Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 8 - 1 Feb)

[steam train]

I don’t know about you, but once a story reaches a certain number of chapters and a certain number of characters,
it can get tricky maintaining consistency in tone, character motivations and personalities, as well as events within the story.

This story is a perfect example of how to maintain ALL of that

Loving it!

Totally agree. I have written some long multiple chapter stories and overcoming the above is always a challenge.

[BareB4U]

PART 8: CAMERON TO THE RESCUE

Ellie hoped Cameron was still nearby enough to hear her shout for help. She should’ve known the stripping war would keep escalating, and that she wasn’t immune as a target. Naturally more modest than her friend Mia, Ellie had been masking the shyness she felt about the amount of skin her relatively conservative bikini showed. Now half of the bikini had been taken away from her, and she felt horribly exposed and embarrassed.

She had thrown both her arms across her modest-sized breasts straight away, as soon as Jack and Mark had grabbed her top and pulled it off. She had no doubt the two leering boys had gotten a glimpse of her boobs, but it had been fleeting and they hadn’t gotten a good look at least. “This is way better than stripping that dumb Cameron,” Jack announced. “C’mon Ellie, show us your tits!”

Ellie was afraid of what the two boys would do next. Both were sporting tents in their tight swimming trunks. Jack’s looked somewhat larger to than Mark’s, though the shape of Mark’s small erection was more obvious as it pushed out the front of the material. The sight of them both would’ve been comic in other circumstances.

Another boy sporting a tent was Cameron. He could just make out Ellie beyond Jack and Mark. How dare those bullies strip her like this! He felt protective towards Ellie, but also turned on at the thought of the girl he had a huge crush on being topless. All he had to do was walk over and he would see her! No, he chided himself, he had to help. If he HAPPENED to see Ellie’s breasts in the process of helping her, well, so be it.

Hannah and Abigail had also stopped at Ellie’s shout. Abigail was no longer gloating about having seen inside Cameron’s shorts. Another girl was in trouble, and needed help. Cameron, Hannah and Abigail all looked at one another. Hannah and Abigail both looked down and saw the growing bulge in Cameron’s shorts, before he turned and ran off towards where the shout had come from. Disgusted, they both ran after him. Clearly this boy couldn’t be trusted. Was he going to help the other girl, or join in with the two boys who were tormenting her?

From the deeper water, Mia had watched the tussles as Jack and Mark had first attacked Cameron, then turned on Ellie. She had gasped as she saw the boys strip her friend of her bikini top. Mia wished she could rush to Ellie’s aid when she heard her cry for help, but Mia had her own troubles. Although she had been trying to keep a low profile, several kids in the wave pool had noticed her bared bottom when Mia had swum to the side. Now some of the more intrepid boys were gathering for a closer look. They were mostly younger than Mia, and she was able to intimidate them into keeping their distance with an angry scowl and a raised fist.

This hadn’t stopped the boys who wore goggles ducking under the water, but Mia kept one leg crossed in front of the other and a hand over her naked vulva. The boys were getting a kick out of her nudity, but were unable to see what most interested them.

The two girls were both trapped against the side of the pool. Between them, they wore a complete bikini, but they both felt the absence of the half they were missing, as the boys surrounding them all tried to see what that half would normally be covering.

Mark made a grab for Ellie’s bikini bottoms to strip her completely. She tried to keep back out of his reach, but stumbled and half fell into a sitting position, splashing down into the shallow water. She just maintained enough control to keeping one arm across her front. Sitting down, the water came halfway up her belly. Ellie pulled her knees up to her chest, to hide her boobs better and guard against any further attempts to strip her of her one remaining garment.

Cameron saw Ellie collapse to the floor, saw her looking helplessly at him. Sitting cowering there, her arms crossed over her chest and her legs and the water obscuring her bikini bottoms, she looked as if she was nude apart from the small turquoise band around one wrist. It was like his own situation earlier in the plunge pool, but reversed.

Cameron hadn’t thought what he would do when he arrived on the scene. Jack and Mark were both solidly built, and he didn’t fancy his chances of taking either one of them in a fight. He’d been hopelessly outmatched when he fought both of them a few minutes ago. Luckily for Cameron, he wasn’t alone. Hannah and Abigail had formed and uneasy and unlikely alliance with him. Hannah also wanted to help Mia, the girl she had briefly formed a bond with earlier. Creeping up behind Jack, she tried to grab the bikini bottoms he had tucked through the leg of his trunks.

