing our bodies in public, well ours or other peoples,” she added laughing. “We try to make it look accidental or as if our exposure wasn’t our fault, you know, like you are doing to us now!”
“I’m sooooooo excited,” Paula admitted. “I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us!”
“You’re making all this up,” I protested skeptically.
“No we’re not. We’ve been doing this for the last two years!” Abby explained.
I couldn’t believe what I was hearing! “But, when you chased after me when I took your clothes . . . that was real embarrassment! I’m absolutely positive about that. I got you good and you know it!”
“Sorry to disappoint you babe, but it was all planned.”
“How could that be?”
Abby said smugly, “It was all a set up. Think about it, WHO told you that I took my showers last and that I was shy about my body?”
“Brooke . . .”
“And explain this,” Abby continued, “Who in their right mind would leave the safety of the locker room stark naked chasing after you when we all knew the boys’ track team was having camp! Hmmmmm? Does THAT make sense to you? Of course, not, it was just an opportunity for me to get naked in front of others and get away it because it wasn’t my fault!”
CRAP! She was right. I WAS set up. They have been playing me all along! I just shook my head in disbelief – it was like I was in an episode of the Twilight Zone or some Sci-Fi movie! Any moment I was going to wake up and discover none of this is real!
Just then the outdoor stadium lights came on illuminating all of us. “Right on cue,” I said to the girls, “Freddie has done his part.” The girls were practically gleaming with excitement, but I was still confused.
“Let me get this straight. You are all actually ‘into’ exposing yourselves? You really LIKE this stuff?”
“Absolutely but we are much more careful and deliberate about it than you are. You just run off naked every night at midnight roaming your own neighborhood for crying out loud. Do you know how dangerous that is? WE are much more professional about it so as to minimize the risk.” Abby stated.
“Yeah, like tonight,” Brooke added. “We didn’t know you were planning this – I must say I gotta give you credit for being imaginative, but we are like totally in the clear and we STILL have our fun!”
“Huh?”
“We get exposed but if we get into trouble for it, we’ll just blame you! I mean we didn’t tie ourselves up did we? YOU did that. We will be just innocent victims here. You’ll be the one who gets busted and probably expelled or something.” Brooke explained.
Crap! I hadn’t thought of that. I was playing right into their hands! This wasn’t any fun if they weren’t totally humiliated! What kind of revenge gives pleasure to the person you are seeking revenge upon?
“But I still don’t understand. WHY did you choose me to pick on in the first place? I’ve GOT to know. I thought it was because you didn’t want me on the track team.”
BY: Hooked6 (Copyright 2008 by Hooked6@hotmail.com)
I saw Andy and Abby leave the gym and head outside. I was following close behind trying not to make my presence known.
“Where’s coach?” Abby asked impatiently. “I don’t see him anywhere.”
“He’s right . . . HERE!” Andy said with excitement and then turned around and pounced on her. It was so dark out and she was so taken by surprise she didn’t see Billy Thompson or Freddie Maccabee scurrying up to join him. They were upon her before she even had time to react. Before long they had literally dragged Abby over to the short fence that surrounded the track and had her arms outstretched along the top of the fence rail. I then ran up and removed a couple of wire ties from the plastic bag that I had taken from Tina’s truck and secured Abby’s arms to the fence rail so she couldn’t move. She soon discovered, like I had that night in Tina’s truck, the more she tried to get free, the tighter they got around her wrists so she eventually stopped struggling. I then secured her ankles to the fence as well making sure I kept them spread as far as I could get them.
“Let me go, you pervs,” she yelled. It was then I guess she finally recognized it was me in the darkness. “KATIE LYNN! What are you doing?!”
I got right up in her face and smiled, “Let’s just say it is MY turn to have a little fun now. I’m sure you remember this little pose, don’t you? Since you had me bound that way, I can only assume it’s your favorite position.” I then fastened the ball gag in Abby’s mouth – the one that I had been fortunate enough to find in the plastic bag with the wire ties in that pigsty that Tina calls her vehicle.
“MMmmmmppppghhhhh!” Abby yelled her protests muffled by that gag. I just laughed.
“One down, four to go.” I said as I took up my place outside the gym door.
Andy Kauffman went back inside and found Brooke. He had been instructed this time to tell Brooke that Abby needed to see her outside right away, that there had been a change in plans.
A short while later Andy was leading Brooke outside. She had only taken a few steps when she saw Abby tied to the fence. “ABBY, what on earth?!” she said in total shock.
