Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter eight - 3/27/25)
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter five - 3/22/25)
I don't like much when the dad is involved, but this is just me. If he is a black belt Maggie should tie him up, mom may agree with it. The story is still going in the right direction. Although I don't like much all the femdom part where Maggie explicitly dominate her brother, if you keep Alex extremely embarrassed I will love the story
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter five - 3/22/25)
How about dad being away in a business trip, and coming when you conclude this story, and mad when he finds out what happened, setting up an ENF spinoff later on if you or someone else wants to do it?SeeEffenem wrote: Sun Mar 23, 2025 12:10 am Now here's something I want to get settled sooner than later! It's my story and all, and I'll definitely mold it how I want. But!
What is the board's general consensus on CMNM, and the involvement of other guys in ENM? Should Alex's dad make an appearance, and act as an enforcer? "Do what your mother/sister says." Or, should he conveniently be on a business trip? I'd like to at least know what most people would enjoy seeing
Uhh, maybe consider this an indirect poll. 'Thank Me' for this comment if you'd want to see *some* amount of that. Either way, comment and let me know as well.![]()
As for dad in the story itself it feels like it would complicate matters more than it's worth. Each additional character needs more worldbuilding, so unless the dad has a major role I'd leave him out
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter five - 3/22/25)
If you have a scene in mind where a dad is involved, perhaps hold onto that and do a separate story topic.SeeEffenem wrote: Sun Mar 23, 2025 12:10 am
What is the board's general consensus on CMNM, and the involvement of other guys in ENM? Should Alex's dad make an appearance, and act as an enforcer? "Do what your mother/sister says." Or, should he conveniently be on a business trip? I'd like to at least know what most people would enjoy seeing![]()
I would love to see how you handle that.
I've started fifty stories on this site. None of them have a dad involved in a major way. I have had moms, aunts, and other grown women
touch a boy. I've had boy touches boy (or teases boy) scenes in several stories, but no dad.
The only time I used a dad extensively is in "Exposing Eric", when the dad takes charge of the punishment of Eric for sending inappropriate
videos to his daughter. It's a non sexual punishment situation. The sexiness is in the minds of the people (basically girls) who watch the
punishment. The dad and brothers of the victimized girl are only out for justice.
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All that being said, I would like to see how any type of grown man can be used in an ENM story. Chances are it would come across is pervy
and too icky for the typical reader. Everyone seems to love the flirty/naughty aunt, but if an uncle did the same things...oh the horror.
I have a spinoff story for my Jakub character from "Hard Time at the Beach", been in my mind for a while. His funny and beer crazed uncle
is the cause of some embarrassment at a sauna and some naked outdoor frolicking during the winter. As long as it's in good and mostly clean
fun then I think it's possible to use a grown man as the cause of an ENM situation.
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter five - 3/22/25)
Grown men in Enm stories have limited roles.
Most grown men and women are pretty well sexually experienced, so there’s no real taboo or embarrassment to be explored, other than maybe domination or SPH, neither of which am I a huge fan of.
That being the case, you’re limited to the situations they can be put in.
You lose a lot of opportunity for shock value and exploration.
Adult males with young females can come off as extremely taboo, so you limit your audience immediately as most people don’t want to be associated with that.
While it IS a bit of a double standard, I find it more acceptable for a mature woman to be utilized in stories with younger naked males.
While still taboo, you can have an ‘empowerment’, ‘domination’ or ‘maternal’ angle, which can all be fun.
That reverse angle with an older, mature male in the same position doesn’t work as well.
While these are my personal feelings on the subject, I do understand there IS an audience for it.
But it is clearly more ‘niche’ and less popular.
Most grown men and women are pretty well sexually experienced, so there’s no real taboo or embarrassment to be explored, other than maybe domination or SPH, neither of which am I a huge fan of.
That being the case, you’re limited to the situations they can be put in.
You lose a lot of opportunity for shock value and exploration.
Adult males with young females can come off as extremely taboo, so you limit your audience immediately as most people don’t want to be associated with that.
While it IS a bit of a double standard, I find it more acceptable for a mature woman to be utilized in stories with younger naked males.
While still taboo, you can have an ‘empowerment’, ‘domination’ or ‘maternal’ angle, which can all be fun.
That reverse angle with an older, mature male in the same position doesn’t work as well.
While these are my personal feelings on the subject, I do understand there IS an audience for it.
But it is clearly more ‘niche’ and less popular.
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter five - 3/22/25)
Yeah I think there's a clear reason Dads are usually not involved with these kinds of stories. They're very difficult to make work as characters in the plot. It's harder to make them ok with the naked boy scenario I think, either they'd put a stop to it or they'd be involved but then you have the Man and boy thing. I'm sure some people are into that but I can't say I am personally.
