The New Rules (Chapter 52 - February 18th, 2025)

[superevil7]

That was an incredible chapter. I'd love to see Noel become a full time Feminudist with how she behaved.

I wrote Noel to just be a one-off character, but if there's a demand I can probably bring her back before the end of the story.

[jojo12026]

To clarify - in the story it is still Friday and the dance is that night? And there is a track meet tomorrow?

[superevil7]

To clarify - in the story it is still Friday and the dance is that night? And there is a track meet tomorrow?

Yes, this is all happening on Friday. The dance is coming up, and the meet is tomorrow.

[SixPathsKeyblader]

I second this need for clarification. While I do greatly enjoy this story, I do feel like the pacing is its one major weakness. It's hard to keep track of the plot when we have the combination of the facts that updates to this story are not frequent/regular, and the fact that the story is paced in a way that drags out a single day into several chapters. I mean no offense to SuperEvil, as I really do enjoy the story. I do just wish however that we could maybe speed up the pacing just a little bit. I mean, we're 52 chapters in, and it has only been about a week or so since the beginning of the story.

I personally feel that a number of chapters have been wasted on things like masturbation (like chapter 50 which was all about Abbie and those girls pleasuring themselves in gym class, or that chapter that was spent entirely on having all the naked girls at Burger Mart pleasuring themselves) or bullying from random girls who have not been significant characters to the story up until now (like Lauren's "friends" from chapter 51 or the aforementioned girls from chapter 50 who coerced Abbie in pleasuring herself to begin with).

@SuperEvil
Everyone has their tastes, and in the end this is your story, but I kind of feel like you put too much emphasis on how horny and wet the girls are, and on orgasms, and stuff like that. You spend whole chapters on it, and this comes at the expense of plot advancement. If it were up to me, I'd rather read a chapter about Abbie (and others) going to the dance and track meet naked, and seeing the community's response to that and the fallout of that, rather than reading a chapter that only covers one class period, and is all about Abbie jerking off in front of her class. Heck, events like the track meet really have the potential to make waves for the story since people from both Abbie's school and at least one other school will be in attendance (this includes parents, students, siblings and other friends/family of students, faculty, etc...). Depending on who and how many people attend, Abbie's (and Lauren's) nudity at the track meet could actually make it onto the news, and this could segway into more widespread interest in (or backlash against) feminudism in the general community. As a result, Susan and Karen would go into overdrive, and Abbie would become a famous symbol of feminudism. I could see Susan doing something like donating all of Abbie's clothes and forcing Abbie to go naked everywhere from now on, so as to hold up her responsibility as the face of feminudism.

Perhaps, some moral/religious groups would fire some backlash at feminudism and start publicly denouncing Abbie and Susan. A sort of war for feminudism may occur (not necessarily a physical war per se). I would love see how this all affects Abbie, her family and even the other feminudist girls/families like Lily, Heather, Gwen, Lauren, Susana, Sam, Hope, etc... It would be great to get a scene of little Madeline going to elementary school naked, and having the younger kids and the elementary school faculty reacting to that too.

Major developments and plot advancements like the above examples are what I would prefer to see more of rather than waiting months between chapters, only to finally get a chapter and just have it be wasted on a single class period where the only thing that happens is some girl (usually Abbie, Lauren, Sam, or some random bully girl of the week) gets cajoled into touching herself and putting on a show for the class.

Of course, I mean this as honest constructive criticism (not to be disparaging). I still do really enjoy the story. I just wish it would speed up so that a day within the story does not translate to a year in real life.

As a side note, I do hope that Lily gets some public nudity exposure at some point too. Lily and Gwen are the only two of the major feminudist girls that have yet to be truly exposed in public.

Abbie, Lauren, Heather, Susana, and Sam have all been naked in several public places (e.g. the mall, the bank, the park, Red Mart, the drug store, in front of the entire school on stage, etc...). Even little Madeline was naked in front of Abbie's entire school for Ms. Honey's presentation.

Lily and Gwen however, have not truly been naked in public. The feminudism meeting at Burger Mart doesn't count since every woman/girl was naked there (effectively making it like a women's locker room, but with the addition of guys) Walking home naked between their houses in the neighborhood doesn't count either since that is just a short little distance where they are most likely not seen by too many people anyway. They need to be in a situation where they are in a truly public place (like the mall or the store), and they are openly singled out as being naked in a sea of clothed people (like how Abbie and the others have been).

[perseus]

I love the focus on the arousal and orgasm! This chapter was wonderful! Some of my favorite parts in this story are the parts where Abbie is naked in class. This story has been a hell of a ride and I can't wait to see where is goes from here!

[jojo12026]

I love the focus on the arousal and orgasm! This chapter was wonderful! Some of my favorite parts in this story are the parts where Abbie is naked in class. This story has been a hell of a ride and I can't wait to see where is goes from here!

That bold sentence is the best. Makes it even better when Abbie is Only One Naked

[superevil7]

Everyone has their tastes, and in the end this is your story, but I kind of feel like you put too much emphasis on how horny and wet the girls are, and on orgasms, and stuff like that.

Thank you for the thoughtful comment! Getting such detailed comments like these are what really motivates me as a writer. I'll be taking your advice into account, I just personally feel like some stories gloss over the fun parts, but it could be that I've swung too far in the other direction. Focusing on the feelings of the girls, mainly Abbie's feelings, is what works for me, but that might not be what everyone wants. I can't say I'll change the style of this story at this point, as it's already approaching the end. I've also already written up to chapter 59. I'm very happy for your feedback, and I hope you continue enjoying the story, even if it's not completely to your tastes.

I love the focus on the arousal and orgasm! This chapter was wonderful! Some of my favorite parts in this story are the parts where Abbie is naked in class. This story has been a hell of a ride and I can't wait to see where is goes from here!

Thank you! I wanted to capture some of the NIS stories vibes, while doing things my own way.

That bold sentence is the best. Makes it even better when Abbie is Only One Naked

I suppose OON is one of those things I've just never gotten into much. I like the idea of girls, as in plural, having to be naked just because they're girls. I hope it's still enjoyable for you, even if Abbie isn't the only one naked.

[destroyer008]

I'd really wish this story would never end. It's one of my favourites and has still so much potential, even after over 50 chapters.

And I have to disagree about the pacing as you are one of only very few writers, who manage to fill that slow story progression with a lot of unique ideas and scenarios. Keep up that style, it is perfect.

[mavfan1]

The more girls that are naked and the more the focus on them cumming their little hearts out for an audience the better!!!!!!

[jojo12026]

Absolutely love the story no matter how many girls are naked!! Especially love where Abbie gets naked in Mr. Rusconis class the first time, Sam goes to Red Mart, Abbie naked at track practice with her trip to Ms. Busters and back to practice. I also had a question about the younger school. With the older siblings starting to go naked, what is happening at Madeline's school, anything? Will we here more about Claire's home life? Any more at Sams house? Just curious, but don't want you to reveal surprises.

I absolutely appreciate you and the other authors on this site for the time and energy and thought you all put into your stories and share them with us. I, for one, hate writing and all associated tasks. You have done an amazing job here and I hope you continue to for a long time. GO ABBIE!!