Sneaking through shallow water was not easy. It sloshed about as she moved. Jack heard her approaching and grabbed her by the wrist before she could seize Mia’s bikini from him. “What do you think you’re doing, you little goth freak?” he roared. “You want to be next? Think I can’t strip you of that one-piece get-up?”

Illogically, Hannah’s first reaction was to take offence at being called a goth. She had never thought of herself that way. She supposed her black swimsuit and blue dyed hair could give that impression. It took a second later to be worried about whether this bully would make good on his threat.

Cameron and Abigail both grabbed Mark around the waist and dragged him away from Ellie. “Get off me!” Mark yelled, but Abigail knew how to bring him down to size. “I see that little dick of yours hasn’t got any bigger since the last time I saw it,” she told him, poking the tent in Mark’s trunks. He flushed angrily, embarrassed at the contact and at being reminded Abigail knew how unimpressive he looked naked. Some of the fight went out of him.

Hannah managed to pull her arm free of Jack’s grip and beat a hasty retreat. He had intimidating her, and she had seen that Mia was also in need of help. Telling herself that was why she was leaving, she strode off into the deeper water and swam over to Mia, attempting to shoo away the crowd of boys gathered around her. Unfortunately, this caused some of them to notice the second half-naked girl over in the shallower water, and they started swimming towards Ellie instead.

Having frightened Hannah away, Jack turned his attention back to Ellie. She stuck her chin up at him defiantly from her sitting position. But Jack was looming over her threateningly, his erection almost at her eye level, and she had no way to escape. He grabbed her arms with both his hands and tried to pull them away from her bare chest to expose her breasts completely.

A reckless fury had taken hold of Cameron. Although he never got on with Hannah, no one was allowed to pick on Cameron’s stepsister except for himself. That was TWO girls close to him who Jack had threatened now, and now he was about to try to molest Ellie. Cameron hadn’t started this stripping battle (Well, maybe he had started this round of it), but he was going to finish it. He marched up behind the larger boy and pulled Jack’s trunks down. With no drawstring, only an elasticated waist, the trunks came down easily and stopped at Jack's knees.

Cameron's action caused several things to happen. Firstly, Jack’s hard penis sprang free of his trunks, almost poking Ellie in the eye. Secondly, Mia’s bikini bottoms fell free of where Jack had pinned them and started to float away. Something else fell free too, a piece of bright blue material. It seemed to Cameron that part of Jack’s swim trunks had broken away. He didn’t understand how. The trunks looked intact and Cameron knew he hadn’t torn them, but he didn’t have time to wonder. As Jack, reeling from his sudden exposure, moved to cover himself, Cameron snatched Ellie’s bikini top out of his hand.

On a reflex, Ellie flinched backwards at the unexpected sight of Jack’s genitals suddenly springing out right in front of her face. While this wasn’t the classmate's dick she most wanted to see, it was worth seeing nonetheless. A thick bush of dark curly hair surrounded a decently sized penis and testicles. Although, Ellie reflected, Jack's package wasn't as impressive as the bulge in his swimming trunks had led her to believe.

Jack hurriedly covered his dick with one hand and tried to pull his trunks back up with the other. With his erection, he was only able to cover the end of it, leaving half of his shaft and all of both balls on display. Ellie started to laugh at the sudden turnaround of fortunes. Abigail and Mark noticed too, and paused in their fight to watch this new development. Mark looked worried. Abigail’s jaw dropped wide as she stared at Jack’s revealed boy parts.

Cameron wasn’t finished yet. With his foe off balance, he grabbed Jack by both shoulders and pulled him backwards to the ground. Jack’s trunks were still around his knees and he toppled over. He instinctively put both arms out behind him to cushion his fall, exposing himself fully once again to the two boys and two girls around him. Cameron saw Jack’s privates for the first time. He was disappointed to notice Jack had a full bush of hair where he himself was still bald, but was pleased at least that Jack didn’t seem to be noticeably bigger erect than he was.

