NudeBaG wrote: ↑Tue Jan 28, 2025 9:29 pm
I know it’s only been 4 days, and you can’t rush art AND the tease is probably going to continue for a bit longer, but…
I seriously can’t wait for this to continue.
Current favorite ongoing story here
As well as one of my favorite authors here
Your wish is my command! (Also, that much flattery will get you everywhere.)
I am trying to keep up the pace of a new chapter every four days. I don't have as much writing time as I'd like, and I'd rather get it right than rush it. I can't promise to stick rigidly to that schedule, but I will do my very best.
Bobbing in the waves at the deep end of the beach pool, Hannah saw Cameron’s two classmates walking towards the pool alongside two boys she didn’t recognise. Cameron wasn’t with them, and she wondered where he was. Abigail, treading water next to her, tapped Hannah on the shoulder and pointed to the shorter of the two boys. He looked unsure of himself. “That’s the little-dicked guy whose trunks we got earlier,” Abigail said, sniggering.
Hannah studied the bulge in the front of the boy’s trunks as the group drew nearer. Indeed, it didn’t look like he was packing much there. It seemed smaller than the bulge she’d seen in Cameron’s briefs earlier that afternoon. The dark-haired boy standing next to him, on the other hand, was sporting quite a sizable package, if the much bigger bulge in the front of his bright blue trunks was anything to go by.
“What about him?” she asked Abigail. “I’d love to see what’s in those trunks! Should we try to get him next?” Before her friend could answer, a familiar voice muttered from behind them, “Just like I said, perving over boys in their swimsuits!” Cameron swam up alongside Hannah, also watching the approaching group, although his own attention was on the two girls. They were apart from each other, separated by the two boys walking in between them. That was unusual, Cameron thought.
He looked particularly closely at the knots holding together Mia’s pink bikini. He was glad he had seen them coming this way. He remembered Hannah telling him once about the beach pool being an ideal spot to try to strip other kids while they were distracted by waves and keeping still in the water. He would get only one shot at this. The knots holding Mia’s skimpy outfit together looked too well-tied to simply pull undone, he thought, having just recently tied a good, tight double knot in the string of his own swimwear. Hannah rolled her eyes at him. "Yeah, like you're not gawking at those girls you like?"
The four teenagers, Ellie, Jack, Mark and Mia, jumped into the waves together and gathered in a tight circle. They didn’t seem to have noticed Cameron's presence yet. “Hey, Han, can I borrow the locker key for a minute?” Cameron asked his stepsister. A bit surprised at what he might need from their locker, but unable to think of a reason to refuse, Hannah slipped the key from around her wrist and handed it to him. He ran his finger along its jagged edge. “Thanks,” he said, ducked underwater and was gone. “Your stepbrother is weird,” Abigail told Hannah. She had to agree.
Cameron was an excellent swimmer. Despite the currents caused by the wave machine, he was able to hold his breath and swim towards Mia like a shark closing in on its prey. An eye for an eye, he thought. He wouldn’t usually damage someone else’s property like this, but Mia had damaged his dignity, so she had brought this on herself. Cameron let his legs sink so that he was stood on the pool floor, which brought him eye-level with Mia’s bikini bottoms. Her attention was on the other two boys and Ellie. Among all the other bodies around them in the pool, she didn’t pay any attention to one more right behind her.
Mia bobbed gently in the waves, using only her arms (and a certain natural buoyancy up front) to keep her head and shoulders above the surface. Cameron tested the edge of the key again to be sure of its sharpest point. Then he gently tugged the string on the right-hand side of Mia’s bikini bottoms outwards just enough to slip the key inside without touching it against her skin, and cut sharply down with it.
It had the desired effect. The string cut in two just before the knot. Feeling something going wrong with her swimwear, Mia gasped. She looked down and reached down to secure it, but this time it was Cameron who was too fast for her. No longer held together on her right-hand side, Mia’s bikini bottoms were flapping loose in the water. Not even stopping to get a peek at what lay within, Cameron grabbed the triangle of material covering her backside and dived further down with it to Mia’s left.
