Avery borrowed for fun

[Darky]

Wow, great story. Anctious to see what will happen next to Avery

[unfair]

You know when you read a story, and it feels like someone reached into you head and wrote exactly what you like?
This story pushes my buttons more than my story >_<.
Really good job.

Haven't made it to the end to see if a sequel is likely...but I'm sure hoping. Do you have other stories anywhere?

[theoneandonly]

Amazing story! Can't wait to read another by you!

[dazed]

Awesome story. Loved it

[unfair]

Do you have any plans for more parts to this OP? To sound like a character in a story here I'd do anything.

But really I come back to this all the time and would be grateful for more, it's all I want for christmas . It does end "prepare for the worst" = sequel.