I think Dad being away on a trip is the easiest way to deal with him. Have him be blissfully unaware of what's happening to his poor son. You could maybe even have it so that Maggie is a Daddys girl and their Dad would never believe Alex if he told him what she was up to, so it's pointless telling him. Something like that maybe?
Really hope we get plenty more chapters of this story by the way. It's fantastic!
I think Dad being away on a trip is the easiest way to deal with him. Have him be blissfully unaware of what's happening to his poor son. You could maybe even have it so that Maggie is a Daddys girl and their Dad would never believe Alex if he told him what she was up to, so it's pointless telling him. Something like that maybe?
Really hope we get plenty more chapters of this story by the way. It's fantastic!
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter five - 3/22/25)
Sister's Anatomy Lesson Chapter 6
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"MAGGIE, ALEX, DINNER TIME!" Their mother's voice booms.
The siblings jump, and Alex's body stiffens.
"COMING!" Maggie hollers back. She sighs, and shakes her head. "Awe sorry big bro, is that what YOU wanted to say? That's what Connie's younger brother always says when he cummies."
Alex grits his teeth, the muscles in his legs and stomach flexing, as his whole body tenses. Fuck. He was so close... Maybe even he could just convince her to keep goring for just a few more seconds. "Maggie I-"
"Guess we'll just have to finish later, huh?" Maggie's hand stops moving altogether, no longer stroking. However, she keeps one hand on her brother's anatomy, pinching it by the base and holding it upright. Her eyes dart between Alex's desperate expression and his needy cock - as if taunting him. 'Go ahead and TRY finish yourself off. I dare you.'
Alex's body slumps against the bed, his eyes rolling back, and his lips parted as he pants for breath. He's so close. Like any boy his age, Alex had spent YEARS looking for that perfect porno, thinking of the perfect fantasy, to have an orgasm half as intense as he was movements away from. Just a few more strokes and he'd have blown a load bigger than any he's ever shot in his life.
But now, his sister's hand has stilled. He lays there for a moment, panting. His cock is still rock hard, his balls aching for release.
Maggie giggles as she watches Alex's cock pitifully throb, looking for some kind of release she's not going to give it. She wags it back and forth with her hand, like an excited little puppy's tail, her eyes never leaving Alex's. 'She knows,' he realized. She knew exactly what was would have happened if she had kept going - she'd made boys cum before. Worse yet, that evil little smirk let him know how frustrating it was for her to be denying it.
*wag wag wag*
"Maybe you're not a big boy after all" Maggie taunts. "Maybe you did cummie- but nothing comes out yet!"
Alex's face is red, his chest rising and falling as he takes deep breaths. It was a combination of both physical and mental exertion. As the prospects of his orgasm drift further and further away, he feels a fire rekindling within him. "I CAN, and if you had just kept-"
"MAGGIE. ALEX." Their mother repeats, a bit louder.
"Sorry mommy, on our way!" She replies. Maggie releases Alex's cock and gives her brother's knee a pat.
"Don't worry Alex, I'll play with your peepee more after dinner, and then maybe you can cummie!"
Alex was floored. He almost didn't know what shocked him more. The prospect of another jerk of session at the hands of his KID SISTER, the fact that she didn't ask but INFORMED him that she would be playing with him more, or that maybe at the end.
Maybe? Maybe she'd let him cum? Ok... it was definitely the maybe.
"Come on! We better get going!" Maggie says, hopping off the bed. "But first..."
Maggie leans forward, until she's looming over Alex's prone form on her bed, her knees leaning against the mattress for support.. Alex's eyes widen as he realizes what she's doing, but before he can react, her lips are already on him. Her kiss is light, and gentle, her soft pink lips pressing against the raging tip of his cock, and her eyes closing.
"NO MAGGIE D- Fuuuuuckk..." He was frozen, and his mind was still a fog of emotions and feelings. He squints his eyes shut at the pure disgust and humiliation that floods his mind at the sight of his sister pecking him on, well, his pecker. But he was a teenager, and his body was yelling at him to thrust his hips into the kiss. But he couldn't. Not with her. His fists gripped at the seats, resisting both the urge to resist, and to seek more.
Her kiss is soft, and gentle, her lips lingering only for a moment before pulling away. Alex can still feel her warm breath on his cock as she pulls back, giving him a smile that's somewhere in-between a mocking smirk and sweet smile. After everything she's put him through in the last hour, he genuinely can't tell which of the two it is.
Alex's brain is mashed potatoes by this point. "Maggie... W-what was that? Why would you do that?"
"I know I'm a mean sister," she states bluntly, closing her eyes and giggling. "but I wanted to thank you for letting me play with you!"
