Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 12 -18 Feb)

[NudeBaG]

“Mia, at Cam’s other side, was also delighted by her first unobstructed look at the whole of his penis. He was indeed totally hairless, as Hannah had told her. He was also, if not quite as tiny as she’d imagined, certainly not the owner of anything to be proud of. He was a naked boy, and therefore of interest to her, but she felt nothing but derision towards him. Ellie deserved much better than THIS.”

Further broken down to this:

“He was also, if not quite as tiny as she’d imagined, certainly not the owner of anything to be proud of.”

Cam is clearly not as ‘underdeveloped’ as Mia might like to think.

Again, if he can pop a boner, that might shut Mia up, but not without still being mortifying

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Fuck!
This is difficult!
I’m so torn!
On one hand, the writing is undoubtedly SUPERB, and works perfectly within the realm of ENM.
No denying that
Cam IS thoroughly embarrassed!

But at the same time, having been using this as a masturbation fantasy, the reveal is *currently* giving me blue balls

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“It’s a shame we don’t have a banana for scale!” she sniggered. Mia snorted back, but Hannah’s joke put a devilish thought in her head. “Maybe not,” she said, “but I’ve got an idea. You’ll like this.”

Cameron swallowed nervously. He was fairly sure that he wouldn’t like it one bit.


In my mind, this implies there MIGHT be some touching in store
I have no idea what Mia has planned, but I’m hoping it backfires

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Also,
I hope my comments don’t come off as ANY criticism of your writing.
The writing is still TOP NOTCH!
Again, I’m not disappointed in the writing AT ALL!
But when it cums to Cameron…
Well, how’s the saying go?
I’m not upset, just disappointed

[NudeBaG]

Okay, I reread the big reveal.
Maybe I was off in my initial assessment.
Maybe Cam’s flaccid dick ISN’T below average after all.
I still want the girls to see him fully erect though, then he really WILL have nothing left to hide
Even if he hasn’t reached the stage in puberty of developing pubic hair, boners are obviously a thing he’s capable of
And with no pubic hair, who knows, his erect penis might actually be impressive

I also clocked the addition of Natalie to everyone’s proximity.
Perhaps the addition of yet another one of Cam’s classmates will SPICE things up

[docknumber]

I just noticed sometimes you’re using Hannah and sometimes Hannie. Is it just a nick name?

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I just noticed sometimes you’re using Hannah and sometimes Hannie. Is it just a nick name?

“Hannie” is probably her nickname, while her actual proper name is Hannah, I’m guessing

[docknumber]

I just noticed sometimes you’re using Hannah and sometimes Hannie. Is it just a nick name?

“Hannie” is probably her nickname, while her actual proper name is Hannah, I’m guessing

Thought the same, just wanted to check if one of the name is used to just tease her or she didn’t like being called of.

[BareB4U]

"Hannie" is an affectionate/familiar nickname, used most often by Mary but also by Cameron (who also sometimes calls her "Han").

It's like Cameron being shortened to "Cam" and Ellie occasionally shortened to "El". Mia's name is short enough already, so she doesn't get a nickname.

Sorry for not engaging more with the conversation following the last chapter, by the way. I love that it's sparked so much discussion. The main reason I've stayed out of it is that I don't trust myself not to give away too much.

[NudeBaG]

"Hannie" is an affectionate/familiar nickname, used most often by Mary but also by Cameron (who also sometimes calls her "Han").

It's like Cameron being shortened to "Cam" and Ellie occasionally shortened to "El". Mia's name is short enough already, so she doesn't get a nickname.

Sorry for not engaging more with the conversation following the last chapter, by the way. I love that it's sparked so much discussion. The main reason I've stayed out of it is that I don't trust myself not to give away too much.

I know.
I hate that I’ve commented so much on this story, it’s just SO WELL WRITTEN
I know I have my own personal preference for the proceedings, but this is YOUR story, so what you say goes!
Still,
No matter how things turn out, NOTHING can dispute the quality of the writing