Mia shrieked as she felt her bikini pulled away from her hip and down her left leg. It was a sound Ellie had never heard her make before. “What’s wrong?” she asked her best friend. Mia looked shocked, but couldn’t reply. She was too preoccupied with frantically kicking underwater to stay afloat while she reached down to try to fix what was happening to her swimming costume. Jack and Mark looked confused by her behaviour too.
It was Cameron who provided the answer, surfacing a metre away from their little circle. He had succeeded in getting Mia’s bikini bottoms off over her foot. He brandished them over his head, just like she had done with his swimming shorts earlier. “Now who’s not tying their swimming cossie properly?” he taunted her.
Jack and Mark looked at what Cameron was holding, then at Mia. As one, they dunked their heads underwater. Mia shrieked again. Cameron dunked down too, not having yet had a look at his classmate’s newly uncovered lower body. Now Mia was surrounded by three boys, circling her, all trying to get a close-up view of the feminine secrets between her legs.
Mia was out of her depth, figuratively and literally. She needed to keep moving to stay afloat, so wasn’t able to cover herself properly at the same time. How had this day gone so wrong for her? She resorted to shouting at the boys to keep away and tried to push their heads away whenever they got near, but it wasn’t doing much good.
Beneath the water, as Mia thrashed around, Cameron marvelled at the sight of her rounded mons, so different from the lumpy boy parts he had in the same place on his own body. One of those boy parts was getting lumpier as he admired the thick lips between Mia's legs. They were divided by a neatly-trimmed line of thick, dark hair running vertically between them. Though it was bushy, Mia's hair didn’t entirely obscure the slit running beneath it, her most secret treasure. Cameron was looking at an actual, real life girl’s vagina! Not just any girl either, but one of his own classmates!
Mia’s movements, and the pressing need to come up for air, meant Cameron was unable to study her body closely or for long. Around him, Jack and Mark were also enjoying the show. Mia had to keep facing each of them in turn to fend them off, meaning the three boys saw her from the front and back, at all angles. Red-faced and humiliated, she continued shouting at them to get away, but it was no good.
Watching from a few metres away, Hannah was angry for several reasons. She was annoyed at her stepbrother having more success in the stripping game than she herself was having. She was furious at having been tricked into handing him the key to use as a knife. She was also outraged that Cameron had chosen her new friend as his victim. She should’ve known he’d pick on one of those two girls.
Ellie watched the trio of boys circling around her friend, stunned by the turn of events. She couldn’t deny that Mia had something like this coming to her, but if she felt empathy for Cameron when he was naked in the pool, she felt it even more so when it was happening to another girl. She also wanted to protect her best friend from any further embarrassment. When Cameron came up for air, she told him, “Alright, you’ve had your fun. I think she’s learned her lesson. Give Mia her bottoms back.”
Cameron, however, was jubilant and caught up in the moment. “Hey guys,” he shouted to Mark and Jack, temporarily ignoring Ellie. “Help me get her top off as well!” Mia swore at him. Between the three of them, they could easily strip her naked like this. She made a break for it and started swimming for shallower water, where she could gain her footing and more easily defend herself. This brought her curvaceous bottom to the surface, earning an appreciative stare from all three boys. It drew similar stares from a few other boys watching from further away, some of whom realised for the first time that Mia was naked apart from the skimpy top covering her breasts.
Ellie was shocked that Cameron would go so far, especially as she’d just made it clear that she wanted him not to. But even with her help, Mia would still be outnumbered. What if the boys took to stripping her next? She saw a male lifeguard at the shallow end of the pool. He looked tall and muscly and would be able to deal with misbehaving thirteen-year-olds. “I’ll get help,” she told Mia, and started wading towards the lifeguard.