Just then the boys pounced and soon she too was tied along the fence right next to Abby.
I didn’t have a gag for Brooke so I held my hand over her mouth and read her the riot act of how callous and cruel I thought she had been and how hurt I was that she deceived me as Andy returned inside to find Tina. Brooke seemed surprised that I knew as much as I did. I let her believe that I had known for a while rather than tell her that I only had just discovered her betrayal that night. I wanted her to wonder how I could possibly have known.
Like before it worked like a charm and soon Tina was secured next to Abby and Brooke. To my delight Paula and Susan were the easiest of all and they didn’t even seem to put up much of a struggle at all.
Then the moment of truth came at last. “I suppose you are all wondering why I called you here tonight,” I said sarcastically. I then walked up to Abby and began unbuttoning her dress. She had buttons all the way down the front so in no time her bra, slip and panties were showing. I then pulled out the pair of scissors I had hidden away and began snipping here and there in order to strip her bare. “It’s a shame to ruin such a nice dress, but I’m sure you have more.” I really got into it and before long she was standing naked as the day she was born as the boys all looked on eagerly. “That’s one you’ve never seen naked before. Make sure you get a GOOD look at EVERYTHING!” I said to my partners and made my way over to Brooke. Of course, they wasted no time in checking out every curve and crevice.
Brooke shook her head as if silently pleading for me not to do this. She could have yelled or screamed as she didn’t have a gag like Abby but for some reason she didn’t. She just stood there as I stripped her. To my surprise she wasn’t wearing a bra but that was one less thing I had to dispose of. I recalled Abby’s humiliating gesture of pinching my nipple when I was exposed and how I hated it, so I reached out and gave both of hers a good tweaking!
“That’s two, you boys haven’t seen naked before,” I said giggling to them as they moved in front of Brooke to check out her body. Even in the darkness I could tell Brooke was blushing profusely.
Tina, Susan and Paula all followed in turn. I took my time relishing my revenge hoping that by dragging this out it would increase the shame and humiliation that my victims were experiencing. I wasn’t worried about being caught as we were all in literal darkness. Only those close at hand could see well enough to realize what was going on.
After the boys all got a good look at the girls, noting aloud to each other the differences among each of the naked bodies before them, I stepped back in front of the line of girls and waved my hand nonchalantly. “Okay guys, you know what to do next.” Andy and Freddie took off running while Billy Thompson remained with me.
“What are you doing now?” Brooke asked plainly.
“You’ll see. You all didn’t think I stripped you just to show your naked asses to those guys, did you?” I said flippantly. To a girl, their faces distorted in a panic with their eyes widening and mouths dropping open as far as they could go – well, all except poor Abby who was still gagged. She looked pitiful with slobber all running down her face and dangling like long strings from the corners of her mouth. I took pity on her and removed her gag. I know that was probably stupid of me, but since none of the other girls were making a scene, I figured I’d be nice.
No sooner had I removed the gag when Abby began giggling, “You were right, Brooke, she DOES fit in!”
“What?” I asked confused.
Brooke now smiling explained. “She means you were a good choice. I was sure you’d fit in to our little group and you just proved me right. I couldn’t be happier.”
“What do you mean you couldn’t be happier?” I snapped in reply. “Don’t you realize what’s about to happen?”
Brooke laughed as if she couldn’t care less and Tina spoke up, “Doesn’t matter, we like how it’s going so far, so keep it up.”
I figured they were just trying to psych me out by pretending this didn’t bother them. I KNEW public exposure bothered Abby because I saw how she reacted when I stole her clothes in the shower and she ran after me. “You aren’t fooling me,” I said calmly. “I know you are all scared to death!”
Paula chimed in, “No, not really. It’s all part of being in the club.”
“Club? What club?” I asked totally taken aback.
“The DeeARReee club,” Abby said proudly. “Brooke here selected you for membership and we’ve been evaluating you all this time. I’m pleased to say you’ve passed with flying colors!”
“The WHAT club, the DeeARReee club?? What the hell is that?”
“Say it slowly,” Abby said choking back her laughter.
“DeeArrEE . . . dee – ARR – eee, hmmm . . . dee – arr - eee . . . Oh, I get it, D.R.E. They’re initials, an acronym of some sort, right?”
“Yep,” Brooke acknowledged. “D.R.E – the DARE to RISK EXPOSURE Club.”
“Yeah, we are all into taking risks exposing our bodies in public, well ours or other peoples,” she added laughing. “We try to make it look accidental or as if our exposure wasn’t our fault, you know, like you are doing to us now!”
