Elizabeth – Insider Trading Gone Wrong - Grand Finale Added (Content Warning: Rape)

[Stella]

Rape stories have always been against the rules on these boards, but I suppose since new ownership is here (Viredae), there are new rules too.

That said, reason why I came to this board is because rape stories have always made me extremely uncomfortable, these sites were always playful, maybe a LITTLE forceful when it came to touching, grabbing, stroking, etc.

But it never crossed into: "I'm going to have sex with you against your will."

This is not what the spirit of the old board was.

While I respect your fetishes and such I don't think this is the board for it. These are playful stories about stripping and SOMETIMES sex, anything forceful beyond handjobs, blowjobs, or cunnilingus seems to be crossing the line for me. >.<

Sorry if this is rude, it's just my opinion and not something I'd be happy to see more of on the board .o. I hope you have a great day though.

[Lorax]

Sorry HM2014, I was following this until the rape scenes.

Rape's not my scene.

Admittedly, there's a fine line between coercion / humiliation and rape and there's often more than an element of the former in rape, but this goes too far over the line.

This isn't my board, and I'm not making judgement calls on others, but this isn't my thing. I feel queasy reading this

[jimmythehand]

I found this to be a very well written story, with well developed characters and plot, that deserves a place in the world of erotic fiction; I would however agree with the others that said place probably isn't this particular board.

I don't blame you for posting the story here however, as it can be difficult to know how far 'real or fictional stories involving girls being pantsed, stripped, tricked, caught naked, embarrassed, punished and/or humiliated' can be taken if you're not that familiar with the culture of the board, as the board guildlines are left deliberately ambiguous to allow Viredae (and authors) a little more leeway in what's posted.

You're clearly a talented writer and much of the earlier part of Insider Trading was very much in line with this board's widely enjoyed themes, so I'd encourage you to keep posting stories here with different, milder forms of humiliation if you're interested in doing so.

[Nobudy]

Honestly I don't mind rape elements as long as it's done right, tbh I feel like there should be another part of this board for XXX stories, so those who want to write them and enjoy them can and those who don't feel right reading them have context before hand.

The story in general was pretty good, I do wish that more drama and action was taken place. The writing was really good especially for the characters, but overall not much really happened and it was one sided the entire time. I'd love for a similar story but with more instances of exposure and a longer plot.

[Stella]

Honestly I don't mind rape elements as long as it's done right, tbh I feel like there should be another part of this board for XXX stories, so those who want to write them and enjoy them can and those who don't feel right reading them have context before hand.

The story in general was pretty good, I do wish that more drama and action was taken place. The writing was really good especially for the characters, but overall not much really happened and it was one sided the entire time. I'd love for a similar story but with more instances of exposure and a longer plot.

Sure things get "rapey" with lack of consent in stories but that comes with the humiliation, this goes far beyond humiliation and seems like torture and severe trauma was done to this poor girl. For the record if a girl forcefully rode some guy and his reaction was like this then I'd still have a problem with it.

For the record there was also rules against stories involving darker themes like blood, death, etc. I'd really like to see the spirit of the old board carried over, there's a reason I don't visit sites like literotica, because non-consent to them usually means "oh, did you mean ONLY hardcore rape stories?" which I try to avoid.

There are plenty of rape stories on there. These are lighthearted stories for the most part, its not about what people like, these sites have always had rules against rape stories. Oddly enough I don't have as big a problem with forced blowjobs or cunnilingus, maybe because its not such a forceful act and when it is portrayed its usually lighthearted and ends up with the character enjoying it or "getting payback" so they don't view it as that bad to begin with.

[lowradiation]

Stella
Some people evidently like these scenes. If you don't like them, that's fine. But wouldn't it be better if you simply withheld your opinion as opposed to try and censor the entire board? If you prefer all the content on here to be consensual rather than non-consensual then perhaps you've come to the wrong place? Sanctimoniousness and porn don't really sit together that well.

[Spanker]

If there is a problem reading a story, that's fine. If the concern is significant, then comment. I'm not sure that asking anyone to post on another board is warranted. Not in this occasion for this story.

There seem to be a few posters that seem to try to moderate this board by what they like. That makes me queasy.

If you don't like a story based on personal taste, don't read it.

[Debbifan]

I've just looked back over the board guidelines at the top of the board index and I think point number 5 is pertinent here and may have avoided most of the controversy. I quote...

"5) As you can see by reading some of the posts the stories range from simple humorous adolescent pranks or experiences, to stories involving more sexually explicit material. All I ask is if your story contains explicit material please make sure it is age appropriate (aka not illegal) and issue a warning letting the reader know in advance."

[Spanker]

I've just looked back over the board guidelines at the top of the board index and I think point number 5 is pertinent here and may have avoided most of the controversy. I quote...

"5) As you can see by reading some of the posts the stories range from simple humorous adolescent pranks or experiences, to stories involving more sexually explicit material. All I ask is if your story contains explicit material please make sure it is age appropriate (aka not illegal) and issue a warning letting the reader know in advance."

I'm not sure what point you're trying to make.
In your story you have two schoolboys coercing an adult woman to strip. You have a 13 year old girl conducting affairs. All the actions would be illegal, whether committed by a child or adult.

In this context, what exactly do you mean by 'age appropriate '.

If you are talking about sexual intercourse, then you may have a point, but then this would encompass any insertion into a body as this is the definition of rape in many countries. Its inclusion is often found on this board.
So where exactly should the line be drawn? It's a valid question, but if debated it needs to be honestly dealt with rather than a few posters acting as judge and jury.

I don't mean this to be personal or rude, but I find it difficult to accept the board being moderated by a few self appointed posters. If you have a comment make it, but don't tell others to make contributions to another board. Quite frankly, that isn't your place.

I'm happy to listen to other views and accept a majority decision - or the board's moderator.

As I said, I don't want this to be seen as personal or aggressive, but I would like there to be a discussion between those using the board.

[Debbifan]

All that my post was doing was to point out the board's own guidelines as printed under "Announcements and Administration, Board Guidelines" if you would care to check. I think it fair to say that the third part of this story was sexually explicit but anyone offended at reading it after a note stating as such at the beginning, would not have had a leg to stand on. I'm not advocating censorship, just a way to avoid misunderstandings that the original board guidelines seem to have anticipated could arise.