Mia however, wasn’t entirely helpless. She reached shallower water she could stand in. As Cameron, Jack and Mark closed in, she put her back to the pool wall, crossed one leg in front of the other to hide her vulva as much as possible, and folded her arms across her chest to guard her bikini top. Even in a compromised position like this, she also had her force of personality and the knowledge that boys generally liked to please her.
“Jack,” she said evenly, regaining some of her composure, “are you really going to side with this jerk instead of me?” She indicated Cameron. “You’ve seen all of me.” She knew the truth of that would cause her to freak out when she thought about it later, but for now she kept her voice steady. “Don’t you think Cam deserves to be punished for picking on a poor, defenceless girl like me?” She put on a mock helpless expression.
Mark and Jack looked at each other. Cameron didn’t like the way this conversation was turning. “C’mon guys, don’t you want to get her all the way naked?” he asked. Mia outbid him and sealed the deal. “I’ll make it up to you,” she told Jack, forcing herself to uncross her legs briefly and reveal her most private area to him again. Jack leered at her then shook his head at Cameron. “Nah, she’s right,” he said. “We’re good.”
“Yeah,” Mark piped in, “we’ve seen her tits already.” This was news to Cameron, who wanted to know more, but was forced to back up as the other two boys advanced threateningly towards him. “Thanks for the sight of her snatch though,” Jack added. “But like I said, she’s right. It’s not nice to pick on girls.” Mark continued to follow his friend’s lead. “I think he’s about to find out what happens to boys who do,” he suggested. “I think he is,” replied Jack.
Cameron turned tail and ran, as well as anyone can run in shoulder-deep water. If he could make it to the shallows ahead of Jack and Mark, he could pick up speed and get away from them. Ellie, heading parallel in the same direction, saw he was in trouble and gave him the same promise she had given Mia. “I’m getting help,” she told him, although she noticed Cameron was still clutching Mia’s bikini bottoms. He would have to give those back straight away, she thought. She saw Mia at the side of the pool. At least she was no longer the centre of attention.
Cameron was pulling ahead of his pursuers. If he could get away from them, this could work out well for him, he thought. He had half of Mia’s bikini, and a locker key. He could play out the reverse of the scenario he’d previously feared after his own stripping. Mia would have to beg him to get her bottoms back, or leave the pool naked apart from her bikini top, with everyone watching. IF he could get away from Jack and Mark first.
From a distance, Hannah watched these developments with interest. “Come on, I want to see what they’re going to do to Cam,” she beckoned Abigail to follow her.
Cameron reached shallower, knee-deep water and started running properly. Too soon. He tripped, dropping the bikini top and key as he put his hands out to stop his fall. Jack and Mark were on him in an instant, pinning him to the floor. Cameron splashed about in the shallow water, trying to break free.
Ellie reached the lifeguard. “My friends are in trouble with some boys. I need your help,” she told him. The lifeguard saw a commotion, three boys who appeared to be fighting nearby. Probably nothing serious, but he should break the tussle up. He made a move towards them but then caught sight of another problem in the opposite direction.
A small boy in armbands was walking dangerously close to the edge of the main swimming pool. He appeared to be on his own. This was a more urgent problem than squabbling teenagers. A lifeguard’s work was never done. “I’m sorry,” he told Ellie, dashing towards the boy before he fell, “your friends will just have to deal with it themselves.” Ellie, standing there alone, wondered what she was going to do now.
Hannah and Abigail walked up beside the fighting boys. Jack and Mark had managed to turn Cameron over, and he was now lying on his back with his limbs in the air, trying to fight them off while keeping his head above the shallow water. Jack had also grabbed hold of Mia’s bikini bottoms. He tucked them through one side of his swimming trunks for safekeeping, pinned by the waistband and hanging out of the leg hole, down one of his legs. Hannah saw something glinting in the shallow water. She bent down to retrieve the locker key Cameron had also dropped and slipped it back over her wrist. That was the last time she was going to trust him with it.
