Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
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Very sweet ending.
But there is potential for lots of danger in future rounds of exposure. It's agreed that Cameron will strip down for them in the future, but
something could go wrong.
Great story. Hopefully there is a sequel.
But there is potential for lots of danger in future rounds of exposure. It's agreed that Cameron will strip down for them in the future, but
something could go wrong.
Great story. Hopefully there is a sequel.
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Perfect ending. I enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue writing here.
Just curious about Cam’s briefs. Did Hannah keep it as a souvenir?
Just curious about Cam’s briefs. Did Hannah keep it as a souvenir?
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I actually got choked up.
Perfect ending and follow up.
Cam came out okay.
AND He got the girl(s)
While I would LOVE another chapter with Cam having to do EVERYTHING the 3 girls tell him to (maybe even including Natalie
) it’s entirely unnecessary 
You delivered a perfect story.
Every chapter leading to something bigger.
And the payoff was

Maybe we get a chapter in the future after some time has passed… after Cam has completed puberty …
I’d love to see Mia’s reaction then

(Actually, I kind of like the idea of the girls tracking Cam’s progress through puberty
Could be fun)
Again, thank you for this.
It’s now solidified (for me at least) as the best story here!
Bravo


(Seriously though) the combination of happy tears and arousal is pretty confusing

I didn’t think it was possible to deliver a story on here that so perfectly feels believable, incredibly embarrassing, EXTREMELY arousing, and so heartfelt at the same time.
But… here we are.
Congratulations to you (and Cam, Ellie, Hannah, Mia and Natalie)
Perfect ending and follow up.
Cam came out okay.
AND He got the girl(s)
While I would LOVE another chapter with Cam having to do EVERYTHING the 3 girls tell him to (maybe even including Natalie
You delivered a perfect story.
Every chapter leading to something bigger.
And the payoff was
Maybe we get a chapter in the future after some time has passed… after Cam has completed puberty …
I’d love to see Mia’s reaction then
(Actually, I kind of like the idea of the girls tracking Cam’s progress through puberty
Again, thank you for this.
It’s now solidified (for me at least) as the best story here!
Bravo
(Seriously though) the combination of happy tears and arousal is pretty confusing
I didn’t think it was possible to deliver a story on here that so perfectly feels believable, incredibly embarrassing, EXTREMELY arousing, and so heartfelt at the same time.
But… here we are.
Congratulations to you (and Cam, Ellie, Hannah, Mia and Natalie)
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I've deliberately left several things open here (Cam's future adventures with the girls, the fate of his briefs, what Natalie might do next, whether Mary will ever have that talk with Hannah, etc.)
I like the idea of leaving these things for readers to imagine for themselves what happens. I don't rule out a sequel at some point, but I'd need a strong concept for one, rather than simply continuing the plot threads I've already laid.
It'll also be at least a while before I write another story. While I'm very happy with the way this one turned out, I need a break!
I like the idea of leaving these things for readers to imagine for themselves what happens. I don't rule out a sequel at some point, but I'd need a strong concept for one, rather than simply continuing the plot threads I've already laid.
It'll also be at least a while before I write another story. While I'm very happy with the way this one turned out, I need a break!
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Also, I shouldn't forget to say, thank you for all the love for this story. It means a lot to me. 
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While, obviously, we all want more (and there is definitely potential for more) I love and respect seeing the (complete) added to the title
I will DEFINITELY be reading this story from start to finish many times in the future
Thank you again for this work of art
I will DEFINITELY be reading this story from start to finish many times in the future
Thank you again for this work of art
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Can't say enough such a great story overall! I'll probably be repeating other comments but I've never been on more of a emotional roller coaster from start to finish! I love how you were able to combine heartfelt, humiliating, and making it all so realistic. I know it's an ENM story but you're story telling abilities made me root so hard for Cam and root for Mia's complete and utter downfall (forget being Ellie's friend she's evil!)
Selfishly I don't like how Mia has this blackmail over Cam's head even though she's Ellie's best friend...I wish she was put more in her place even more than that incident at the pool. Lol but really it's only because you do such a great job of describing the character's personality and I really felt like I knew Mia.
Thank you so much for your writing!!!
Selfishly I don't like how Mia has this blackmail over Cam's head even though she's Ellie's best friend...I wish she was put more in her place even more than that incident at the pool. Lol but really it's only because you do such a great job of describing the character's personality and I really felt like I knew Mia.
Thank you so much for your writing!!!
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While my preference is for ENM, I wouldn’t mind a ENF story involving Mia and possibly Hannah.JustHere10 wrote: Sun Feb 23, 2025 10:42 pm Can't say enough such a great story overall! I'll probably be repeating other comments but I've never been on more of a emotional roller coaster from start to finish! I love how you were able to combine heartfelt, humiliating, and making it all so realistic. I know it's an ENM story but you're story telling abilities made me root so hard for Cam and root for Mia's complete and utter downfall (forget being Ellie's friend she's evil!)
Selfishly I don't like how Mia has this blackmail over Cam's head even though she's Ellie's best friend...I wish she was put more in her place even more than that incident at the pool. Lol but really it's only because you do such a great job of describing the character's personality and I really felt like I knew Mia.
Thank you so much for your writing!!!
With the powerful writing and descriptions BareB4U laid out, I would LOVE to see Cam get some revenge on Mia and prepubescent Hannah
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Agreed!!! But also Bare4U please take that as a compliment to your writing and I understand needing a break after this well thought out story!
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Okay okay!
Just ONE MORE bit of praise.
I deeply appreciate you indulging us (specifically me
) with the course of events.
I feel like a lot of authors on here feel the need to ‘subvert expectations’ if people are guessing the course of events or expressing desires for things to play out (Guilty, I know, but sorry not sorry
)
But with this story, expectations were set and you CRUSHED it when it came to delivering on those expectations.
That’s incredible.
Okay I’ll shut up now.
Just ONE MORE bit of praise.
I deeply appreciate you indulging us (specifically me
I feel like a lot of authors on here feel the need to ‘subvert expectations’ if people are guessing the course of events or expressing desires for things to play out (Guilty, I know, but sorry not sorry
But with this story, expectations were set and you CRUSHED it when it came to delivering on those expectations.
That’s incredible.
Okay I’ll shut up now.
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