-Decided I will make this thread for the third part, but will put updates in here from now on, so check for new parts if you're interested.
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.-Feel like there's something about the style of my writing that's a little hard to read, but I don't know how to fix it.
Chapter 9 – The truth hurts
Mona stared at the first card with her mouth open. Large letters on it proclaimed “Hi, my name is Mona Slater. I want to be a cheerleader so bad I’ll do anything, even prance around outside in my underwear.”.
Mona was still there staring at the other girls uncertainly when Ashley signalled to stop the camera. “Come on Mona. Remember I’m giving you a chance here. When I start the camera again I want you reading confidently, or this is over!”, Ashley paused to let it sink in, “We have to know you trust us, and then we’ll delete it straight after.”.
With that Cindy re-started the camera, and Mona stuttered into life. She read the first card as confidently as she could thinking “how silly I’m being when they’re going to delete it”. The other girls of course could barely contain their smirks as the naive girl gave them more material toward her downfall.
Mona’s confidence grew until the third card. “I’m a dumb blonde...unlike Ashley...s-so dumb in fact that I don’t realise when I’m being tri...”, Mona stopped mid-sentence not understanding.
Finally Ashley’s friends could hold the act no longer and burst out laughing. Ashley just grinned in satisfaction as she prepared for the moment she was waiting for, to shatter the cockiness she projected onto her victim.
“...tricked into becoming our play thing.” Ashley sang the end of the card for Mona, her eyes stared at the cute half naked girl hungrily. Mona couldn’t quite believe the situation, she waited patiently for them to explain the joke.
A minute passed before Ashley broke the silence “God you’re dumb, did you really think we were going to let you in to cheerleading?” she giggled. “Our standards are higher than that! But we sure are going to be spending quite a lot of time together”.
Mona didn’t know what was going on, but she’d had enough. “I don’t know why you girls are being horrible and I don’t have to put up with this!”. She stood up, fists clenched, intending to call her mother to pick her up, but Ashley’s goons pushed her straight back down onto the couch “I think you better see this first” Cindy whispered in her ear.
Chapter 10 – The ultimatum
Jenny cast the videos from her phone the to TV, and to Mona’s shock; up pops her blindfolded face.
For the next 15 minutes the girls forced Mona to keep watching her humiliation unfold on screen. Occasionally they paused to point out their favourite parts of the nights activities, or to make rude remarks saying “bet that boy won’t forget that view of your knickers” or “you look so cute blushing in your underwear, wonder if your tits turn red too”.
Mona sat crying from the betrayal of the girls she’d trusted, mascara stained tears running down her cheeks. The worst came when she saw herself confidently reading the cards at the end, anyone would think she was a willing participant if it were edited!
Mona suspected where this was going when Ashley once again piped up. “Ok listen up bitch. We don’t like you, and we’re going to be teaching you a lesson for trying to make us look bad”.
Mona tried to defend herself. “I never trie..”.
But Ashley cut her off with a slap to the face. “If I hear one more word from you before I’ve finished, you’ll regret it”.
“We’ve decided you need to be made an example of. You are going to become our property. You will do everything we till you to, in school and out. If you don’t, we will post these videos to everyone at school, to your parents, on the internet. Then we’ll use our influence to make your life hell”.
“You have 5 minutes to completely agree, or we send.” Mona attempted to kick her shell-shocked brain into gear as Mona dropped another bombshell, “Oh by the way, those forms you signed earlier? They said we had the rights to use any photo or video we take of you, any money made from them, with your full consent”.
Ashley was over the moon with glee watching her victim torture herself, this couldn’t be going much better.
When the time was up she looked to Mona “I guess I’m sending them all then” she gave the nod to Jenny who started to select people to send the videos.
“No wait! I..I agree..I think...I agree completely, please don’t send them” Mona stuttered, grabbing toward the phone. Her life as she knew it hanging in the balance.
Jenny calmly pocketed the phone winking at the other two as she pushed Mona into their arms. “Excellent, this is going to be an exciting time ahead, for us anyway. I think it’s time to get ready for bed.”
Chapter 11 – Thinking of chapter titles is hard
The four girls were upstairs when they heard Ashley’s parents arrive home, Ashley told her accomplices to do some “documenting” while she went and talked to them. One girl told Mona to take poses while the other girl snapped away more incriminating evidence.
First they told her to stand with arms away as they got pictures of her body and face, then close ups of her bra and butt. Then the same with her hands on her head, pushing her shoulder-blades out, her full breasts looking like they might pop out any second. The girls told her to smile, and then stick her tongue out for the camera.
Ashley returned as quickly as she could after formalities with her parents, telling them not to disturb the girls for the night. Ashley laughed on seeing Mona there smiling over her shoulder with her butt sticking out. “See! I knew you’d start enjoying it.” she teased.
“You’ll be happy to know though, because I’m a merciful owner, I only have one command for you for tonight.” Ashley started, Mona tensed in a mixture of relief and apprehension.
“I command that you get changed out of your underwear into what you’ll wear in your sleeping bag” Mona looked around, “oh yeh” continued Ashley “I forgot to mention, you’ll be wearing nothing!”.
Mona nodded nervously, “at least they won’t be able to see me in the sleeping bag” she thought.
She started toward the sleeping bag, happy to see the night end, but was stopped once again by Ashley. “Do you think we’d let you off that easy bitch? Move another step and I’m handing the pictures over!”.
Mona froze, “Surely you can't seriously expect me to strip in front of you? Please!”, her face looked a picture, and Jenny was sure to get a shot of her comical expression.
“I am serious, and further questioning of commands in future will come with punishments. Now don’t move another step, legs apart three feet, and you better be stripping in the next five seconds”.
Mona felt defeated as she hurriedly moved her feet apart. She then reached behind and felt the clasp of her bra. She sighed and unhooked the clasp as she heard Ashley say to Jenny “Camera ready, we want to keep a memory of the little slut flashing her boobs for the first time. I’m sure she’ll appreciate that...and the boys later!”.
Mona shuddered as she released the clasp.