Before Alex can even respond, his sister is on her feet once more, and opening her bedroom door. She gives him a cheery smile, and waves. "Alright! Let's go!" She says with a smile. Her face falls momentarily into the slightest frown, her eyes lingering on his. "But I'm still the boss of you Alex, even if I can be nice. Don't say ANYTHING to mommy, or else I'll tell her that you tried touching ME while I was studying you."
With that, her smile reruns, and the sweet little girl persona takes over once more, as if she'd been possessed. She skips out the door, humming a song to herself.
Alex stares at the ceiling. Was this even happening? Had ANY of this really happened? Did his sister really just-
Alex rolls off the bed and onto the floor, grunting at the faint ache in his balls. His cock twitched desperately, in a last ditch effort to convince him to continue his sister's work. He sighs softly. Even if he did have the time, there's no way that Maggie wouldn't know--and who knows what she'd do to him.
He slowly stumbles to his feet, and begins searching the room for his boxer briefs, hoping that his little sister at least had the decency to leave them where she'd cast them aside.
His stomach churns. At this point, it was maybe what he should have expected. Maybe she'd just kicked them under the bed as she'd kissed him. Maybe if he looked really quickly, he could at least have the smallest amount of decency for dinner.
"ALEX BOWe! THIS IS THE LAST TIME I'M ASKING!"
"Sorry mom! I'm coming!" He yells, his voice cracking.
Never before in the boy's young life had he ever looked forward to dinner - solely for the modicum of privacy that the table would provide him as he say.
But maybe things would get better from here, he thought as he made his way down the stairs, his cock obscenely flopping from side to side with each step. I mean, even a little girl HAS to get bored with naked boys eventually - right?
*To be continued...*
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"MAGGIE, ALEX, DINNER TIME!" Their mother's voice booms.
The siblings jump, and Alex's body stiffens.
"COMING!" Maggie hollers back. She sighs, and shakes her head. "Awe sorry big bro, is that what YOU wanted to say? That's what Connie's younger brother always says when he cummies."
Alex grits his teeth, the muscles in his legs and stomach flexing, as his whole body tenses. Fuck. He was so close... Maybe even he could just convince her to keep goring for just a few more seconds. "Maggie I-"
"Guess we'll just have to finish later, huh?" Maggie's hand stops moving altogether, no longer stroking. However, she keeps one hand on her brother's anatomy, pinching it by the base and holding it upright. Her eyes dart between Alex's desperate expression and his needy cock - as if taunting him. 'Go ahead and TRY finish yourself off. I dare you.'
Alex's body slumps against the bed, his eyes rolling back, and his lips parted as he pants for breath. He's so close. Like any boy his age, Alex had spent YEARS looking for that perfect porno, thinking of the perfect fantasy, to have an orgasm half as intense as he was movements away from. Just a few more strokes and he'd have blown a load bigger than any he's ever shot in his life.
But now, his sister's hand has stilled. He lays there for a moment, panting. His cock is still rock hard, his balls aching for release.
Maggie giggles as she watches Alex's cock pitifully throb, looking for some kind of release she's not going to give it. She wags it back and forth with her hand, like an excited little puppy's tail, her eyes never leaving Alex's. 'She knows,' he realized. She knew exactly what was would have happened if she had kept going - she'd made boys cum before. Worse yet, that evil little smirk let him know how frustrating it was for her to be denying it.
*wag wag wag*
"Maybe you're not a big boy after all" Maggie taunts. "Maybe you did cummie- but nothing comes out yet!"
Alex's face is red, his chest rising and falling as he takes deep breaths. It was a combination of both physical and mental exertion. As the prospects of his orgasm drift further and further away, he feels a fire rekindling within him. "I CAN, and if you had just kept-"
"MAGGIE. ALEX." Their mother repeats, a bit louder.
"Sorry mommy, on our way!" She replies. Maggie releases Alex's cock and gives her brother's knee a pat.
"Don't worry Alex, I'll play with your peepee more after dinner, and then maybe you can cummie!"
Alex was floored. He almost didn't know what shocked him more. The prospect of another jerk of session at the hands of his KID SISTER, the fact that she didn't ask but INFORMED him that she would be playing with him more, or that maybe at the end.
Maybe? Maybe she'd let him cum? Ok... it was definitely the maybe.
"Come on! We better get going!" Maggie says, hopping off the bed. "But first..."
Maggie leans forward, until she's looming over Alex's prone form on her bed, her knees leaning against the mattress for support.. Alex's eyes widen as he realizes what she's doing, but before he can react, her lips are already on him. Her kiss is light, and gentle, her soft pink lips pressing against the raging tip of his cock, and her eyes closing.