“I’m sooooooo excited,” Paula admitted. “I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us!”
“You’re making all this up,” I protested skeptically.
“No we’re not. We’ve been doing this for the last two years!” Abby explained.
I couldn’t believe what I was hearing! “But, when you chased after me when I took your clothes . . . that was real embarrassment! I’m absolutely positive about that. I got you good and you know it!”
“Sorry to disappoint you babe, but it was all planned.”
“How could that be?”
Abby said smugly, “It was all a set up. Think about it, WHO told you that I took my showers last and that I was shy about my body?”
“Brooke . . .”
“And explain this,” Abby continued, “Who in their right mind would leave the safety of the locker room stark naked chasing after you when we all knew the boys’ track team was having camp! Hmmmmm? Does THAT make sense to you? Of course, not, it was just an opportunity for me to get naked in front of others and get away it because it wasn’t my fault!”
CRAP! She was right. I WAS set up. They have been playing me all along! I just shook my head in disbelief – it was like I was in an episode of the Twilight Zone or some Sci-Fi movie! Any moment I was going to wake up and discover none of this is real!
Just then the outdoor stadium lights came on illuminating all of us. “Right on cue,” I said to the girls, “Freddie has done his part.” The girls were practically gleaming with excitement, but I was still confused.
“Let me get this straight. You are all actually ‘into’ exposing yourselves? You really LIKE this stuff?”
“Absolutely but we are much more careful and deliberate about it than you are. You just run off naked every night at midnight roaming your own neighborhood for crying out loud. Do you know how dangerous that is? WE are much more professional about it so as to minimize the risk.” Abby stated.
“Yeah, like tonight,” Brooke added. “We didn’t know you were planning this – I must say I gotta give you credit for being imaginative, but we are like totally in the clear and we STILL have our fun!”
“Huh?”
“We get exposed but if we get into trouble for it, we’ll just blame you! I mean we didn’t tie ourselves up did we? YOU did that. We will be just innocent victims here. You’ll be the one who gets busted and probably expelled or something.” Brooke explained.
Crap! I hadn’t thought of that. I was playing right into their hands! This wasn’t any fun if they weren’t totally humiliated! What kind of revenge gives pleasure to the person you are seeking revenge upon?
“But I still don’t understand. WHY did you choose me to pick on in the first place? I’ve GOT to know. I thought it was because you didn’t want me on the track team.”
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The Midnight Run – Part Nineteen (Reluctant Nudity, Public Stripping)
BY: Hooked6 (Copyright 2008 by Hooked6@hotmail.com)
Brooke cleared her throat and replied, “Well, it was a cinch to spot your exhibitionist tendencies a mile off.”
“WHAT?” I cried excitedly, “I don’t dress like a slut. I ALWAYS wear conservative clothes.”
“That’s right. Think about it. You dress conservatively yet you have a body that most girls would die for, well, except for those pimples on your chest you call boobs. But, otherwise, you are really hot So why hide it? The answer is simple. You are conflicted emotionally. Deep down you know you have a body that boys would drool over. You WANT to show it off but you have had such a strict upbringing that it prevents you from acting on those impulses. You are also wallowing in submissiveness. You are always so eager to please that you are an easy mark for people like me to take advantage of you. THAT’S why I chose you. I was sure you’d fit right in. We had to find out if I was right so we pushed you to see what you’d do. That way we’d discover the truth with little risk to ourselves if I was wrong. To my delight you have far exceeded anything we could have hoped for. It’s a shame really.”
I scrunched up my eyebrows. “A shame, what’s a shame?”
“It’s a shame you won’t be able to be in our club now. WE had all decided earlier in the locker room that if you passed tonight’s little test we’d tell you all about the club and ask you to join. We would have had such fun together. I can tell you with absolute certainty what you’ve experienced up to now is nothing compared to what we routinely do – not even your stint as a mannequin comes close. But not now, I’m afraid, it won’t be possible.”
“WHY,” I asked? “Is it because I’m humiliating you? Is that it? I can untie you and let you go. We can pretend none of this ever happened tonight. I mean I didn’t know about the club and all. I just didn’t know! I think I’d really like to join! True, I WAS hell-bent on trashing you tonight but I didn’t know! That’s not fair, I DIDN’T KNOW!!!”
Just then the fire alarm bells went off sounding the alarms throughout the entire campus! Andy was right on time, DAMNIT!