Abigail was enjoying the struggle. “Get his shorts off!” she shouted to Cameron’s attackers. “NO!” cried Cameron in response. Inwardly he thought, not again! But the other boys didn’t need telling twice. Jack pinned Cameron's arms down while Mark began pulling at the knot securing his drawstring. Hannah’s interest was now piqued more than before. Was she going to see the whole thing this time?
The small boy the lifeguard had spotted happened to be Chris. He stepped off the side of the pool into Mary’s waiting arms in the water below him. She caught him and he laughed as she bounced him gently in and out of the water in her arms. A lifeguard came running up a second later, panting for breath. A rather hunky lifeguard, Mary thought.
She realised he had been running to stop Chris from falling. “I’m sorry,” she told the lifeguard. “Chris here likes to jump in. I was here, waiting to catch him the whole time.” “No problem, ma’am,” the lifeguard told her, having caught his breath and standing up straight. Mary looked up at him from her position in the water at his feet. My, those were baggy shorts he was wearing. She could see all the way up their legs. He seemed to be wearing baggy boxers underneath too.
“I should get back,” the lifeguard said. “There was a girl who wanted me to deal with something.” Mary shifted slightly to her right. Yes, from here she could see right up those baggy boxers too. She stalled for time. “I’m sure whatever it was can wait a moment.” Looking up the leg hole, she could just about make out a thick piece of man meat hanging freely inside. Yum, she thought, but kept her face and voice innocent as she asked him, “While I’ve got you here, can I ask you about swimming lessons for my boy?”
Mary was unaware that her antics were dooming her other son. Mark had struggled for a minute to undo Cameron’s drawstring but, egged on by Abigail, Hannah and Jack, he at last succeeded. Cameron fought back. He saw the triumphant gaze in Hannah’s eyes and couldn’t believe he was about to be stripped for a second time, this time in front of her. Jack continued to pin his arms. He bucked frantically, but to no avail. Mark grabbed the sides of Cameron’s shorts and began to pull them down his hips.
Hannah and Abigail watched spellbound as more of Cameron’s pelvic area came into view, a smooth expanse of milky white skin. Just as Cameron began to give up hope, he was saved once again. “STOP!” shouted Ellie, running up. A whistle blew and everyone’s faces turned. Beside Ellie was the female lifeguard from the earlier incident in the plunge pool. Ellie’s first lifeguard having run off and left her, she had found another. A lustful part of Ellie's brain chided her for passing up another chance to see Cameron's penis by helping him again. He would owe her big time after this, she thought.
Jack and Mark dropped Cameron in the water. He wasted no time in yanking his shorts back up to his waist. The lifeguard regarded him disdainfully. “You again?” she said. “You just can’t seem to keep your shorts on today, can you?” Blushing at this reminder that this woman had seen him fully naked not long ago, Cameron scrambled to his feet. “I’m done with you, you’re on your own,” the lifeguard told him. To Ellie, she said, “Next time only fetch me if it’s a REAL emergency.”
“Wait!” Ellie said, “My other friend…” But the lifeguard was already leaving, disinterested. Ellie despaired. She needed the lifeguard's help in getting Mia's bikini back. She could see her friend over by the wall in the deeper water, trying to look unassuming to the other swimmers around her. Being unassuming was not something Mia was used to doing. Still, she had her bikini top on and looked to be just relaxing in the waves at the side of the pool. No one would know she was naked below the water unless they took a close look, but the longer she was trapped there, the more risk that someone would. Would the two other girls standing near Ellie help? She didn't know them and wasn't sure they would. Ellie eyed the bikini dangling down Jack’s leg, tucked into the waist of his trunks. She wondered how she could retrieve it. Jack and Mark were both glaring at her accusingly, displeased that she had ruined their fun in stripping Cameron.
Cameron was keeping his distance from them both, and failed to notice the angry looks they were casting towards Ellie. He was more preoccupied with re-tying his drawstring. In stepping away from Mark and Jack however, he had stepped very close to Abigail instead, who decided to take advantage of his proximity. She was not about to let the lifeguard’s interruption deny her of the chance she had been looking forward to, to see yet another boy’s privates.
