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[EddieDavidson]

It's going to be chapter 20 before you find out how Julia gets on board/if she does. However, i will say that's a great idea, and could have been useful.

The next big hurdle for me will be how to break it to the parents once all siblings really are onboard.

It will be anti-climatic to have the parents agree too easily. "We are nudists too! great!"

So, there will need to be some hurdle or twist that won't be seen coming a mile away.

[EddieDavidson]

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[Somebody]

You have so damn many ideas, I'm jealous. I think it's fine if you want to post multiple stories at the same time. This place is just not that crowded. As for the twist with the parents, I think it would be funny if they had an incest kink, but don't want to actually promote it in real life, so they're watching this and getting really titillated and wondering if anything will happen.
Interesting chapter, it's neat to see something outside of the house. Especially when that involves giving a bunch of weirdos a chance and getting to know them. That is extremely heartwarming.

[EddieDavidson]

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[student]

I'm going to need to write a program to keep track of all the new names! That's not a bad thing, but will Dove intrude into the Sweeney Family nudism because Dove is sick already of the fake high school games?

If Julia turns out to be a martial arts master and trains her brothers to defend themselves, there could be a scene where Billy Parker keeps on provoking Trent and Trent uses the excuse that if he starts a fight, his sister will kick Trent's ass. That should push Billy over the edge--but at the end of the year after Billy becomes a less valuable player. A bad habit when at the top of the social order is slacking off. Running with Sydney at night is going to improve Trent's speed and endurance.

I would like this story to continue to the end of summer, when Sydney leaves for college--but this is Eddie Davidson's story told his way.

[Somebody]

I think you misunderstood me a bit. I was saying it would be interesting if the parents happened to just have that fetish, but never expected to actually mix it with real life, and tried to raise the kids normal. Like they never even thought about their own family doing it, just fictional ones. And then all of a sudden here is all of their kids wanting to be nudists, and talking about how it's not necessarily sexual, and suddenly all those ideas are coming back.

I think it would actually do the opposite at least initially, and make them reject the idea of nudism. And in the process of asking why, the secret might come out. After all, the idea that you can just be naked and it's not sexual is similar to the idea that you can just have a fetish and not engage with it in real life. But just knowing that the parents are into kinky stuff would make the situation a little more interesting.

[EddieDavidson]

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This guy "Somebody" trolled the crap out of me on this story, I am sure I wasn't the first, won't be the last, but not interested in staying here and having to "Take it" from someone whose only power in life is spreading his feces all over my story so other readers have to see his negative nancy nonsense.

Fixitman, most likely same guy, or afflicted with the same incel "Bra, that's my free speech, It was positive feedback, I am positive your story sucks"

[student]

No, Julia cannot be serious for just a moment. Sarcasm is a defense mechanism. At last we get to hear Julia speak more than a sentence.

What is Julia defending herself from? Will we find out by Chapter 20 or will it take longer?

Guess I'll need to stay tuned. It does look like Julia would be on-board with family nudism, someplace where she could be herself without being on guard at all times. Constant sarcasm tells me that Julia is afraid. Or I could be seeing something that isn't there.

[Somebody]

Julia is adorable. I'm sure you will think of something great with the parents when you get there.