I had planned to expose the girls to the entire school because I knew that if the alarms sounded everyone in the gym would have to rally at the track because that was the school’s policy. Once they eventually heard the alarms over the band music and figured out they had to evacuate, everyone would pile out of the gym and see five naked girls all illuminated by the bright lights of the stadium.
“Too late . . .” Brooke lamented. “Like I said, it would have been a blast having you as a member. Get ready girls”, she said looking at them. “The fun is about to start. Just remember if anyone asks, we blame Katie Lynn.”
“Oh no you don’t,” I said in a panic. “I want in!” I reached behind my neck and yanked the dress ties loose dropping my gown to my feet leaving me as naked as the other girls. I leaned against the fence and stretched out my arms. “ANDY, QUICK, TIE MY ARMS and then GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE!”
Andy smiled and did as I asked. In a flash I was bound and tied just like the other girls. I was so excited! I had made new friends and they were just as interested in my naked hobby as I was.
It was then I looked over my shoulder and discovered Andy Untying Brooke. “WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!” I bellowed. He just smiled and continued to untie the rest.
“You’re such a dweeb!” Brooke said condescendingly as she looked me over bound, naked and suddenly terrified. “You really thought you could pull one over on us? HA! You’re so gullible.” With that she, Andy and the other girls all scampered off into the darkness leaving me to face the now exiting hoards of the student body!
I’m going to kill her!” I muttered to myself. “Make no mistake about it, I’m going to kill her!”
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Brooke cleared her throat and replied, “Well, it was a cinch to spot your exhibitionist tendencies a mile off.”
“WHAT?” I cried excitedly, “I don’t dress like a slut. I ALWAYS wear conservative clothes.”
“That’s right. Think about it. You dress conservatively yet you have a body that most girls would die for, well, except for those pimples on your chest you call boobs. But, otherwise, you are really hot So why hide it? The answer is simple. You are conflicted emotionally. Deep down you know you have a body that boys would drool over. You WANT to show it off but you have had such a strict upbringing that it prevents you from acting on those impulses. You are also wallowing in submissiveness. You are always so eager to please that you are an easy mark for people like me to take advantage of you. THAT’S why I chose you. I was sure you’d fit right in. We had to find out if I was right so we pushed you to see what you’d do. That way we’d discover the truth with little risk to ourselves if I was wrong. To my delight you have far exceeded anything we could have hoped for. It’s a shame really.”
I scrunched up my eyebrows. “A shame, what’s a shame?”
“It’s a shame you won’t be able to be in our club now. WE had all decided earlier in the locker room that if you passed tonight’s little test we’d tell you all about the club and ask you to join. We would have had such fun together. I can tell you with absolute certainty what you’ve experienced up to now is nothing compared to what we routinely do – not even your stint as a mannequin comes close. But not now, I’m afraid, it won’t be possible.”
“WHY,” I asked? “Is it because I’m humiliating you? Is that it? I can untie you and let you go. We can pretend none of this ever happened tonight. I mean I didn’t know about the club and all. I just didn’t know! I think I’d really like to join! True, I WAS hell-bent on trashing you tonight but I didn’t know! That’s not fair, I DIDN’T KNOW!!!”
Just then the fire alarm bells went off sounding the alarms throughout the entire campus! Andy was right on time, DAMNIT!
I had planned to expose the girls to the entire school because I knew that if the alarms sounded everyone in the gym would have to rally at the track because that was the school’s policy. Once they eventually heard the alarms over the band music and figured out they had to evacuate, everyone would pile out of the gym and see five naked girls all illuminated by the bright lights of the stadium.
“Too late . . .” Brooke lamented. “Like I said, it would have been a blast having you as a member. Get ready girls”, she said looking at them. “The fun is about to start. Just remember if anyone asks, we blame Katie Lynn.”
“Oh no you don’t,” I said in a panic. “I want in!” I reached behind my neck and yanked the dress ties loose dropping my gown to my feet leaving me as naked as the other girls. I leaned against the fence and stretched out my arms. “ANDY, QUICK, TIE MY ARMS and then GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE!”
Andy smiled and did as I asked. In a flash I was bound and tied just like the other girls. I was so excited! I had made new friends and they were just as interested in my naked hobby as I was.
It was then I looked over my shoulder and discovered Andy Untying Brooke. “WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!” I bellowed. He just smiled and continued to untie the rest.
“You’re such a dweeb!” Brooke said condescendingly as she looked me over bound, naked and suddenly terrified. “You really thought you could pull one over on us? HA! You’re so gullible.” With that she, Andy and the other girls all scampered off into the darkness leaving me to face the now exiting hoards of the student body!