It was Abigail who solved the mystery of how big Jack seemed in his swimming trunks versus out of them. The blue material Cameron had seen fall away floated past her and she picked it up. “It’s a sock!” she declared. “Bully boy here has been stuffing his trunks with a lycra sock!” This caused almost everyone to laugh, even Mark, who had been smarting at Jack’s previous comments about his own dick. Jack did not laugh. He was blushing hard and trying to pull his trunks back up while lying flay on his back in the water. The tip of his penis poked up just above the surface, and the rest of his genitals remained clearly visible, now shown to be of no more than average size.

Ellie entered the fray. She had had enough of cowering meekly. Jack had been brought down to size (Heh!) by Cameron and no longer scared her. Keeping her arms tightly crossed over her chest, she got up and walked over to where Jack lay. She hooked one of her feet inside Jack’s trunks and pinned them to the floor, leaving him unable to pull them up. She looked down judgementally at the naked bully. Jack covered himself sheepishly with both hands. The tables had turned.

Watching from a short distance away, Mia REALLY wanted to go over there now that Jack was naked. She didn’t feel anything special for the boy, but she fancied him a lot more than she fancied that wimp Cameron. That bulge in his trunks had been quite a sight. Mia relished the thought of getting a close look at what Jack had, especially since he had seen all of her own body. Neither she nor Hannah could see clearly from where they were, but Mia had seen her own swimsuit fall away when Cameron had pantsed Jack, and saw a flash of bright pink floating off to shoreline of the shallow beach pool.

“Hannah!” Mia said urgently. “My bikini’s floating away! Please go and fetch it!” Hannah looked and saw what Mia had seen. She quickly gave chase after the escaping swimsuit, leaving the bottomless Mia to fend for herself.

A crowd of other kids was beginning to gather around the battling teens as Hannah splashed past them. Boys had been attracted by the slim ginger-haired girl standing there in only a navy-blue bikini bottom. Girls had been drawn in by the stocky naked boy at her feet. Hannah was unable to get a clear look at Jack’s goodies, (more’s the pity, she thought), but she couldn’t stop. She needed to retrieve Mia’s swimming costume before anyone else got to it.

She reached it and bent down to pick it up as it washed up at the edge of the pool, just before a curious small boy bent down to pick it up himself. Wait a minute, Hannah thought, that boy is Chris! She straightened up and found herself face-to-face with her stepmother. “Ah, Hannie, I’m glad I found you,” Mary said. “Chris here is getting tired, so we’re getting out and getting changed. Can you come with me, please?”

Hannah glanced at the clock on the wall. “But our time’s not up yet. I need to…” she began, urgently needing to get back to Mia. “I know,” Mary said. “You and Cam don’t need to get out yet. We’ll meet you back home. But I do need to give you some towels to put in your locker, unless you both want to drip dry. Once we’ve done that you can get back in the water until your time's up.”

“Okay,” said Hannah, “I’ll come with you in a minute. I need to get this back to my friend first.” Hannah held up Mia’s bikini bottoms. “She’s half naked over there!” Mary looked at the neon pink swimwear, then over to the nervous-looking girl on her own at the deep end of the pool. She recognised the girl who had pantsed her son at the end of the slide earlier. Well, well, that was poetic justice, she thought. “No,” she said slyly, “your friend will be fine for a couple of minutes. Maybe this will teach her to tie her bikini better in future.”

Hannah was shocked at her stepmother’s callousness. “She did tie it! Cameron…” she protested, but Mary interrupted her again. “Never mind Cameron. You’re the one with the locker key,” she told Hannah, deliberately misunderstanding. She suspected Cam might have had a hand in the pink bikini girl’s state of undress. That wasn’t quite what she’d had in mind when she had told him to stand up for himself, but so be it. She looked over to where Cameron, Ellie and Abigail were gathered in a huddle with a few other kids. “Besides, your brother seems to be busy.”

Mia could only watch in distress as she saw Hannah disappear with the bottom half of her swimsuit into the changing village.

Jack was also about to lose his swimsuit completely. A group of kids, boys and girls, had surrounded him and were pinning him to the floor. Three of them were trying to pull his trunks the rest of the way off his legs. Jack spat and cursed at them, but he lost a lot of his fear factor when he was lying naked and helpless. Mark had abandoned him, deciding discretion was the better part of valour and slinking away before the mob decided to strip him too. He couldn’t face that happening twice in one day.

Abigail had joined in the attack on Jack, and took the chance to grab a feel of his hard dick. She was enjoying herself enormously. This was SO much better than the peek she’d had of the hairless, flaccid thing in Cameron’s shorts. Cameron himself had stepped back to let the group of kids have their fun while Jack shouted in impotent rage.