Before Cameron could tie his string, Abigail pulled the front of his waistband outwards and peered inside. She giggled. Cameron, appalled at this latest assault on his privacy, just when he had thought he was safe again, hastily shoved her away. The elastic of his waistband snapped back into place. He quickly tied the drawstring, this time in a TRIPLE knot. He wasn’t taking any more chances with his shorts.
Abigail continued giggling at him. Cameron didn’t know the girl well, but he had seen her before and she was obviously friends with Hannah. The look inside his shorts had been fleeting and he wasn’t sure how much the girl had seen. Judging by her sniggers, quite a lot. This was worse than strangers witnessing his boy parts. Hannah had seen it happen too, and her friend would surely share the details of however much she had gotten a glance at.
“What did you see just then?” Cameron demanded nervously. Abigail simply laughed harder. “Nothing much!” she cackled evilly. She took Hannah’s hand and led her away back to the deeper water. The show was over now. Hannah allowed Abigail to lead her, but was also curious to know the answer to her stepbrother’s question. Cameron splashed after them. “C’mon,” he insisted, “Tell me how much you saw!” The uncertainty was killing him, but it was an uncertainty that would remain unresolved for him.
“Cameron, HELP!” He suddenly heard Ellie shout from the shallow water he had just left. Halted by her cry (and her use of his full name), Cameron gave up chasing Abigail and Hannah. He realised he had been ignoring Ellie terribly and now she needed his help. He couldn’t see her at first. She was somewhere behind Jack and Mark at the side of the pool. They were crowding around her, stood with their backs to Cameron, and were obviously the cause of Ellie’s distress.
Cameron felt his dick make a familiar twitch inside his shorts as he realised the extent of the peril his favourite girl was in. In addition to Mia’s pink bikini bottoms hanging from his trunks, Jack held in his hand a familiar-looking, navy-blue bikini top.
Last edited by BareB4U on Wed Jan 29, 2025 12:03 am, edited 1 time in total.
Fucking hell!
You’re driving me INSANE with this!!
Now both Ellie AND Mia are semi stripped?!!!
And Hannah’s friend has now seen Cam’s goods?! (presumably soft)
Okay…
Next chapter, I say make a fight between Mia and Cam.
EVERYTHING IS EXPOSED!
Ellie and Hannah FINALLY get to see Cam completely naked, aroused and embarrassed!
He deserves it.
As much as Mia deserved payback, blatantly going against Ellie’s wishes deserves punishment…
Hopefully, she likes what she sees
Just a thought, and NOT trying to steer the narrative, as I’m sure what you have planned will deliver, but could Mia possibly use what Mark and Jack have seen as sort of ‘more to come currency’ IF they assist in stripping Cam?
2 stronger boys should be able to render Cam nude with ease.
Though,
I still love the idea of Mia and Cam getting into a tussle, and her, once again removing his shorts- this time in clear view of Ellie and Hannah!
Plus, if Mia has both of Cam’s hands occupied with her own, then he’ll be unable to cover anything if Hannah gets his shorts down/off
Also, still going strong with the budding romance between Cam and Ellie, but it seems Cam might just be a dumb boy after all.
If he isn’t careful, he might screw things up with her before they even begin
I like the free for all battle over the swimsuits. There are three boys and three girls involved, and everyone's goal is to get somebody stripped.
If a boy gets stripped by boys it doesn't bother me none.
At some point a Lifeguard is going to yank some poor kid out of the water, and that kid will have nothing on...but which one will it be?
Loving the ongoing speculation. All of your anticipation for the next chapters is great motivation for keeping me writing.
The narrative isn't completely un-steerable. I've been changing a few plans as I've gone along in reaction to feedback, but my overall outline for this story has always been fixed pretty firmly. About as firm as Cam gets when he thinks about Ellie.
Some of the ideas here are much closer to what's going to happen than others. Obviously I'm not going to tell you which...