I’m going to kill her!” I muttered to myself. “Make no mistake about it, I’m going to kill her!”
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I finally got around to reading this whole thing. It was very fun, and Katie Lynn's constant brazen boldness diving head-first into her own doom over and over again never got old. She was a roller coaster of extremes as protagonist, constantly jumping between extreme shame and extreme arousal without any room for moderation, which fit her character very well.
My one real complaint would be the ending, just because it was a little too convoluted to find out that Andy and the girls were secret allies and had done all of that just to trick Katie Lynn into tying herself. (Also I think that was meant to be Billy, the boy who stayed behind with her, unless Andy is a very fast runner). Even if he tipped them off to the plan ahead of time the whole thing hinged on the very improbable luck that Katie Lynn would do precisely that instead of some other action. The twist of the DRE club and Katie Lynn's status within it is never given real closure either. The story also ended immediately before the biggest exposure of all which is always a let down.
I feel that it would have worked better with the six girls actually being caught naked together, with Katie Lynn experiencing extreme second thoughts and regret roughly 5 seconds after it was too late to change her mind. After the boys, cameras, and the accidental orgasms all had their fun (And I imagine Katie Lynn would go off at the precise moment Coach was kneeling down and untying her ankles), the girls could begin planning their next wild adventures.
My one real complaint would be the ending, just because it was a little too convoluted to find out that Andy and the girls were secret allies and had done all of that just to trick Katie Lynn into tying herself. (Also I think that was meant to be Billy, the boy who stayed behind with her, unless Andy is a very fast runner). Even if he tipped them off to the plan ahead of time the whole thing hinged on the very improbable luck that Katie Lynn would do precisely that instead of some other action. The twist of the DRE club and Katie Lynn's status within it is never given real closure either. The story also ended immediately before the biggest exposure of all which is always a let down.
I feel that it would have worked better with the six girls actually being caught naked together, with Katie Lynn experiencing extreme second thoughts and regret roughly 5 seconds after it was too late to change her mind. After the boys, cameras, and the accidental orgasms all had their fun (And I imagine Katie Lynn would go off at the precise moment Coach was kneeling down and untying her ankles), the girls could begin planning their next wild adventures.
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Great story.
You kept us guessing right until the end.
I was hoping Katie would have made a different choice but either way would end up with consequences.
You kept us guessing right until the end.
I was hoping Katie would have made a different choice but either way would end up with consequences.
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Hello, Thanks for answering, yes of course, I mean the story called Quit While You’re Ahead, I see you get to chapter 11, are there more chapters for the continuation?
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I haven't written any more of "Quit While You're Ahead" so far as I had forgotten about that one. I need to dust it off and see what I can do with it. I have only started writing again and have so many ideas.
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Thanks for the detailed comments. I really appreciate that. Oddly enough the endings I have written to this story have always bothered me (and many readers too,) I say endings (pleural) as I have written 6 different endings to this story since 2008 and posted them at various places and none have seem to be satisfying to readers. I wrote a straight revenge ending with Katie Lynn getting her due and that bombed based on reader feedback at the time. I wrote a "Katie Lynn changes her mind at the last second" ending and that did okay but seemed flat. I have written a Katie Lynn's Mom catches her naked on the dance floor" ending where she is further embarrassed in front of her classmates by her mom and that seemed to do just "okay" in comments but people genuinely felt bad for Katie Lynn. I always that that was my most erotic ending but apparently it wasn't. The ending you have read here in this story is probably the best but as you point out STILL isn't popular and I agree. You aren't alone in your sentiment.Executionus wrote: ↑Sun Mar 21, 2021 4:04 am
My one real complaint would be the ending, just because it was a little too convoluted to find out that Andy and the girls were secret allies and had done all of that just to trick Katie Lynn into tying herself.
I feel that it would have worked better with the six girls actually being caught naked together, with Katie Lynn experiencing extreme second thoughts and regret roughly 5 seconds after it was too late to change her mind.
Executionus wrote: ↑Sun Mar 21, 2021 4:04 am After the boys, cameras, and the accidental orgasms all had their fun (And I imagine Katie Lynn would go off at the precise moment Coach was kneeling down and untying her ankles), the girls could begin planning their next wild adventures.
I think you might have hit on something here with the open-ended finish. I'll do two things - I'll post the "Katie Lynn gets Caught by Mom" ending AND I'll write a version of your suggestion of the above ending and post it here as well in a day or two and see what people think here at this site. Thanks for your idea.
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