"NO MAGGIE D- Fuuuuuckk..." He was frozen, and his mind was still a fog of emotions and feelings. He squints his eyes shut at the pure disgust and humiliation that floods his mind at the sight of his sister pecking him on, well, his pecker. But he was a teenager, and his body was yelling at him to thrust his hips into the kiss. But he couldn't. Not with her. His fists gripped at the seats, resisting both the urge to resist, and to seek more.
Her kiss is soft, and gentle, her lips lingering only for a moment before pulling away. Alex can still feel her warm breath on his cock as she pulls back, giving him a smile that's somewhere in-between a mocking smirk and sweet smile. After everything she's put him through in the last hour, he genuinely can't tell which of the two it is.
Alex's brain is mashed potatoes by this point. "Maggie... W-what was that? Why would you do that?"
"I know I'm a mean sister," she states bluntly, closing her eyes and giggling. "but I wanted to thank you for letting me play with you!"
Before Alex can even respond, his sister is on her feet once more, and opening her bedroom door. She gives him a cheery smile, and waves. "Alright! Let's go!" She says with a smile. Her face falls momentarily into the slightest frown, her eyes lingering on his. "But I'm still the boss of you Alex, even if I can be nice. Don't say ANYTHING to mommy, or else I'll tell her that you tried touching ME while I was studying you."
With that, her smile reruns, and the sweet little girl persona takes over once more, as if she'd been possessed. She skips out the door, humming a song to herself.
Alex stares at the ceiling. Was this even happening? Had ANY of this really happened? Did his sister really just-
Alex rolls off the bed and onto the floor, grunting at the faint ache in his balls. His cock twitched desperately, in a last ditch effort to convince him to continue his sister's work. He sighs softly. Even if he did have the time, there's no way that Maggie wouldn't know--and who knows what she'd do to him.
He slowly stumbles to his feet, and begins searching the room for his boxer briefs, hoping that his little sister at least had the decency to leave them where she'd cast them aside.
His stomach churns. At this point, it was maybe what he should have expected. Maybe she'd just kicked them under the bed as she'd kissed him. Maybe if he looked really quickly, he could at least have the smallest amount of decency for dinner.
"ALEX BOWe! THIS IS THE LAST TIME I'M ASKING!"
"Sorry mom! I'm coming!" He yells, his voice cracking.
Never before in the boy's young life had he ever looked forward to dinner - solely for the modicum of privacy that the table would provide him as he say.
But maybe things would get better from here, he thought as he made his way down the stairs, his cock obscenely flopping from side to side with each step. I mean, even a little girl HAS to get bored with naked boys eventually - right?
*To be continued...*
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter five - 3/22/25)
Heh, decided to give everyone a little something before I have to go AFK for a few days. Not the longest chapter by far, but hopefully it keeps you all entertained long enough for a more formal installment 

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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter six - 3/24/25)
Fantastic!
I thought we'd be waiting a few more days for the next installment so this was a lovely surprise. Maggie really is becoming one of my favourite characters ever on here, I love how utterly in control she is of Alex. She's got him completely frazzled and under her control, she's the boss now and there's nothing he can do about it.
At the end there has Alex gone down for dinner naked from the waist down? I like the idea that he's so aroused he's not thinking clearly, normally he'd go and cover up before going downstairs but this time he's not thinking properly and he's just wandered downstairs with his erection bouncing around.
I wonder if there's anyone else in the kitchen? A surprise guest maybe? a neighbour?
Loving this so much!
I thought we'd be waiting a few more days for the next installment so this was a lovely surprise. Maggie really is becoming one of my favourite characters ever on here, I love how utterly in control she is of Alex. She's got him completely frazzled and under her control, she's the boss now and there's nothing he can do about it.
At the end there has Alex gone down for dinner naked from the waist down? I like the idea that he's so aroused he's not thinking clearly, normally he'd go and cover up before going downstairs but this time he's not thinking properly and he's just wandered downstairs with his erection bouncing around.
I wonder if there's anyone else in the kitchen? A surprise guest maybe? a neighbour?
Loving this so much!
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter six - 3/24/25)
I don't think she'll get bored with naked boys at all!
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Re: Sister's Anatomy Lesson (Chapter six - 3/24/25)
Loving. This!
The retooling of Maggie’s character is working out phenomenally well!
This story appears to be another exercise in the ‘art of the tease’
and I am here for it!
Damn.
Alex is heading to dinner with a boner, and I’m now stuck at work with one

Great job!
The retooling of Maggie’s character is working out phenomenally well!
This story appears to be another exercise in the ‘art of the tease’
Damn.
Alex is heading to dinner with a boner, and I’m now stuck at work with one
Great job!
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