He found himself standing shoulder-to-shoulder with Ellie, watching the scene. Cameron’s breath quickened at their proximity and Ellie’s near-nudity. Only her arms hid her breasts from him. He wasn’t the only one to notice either. While most of the kids around them were engaged with tormenting Jack, a few boys were looking eagerly in Ellie’s direction.

“Um, Cam,” she said to him, blushing. “Can I have my top back now?” Cameron looked at the tube top he held in his hand and blushed too. “Oh sorry!” he said, as if only just realising he was still holding it. He handed it over to Ellie. She took it with one hand while keeping her other arm tight across her chest. Cameron was hypnotised by what little he could see of her breasts above and below that arm.

“Erm, please can you stand in front of me, so those other boys can’t see me while I put it back on?” Ellie asked him. Cameron moved in front of her, his heart racing. He was close enough to see Ellie's pulse beating too, and could feel her breath. Ellie looked him in the eye, seeing the hunger there. She suppressed a nervous giggle at the intimacy of the moment and Cam's desire for her. “The other way around, dummy,” she told him. Cameron blushed again. “Sorry!” he said again, and turned his back to her.

He saw the lustful faces of the other boys in front of him as they tried to peer around him to see Ellie. He felt and heard her movements as she relaxed her arms away from her chest and started to pull her bikini top back on. Cameron tried to resist. He really, REALLY did. But good intentions only go so far, when you’re a horny 13-year-old boy and the attractive 13-year-old girl you’re in love with is standing topless and baring her breasts immediately behind you. He couldn’t help himself. Without meaning to, he turned his head and glanced back over his shoulder at Ellie.

She froze, mouth open in shock. Looking over his shoulder, Cameron could only see Ellie’s left-hand side, but it was enough to send blood pumping around his body, and to one part in particular. His gaze fell to one perfectly rounded, smooth breast and a small, pink nipple standing erect from the middle of it. Cameron thought he had never seen anything more beautiful in his life.

Ellie’s hurt expression forced his eyes upward again. She frowned. “Eyes forward, soldier!” she ordered him sternly. Cameron snapped his head back around to face the other way again. A couple of the other boys were sniggering at him. Cameron ignored them. How could he have been so stupid! He had come to Ellie’s rescue, defended her honour against Jack and Mark and these other boys. He’d imagined her gratitude, how she might thank him for saving her. Now, with one idiotic move, he had ruined all that. He was still processing the sight of that beautiful breast, but alongside that he was processing the pain in Ellie’s eyes. He was badly shaken by that. She had trusted him and he had been nothing more than another voyeur.

He hoped with every beat of his pounding heart that he hadn’t just blown his chances with Ellie for good.

[Typicknight11490]

What a great chapter can’t wait for the next one

[NudeBaG]

FUUUUUUUUCK!
Fantastic writing!
Things really ARE ramping up all around!
Cam might indeed be bigger than we thought
LOVED the exposure of the bullies, as well as the mini-truce between Cam and Hannah!
I doubt Cam is out of the woods yet, still hoping for a naked tussle with Mia and full exposure and cumuppance in front of Hannah AND Ellie!
LOVE that Cam turned out to be the bigger man though.
But this IS an ENM story after all…

[Kaya]

[docknumber]

Great story. Loved the teasing you’re building up with each episode.

Looks like Ellie will no longer help Cam for breaking her trust. Now that his mom left the pool area, there is no one to save Cam from his upcoming embarrassment.

[Loksa]

[NudeBaG]

Oh, Cam
Why?!
Poor, dumb boy.
Despite coming to the rescue, he immediately fucks up.

You maintain the tease perfectly.
But after seeing Ellie’s boob, I have a feeling Cam will be sporting quite the tent in his loose trunks.
Who will remove them?

Even though Cam has shown some chivalry here, I imagine (and hope) he’ll end up showing something MORE than chivalry

[steam train]

Another great chapter. I was chuffed about the sock … I guessed that correctly in advance

Cam is now left standing directly in front of Ellie. He has just peeked at her naked breast and she does so much want to see what Cameron has. Fair is fair!

In that position it would be relatively easy for Ellie to pants him from behind and fuck around and try and see what he has been hiding!