Magic (New 4-18-2025)

[NudeBaG]

Tremendously entertaining chapter where we got to know Julie and James' personalities. Julie is a real character indeed and definitely a typical younger sister who likes to tease her older brother, especially since she has the upper hand with him being totally bare naked in front of her. I love how she likes talking about his dick, beans and bum and how she wants to see Mark's big wiener as well. Lol. Awesome job, NudeBag!

Thank you VERY much
Julie is definitely going to be a lot of fun!
She’s cute, naïve and curious, and not cruel
but there’s just enough of a ‘naughty’ streak in her that can easily be exploited in the future

Writing this chapter, I found it very difficult to keep her innocent, but I think I have a good grasp on her character now.
The more she interacts with James, Mark and the girls of our coven, I think she might become another favorite to write for me

[Jeepman89]

She's already one of my favourites.

[Themarble]

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I think James barely keeping his cool with his erection was great. I imagine that's going to be hard to do in the future, especially if they go outside. He won't have anywhere to run off to hide and jerk off.

Also it's a nice change of pace to have James calm down after cumming. That being said, I'm excited to see what happens when he doesn't have that luxury!!

[NudeBaG]

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I think James barely keeping his cool with his erection was great. I imagine that's going to be hard to do in the future, especially if they go outside. He won't have anywhere to run off to hide and jerk off.

Also it's a nice change of pace to have James calm down after cumming. That being said, I'm excited to see what happens when he doesn't have that luxury!!

Thank you SO SO much!

So, it was voted earlier that James’ BIG reveal should be in front of the whole middle school, so I couldn’t let Julie see that yet.
She did catch a glimpse though but not a prolonged look at his erect state.
That would have created a continuity issue going forward.
Additionally, I couldn’t have him attract a Sacral Feeder without any kind of defense.
I have A LOT planned for James and Julie, but can’t jump ahead.
I’m glad I didn’t go with the time skip, as that wouldn’t have allowed me to explore and evolve their characters.
Working on Chapter 41 now.
Just had to go back to some previous chapters for context, which is also why Chapter 40 took so long
There were A TON of changes from my first idea.
As of right now, James will start his first day at Wicker Creek Elementary/Middle School in Chapter 43

[Trundle]

Great chapter that really sets the scene for what's the come I'm sure.

Already thinking Julie will become one of my favourite characters, one of those classic little sister characters that causes nothing but trouble for her embarrassed big brother. Cannot wait to see her reaction to some of the things poor James has to go through.

I liked that James didn't get a full erection until he was behind closed doors, I could definitely see a boy being so anxious at being naked in front of people that he doesn't get a full erection. It makes total sense. Hopefully he grows out of that anxiety eventually and everyone sees him in ALL his glory

Great as always, cannot wait for more. Really well detailed, you feel like you get to know the characters so well!

[NudeBaG]

Great chapter that really sets the scene for what's the come I'm sure.

Already thinking Julie will become one of my favourite characters, one of those classic little sister characters that causes nothing but trouble for her embarrassed big brother. Cannot wait to see her reaction to some of the things poor James has to go through.

I liked that James didn't get a full erection until he was behind closed doors, I could definitely see a boy being so anxious at being naked in front of people that he doesn't get a full erection. It makes total sense. Hopefully he grows out of that anxiety eventually and everyone sees him in ALL his glory

Great as always, cannot wait for more. Really well detailed, you feel like you get to know the characters so well!

Thank you SO MUCH Trundle

I have to treat James differently from Mark for a number of reasons right now.
And the way I’m treating Julie is a little bit of everything.
Sugar, Spice, Everything Nice AND a dash of naughty curiosity
She’s proving to be a LOT of fun

[NudeBaG]

Hoping to get Chapter 41 out later today, just worried about some continuity issues.
Overall I think I’ve got it, but I don’t want to do something I’ll have to retcon later.

[NudeBaG]

Sorry guys, reading back through previous chapters around Julie and James’ introduction to the story, I had to adjust some things to accommodate my current chapter
I flubbed some events and had to adjust James’ official first day of school from ‘day after tomorrow’ to ‘sometime this week’.
I may have missed some other minor details, but that shouldn’t effect anything else I have cooking.

All that to say, unless I skip some important character stuff and cover some other events, James’ First Day will be in Chapter 43.
I’ll do my best on the way there, but the ‘big reveal’ has been put on hold for a bit.

I sincerely apologize

I know we all eagerly await updates, and it’s killing me that I’ve had to delay

[NudeBaG]

I have mixed feelings about this one
But I can’t rewrite it again though.
I NEED to move on.
Maybe the time skip would’ve worked after all, but it’s too late now.
You guys have always been supportive and I deeply appreciate that
This chapter is running long, but there was stuff I wanted to cover/clarify, and I hope it comes through

The chapter after this one won’t be nearly as long

[Jeepman89]

Can't wait.